[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Prologue

[prettyorianna]

Title: The Things We Can't Control
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[jayeanne]

you write so fast~~ I'm still in the middle of trying to catch up with pirates and here you have a new one already. gaaah.. time, where are you? xD

anyway, please ignore my randomness. xD seriously liking the plot. I dunno but I'm such a sucker for dark fics like this. I just love it when the characters get all fcuked up. sadistic side showing up.. xD

can't wait for more. :D

[prettyorianna]

Yeah, me too. And I was starting to worry it would bleed into Uppity Pirates and I didn't want that because that's supposed to be a cracktastic comedy. Technically, I have yet another plot on hold that I affectionately call "KAT-TUN in a Box" to remember it but three at once is too much LOL. So you get U.P. and this (I'm really excited about the third idea but it's going to be veeeeery difficult to write, even harder than Silent Collision was, so I figure it'll demand all my attention).

Dark fics are the best!

[jayeanne]

now I'm also curious about that 3rd one. >.<

[prettyorianna]

I think when I post chapter one of the third fic, I'll have a riot on my hands. Then, for those who actually stick around for chapter two, I'll have a whole slew of confused readers. And the story will be awesome and you will all be confused at how it's even possible and eventually you'll find out. But it's definitely going to be an interesting thing, both to write and to read.

LOL I've been sitting on this idea since before I started writing With Dragon's Blood. :)

[kaze_no_hisui]

wow~ another interesting story and i'll wait for next update ^^v

[prettyorianna]

LOL hopefully Uppity Pirates will be updated today and then after that I'll get to work straight away on chapter one!

Thanks for commenting :)

[kharisma13]

okay...
the plot is seems so interesting
love this kind of dark fic
especially with all of your warnings
character death, rape, violent
surely will love it!!

*super-S reader*

[prettyorianna]

Yeah, I love the dark fics too :) After a certain point, it becomes difficult to be original but we all still try because we want to purge the darkness in our souls.

Or we just like it LOL

Anyways, will update this one probably tomorrow. Today is for Uppity Pirates :)

Thanks for commenting :)

[romapi]

I think the boy is kame and the man is jin. lol

thanks for this new fic.

[prettyorianna]

LOL you'll have to wait to find out. :)

Anyways, UP update next and then I'll be back to this one. Already have chapter one partially written and also the next UP one partially written as well, so will update soon :)

Always glad you hear from you romapi :)

[deshisoraba]

Ok, I was a bit grumpi about the new fic after UP is still on-going, but I decided to give it a try. And I love it. The prologue was good! I liked it instantly and I think I will be fine reading both fics.

I like dark fics with violence and such...but... should I fall on my knees and beg for KAT-TUN's life? Charcter death breaks my heart.

[prettyorianna]

Nah, I'm still writing UP! I love that story :) It's fun :) I love Jin freaking out about the monkey, and I love the interactions between Tegoshi and Massu, and I'm absolutely loving Junno in this story. Not to mention the awesomeness of Ren!

LOL to be perfectly honest, with this story though, I'm not 100% sure anyone will die from KAT-TUN. But I know me so I put it just in case LOL.

I hope you guys aren't disappointed when chapter 1 cuts away from this to something else entirely and you're left to wonder (for a bit) what happened next.