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[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 45 ~Hot or Something Like It~

Dec 08, 2012 00:44

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fic: ongoing, genre: tragedy, genre: crime, genre: dark, genre: smut, fic: things we can't control, genre: drama, warning: violent, pairing: junda, warning: rape / non-con, warning: character death, fic: multi-chapter, warning: graphic, pairing: akame, genre: au, rating: nc-17

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Re: SPOT prettyorianna December 11 2012, 00:34:43 UTC

Yeah, okay, Jin might have overreacted. It was just... everything was going one way and then it was like sudden icewater. And then Kame stopped him and... well, you see how it went LOL.

Koki only found Kame because Reina saw him crying and wanted to know why he was crying. So Koki doesn't know they kissed again (in fact, he probably thinks they didn't since Jin specifically said he wasn't going to) or any of it, just that they were talking and now Kame was crying and confused and scared.

And you're getting greedy. You'll get more Akakame when I'm good and ready to give it (assuming they cooperate or sooner if they force my hand again).

jess_yj December 8 2012, 08:15:36 UTC

*hugs Kame* Koki's attempt to comfort him <3

Jin was pretty out of it after that kiss O_O wonder whats going to happen the next time the two of them bump into each other/talk

prettyorianna December 8 2012, 23:41:29 UTC

Koki's awesome! I really like him in this. Besides, I have to have someone keep an eye on the hellions when I turn my back to write other scenes.

Jin's such an idiot sometimes. But I guess it was a very nice kiss (^_^) Before Kame freaked out, anyway.

ext_1263222 December 8 2012, 09:05:01 UTC

hes denying his feeling for jin
and hes confused

i hope things will be better for kame and jin
and i havebt got the idea if junno and maru also have a card

and that was a fast update

i love you really

prettyorianna December 8 2012, 23:44:16 UTC

You'll have to wait and see about Junno and Maru as far as the cards are concerned. Though... six cards, six of them... you know they'll probably get one.

I think he's past denying. I think that's the reason he's so confused about it. We shall see. Broke my heart, though, when he was just begging Koki to make it all better. I cried. Like, literally.

tinna116 December 8 2012, 09:12:53 UTC

thanks...I needed it to read :)

prettyorianna December 9 2012, 03:54:56 UTC

Well, you're welcome then (^_^)

kaze_no_hisui December 8 2012, 09:40:05 UTC

poor kazuya, he is so scare about his own feeling toward jin > < all of it because of what he experinced in the past T_T but hope he can trust jin.......

prettyorianna December 9 2012, 04:03:46 UTC

He doesn't want to like Jin, he doesn't want to want Jin... he thinks that it means there's something wrong with him if he likes Jin. It's sad and one of those foolish beliefs where logically we could say we know better but that are never, ever actually guided by logic.

Though I guess it's understandable, considering his life experiences.

But now that he's past being able to deny the existence of those feelings, maybe he can move forward? Unless Jin does something stupid, I guess LOL