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[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 13 ~Overnight Stay~

Aug 01, 2012 01:46

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fic: things we can't control, fic: ongoing, genre: drama, warning: violent, warning: rape / non-con, genre: crime, warning: character death, genre: dark, fic: multi-chapter, warning: graphic, pairing: akame, genre: au, genre: smut, rating: nc-17

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joatex August 1 2012, 07:13:23 UTC

lol I can just imagine them running all over the place trying to get the cops to follow and then trying to lose them. I have no idea why i think that's funny. (^▼^)

Wow Jin has amazing memory to remember that.(o.O) and got to admit even though he steals and stuff he's got some good morals and Kame too. (^_^) I do hope that they start getting along with each other better soon.

Awwww poor Kame. (Ç.Ç) everytime I read about how he feels or about his past it so sad I want to cry. (T^T)

Thanks for the update (n_n)

prettyorianna August 1 2012, 20:27:06 UTC

Well, I figured that since Jin isn't much of a planner, he should have some other skill. That seemed like a good one for an armed robber to have.

But at least it seems the others got away ^_^

Yeah, I'm a bit concerned about revealing some of the stuff in Kame's past that you guys don't know yet... but you guys are really good about sticking around anyway LOL

Expect UP update next. But it won't be up till probably tomorrow night. But I'm hoping to make it a longer chapter.

ext_458754 August 1 2012, 07:32:16 UTC

thanks for the update

prettyorianna August 1 2012, 20:27:53 UTC

You're welcome! Thanks for reading it :)

mae0513 August 1 2012, 07:47:49 UTC

Thanks for the update and sharing~

prettyorianna August 1 2012, 20:28:58 UTC

You're welcome! Thanks for commenting! I love comments.

wonotice August 1 2012, 09:07:54 UTC

Lol Jin is such an idiot XD
Almost announcing the whole gun incident in public -_-
Thanks for sharing ♥

prettyorianna August 1 2012, 20:31:16 UTC

Yeah, and it's not like it's even the first time he shouted or almost shouted about his gun in public. LOL Such an idiot.

jayeanne August 1 2012, 09:15:04 UTC

aww.. I somehow find the scene where jin's giving the pillow to kame so sweet. xD

haha, but I do love the two of them arguing all the time! xD

prettyorianna August 1 2012, 20:35:54 UTC

Yeah. I think Kame wishes Jin wasn't quite so insightful. He's barely met the guy and Jin's figuring stuff out about him at an alarming rate, stuff even Kizuna isn't seeing.

I like them arguing too LOL Or, well, more specifically, I like how they get along perfectly fine or impress each other or something like that and then suddenly they're arguing again. They just go back and forth from not being mad and being mad so easily.