[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 47 ~Spoons and Office Supplies~

[prettyorianna]

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[joatex]

Yay Kame finally admitted he liked Jin ( in a way, sort of though not really) It seems that Jin is still confused. lol but still it's one step closer. (^_^)

I just imagined Jin running all over the place shouting and I seriously couldn't stop laughing. *still laughing*

This is probably the only time that Kame and Jin talked that they didn't argue at the end. (or at least the only one I can remember)

Thanks for the update.

[prettyorianna]

I'll drag them kicking and screaming into Akakameness if I have to. I swear it to you and me and them and the world.

But I have so many other things that have to happen as it unfolds for the non-romantic plotlines too, so we'll see how that lines up. I have a few pivot points picked out and I know where Jin and Kame have to be at those points, but the in-between is... well, I'm winging it. Literally. I sit and words come out and I just hope the words do what I need them to, take us where we're going. And I don't want the romance to drown out the other plot but I also don't want it overlooked. It's a big deal for the story.

Anyways, I'm happy you liked the update and I have to admit, I'm still laughing at that mental image of Jin.

[miyajima_juri]

thank you soo much for this!!!!!! this made me laugh out loud imagining jin shouting that "long live the resistance!" and seriously, i shouted it while i was reading making my neesan look at me with that expression: areyoufuckingoutofyourmind?

well, kame knows, right? he knows that thing he has for jin, right? not directly but he is admitting it little by little, yes? and jin, well, he and kame does fit together with their own antics and mind set. i admire jin for being able to control things from the last time before kame got back again inside the office. i admire how the mood lightened up almost immediately and how kame just indirectly told jin how much jin means to him and kizuna... this is a really great chapter..... thank you somuch for this.... and yeah, for koki, i'm still for him!!! XD

i trust koki to keep this all to himself and only say a thing in the right time.... as for the problem in kizuna, i hope nishikido-san find the culprit quickly...... and i love the nick name tego-nyan by the way.... ;)

[prettyorianna]

Wish I could take credit for Tego-nyan, but I actually read that Ryo really calls him that somewhere (I think?). So I had just had to use it, which is what gave me the idea of putting that Detective Nishikido is really fond of Tesshi in the first place. He's got one, too, but you'll have to wait for it LOL Or look it up yourself. Unless my beta made that one up; you'd have to ask her if you wanted to know for absolute certainty. (*poke poke* Marika-chan, are you trolling my comments LOL?)

It was nice to get away from gloom and doom for a while. (^_^) I'm very happy with this chapter.

[miyajima_juri]

hmmm... i'm looking forward to it..... :D

[jess_yj]

Yay ~ XD Jin & Kame getting along <3

"koki's plotting"
Jin!! What type of reply was that to Kame's semi confession/apology? Haha

[prettyorianna]

An honest and guarded one? He's trying to find the right thing to say to get rid of the tension, saying what he thinks Kame needs. And, well, it does seem to work.

And Koki is plotting, isn't he?

I think we're starting to see more of who Jin really is. He's not been shown in his best and most normal light, given the problems with trying to save Tatsuya. He's been extra stressed and just... whatever. We'll see more sides to Jin.

Finally, huh? SO much Kame, not enough Jin!

[prettyorianna]

I'm working on the nickname bit, because you just know Jin is and I have to get ahead of him on it so I can write it.

I'm wondering how long it's going to take Jin to realize that he actually doesn't have anywhere in the building he needs or wants to be, that it's after dinner and they're done pulling up pews and his bed is in the office he just ran out of...

But actually, he'll probably want to see Tatsuya before then, so...

[starg8fan_liz]

Great chapter, glad they're figuring things out, be it slowly LOL and they are super silly but so cute ROFL looking forward to the next chap!!<3

[prettyorianna]

Well, I'm between Chain viewings so I figured I'd finish replying to all of the wonderful comments you guys leave for me (seriously love them!)

I think some silliness is exactly what Kame needs in his life. So serious all the time...