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joatex July 13 2012, 03:28:21 UTC
Awww Kame is so nice for wanting to give his food to someone else. But it's unhealthy too.

Kizuna is such a nice name for Kame's gang since they help each other.

poor Jin and his friend (though i have no idea who it is yet)
Come on Kame help Jin get the money!!! Your a nice person! (^_^)

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prettyorianna July 13 2012, 18:01:10 UTC
Yeah, he definitely needs to take better care of himself.

You'll find out more about Jin's friend (probably a name, too) in chapters 5 and 7.

I think once Jin explains, Kame will be a bit more understanding. But... $40,000 is a lot of money.

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miradawn July 13 2012, 03:36:46 UTC
I don't know why I thought this was another fic at first
Anyway This is getting more and more interesting
Kame really should eat though it's not good for him
and I feel sorry for Jin he is sooo worried about his friend and is stuck in that room
(sigh) I guess I will just have to wait for the next update:|
I can do that though
Great update good luck

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prettyorianna July 13 2012, 18:04:20 UTC
Aw, I hope you aren't too disappointed that it's not that fic :(

Maybe once Jin explains, Kizuna will help him get the money for his friend. But that's such a large amount of money, it'll be hard to get it in a week.

Well, the next chapter will be back to the boy and then after that, back to Jin and Kame :)

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dilovesyunjae July 13 2012, 04:09:49 UTC
Hmmm wat abt maru n ueda?

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prettyorianna July 13 2012, 18:07:07 UTC
I'll tell you right now that Maru is the "bunny" vendor. LOL you'll just have to wait to find out what that means though LOL. And Ueda is not in the gang (at least not now) but is on the streets. You'll meet him eventually, too.

Then there's Yamapi and Ryo, one of whom is a cop and the other a reporter but you'll have to wait to find out which :)

Is okay?

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kame_bemu July 13 2012, 04:14:22 UTC
WOW!!You update fast.Though this chap is not much at elast we got a glimpse of Kazuya's gang.And at least we knew why Jin was so desperate.I guess they both needed the cash.Looking fwd to more!!And I guess we all have our ways of dealing with the dark side of life.I guess yours is writing about them ,while mine is reading about them and getting fumingly mad.*sigh*

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prettyorianna July 13 2012, 18:18:14 UTC
LOL I sort of have to or I'll get distracted by something else and I'll go months without writing. But it works out well, because I do pretty much have all the time in the world. I'm just glad I'm able to fill some of that time with something creative and constructive instead of sitting around drooling at the tv.

Yeah, it never stops amazing me what people will actually do to other people. I can't understand it. Don't we all hurt when even one of us is in pain? We may not realize it but we're all less for it, every one of us.

Eh, I'm getting all philosophical. Well, actually, I like being all philosophical and discussing stuff like the meaning or nature of life, but not a lot of people want those sorts of discussions. So I'll shut up now before I start dissecting reality.

Anyway, I hope Kame and the other members of Kizuna can help Jin. Without giving too much away, Koki will be veeeery motivated :)

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tinna116 July 13 2012, 04:44:41 UTC
oh you grab my attention again girl

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prettyorianna July 13 2012, 18:19:10 UTC
Did I? How silly of me...

LOL

So I take it you like the story so far, then? I'll do my best to update soon for you.

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