spiral in the springtime (jon/ryan)

[prettykitty_fic]

spiral in the springtime
803 words // PG // jon/ryan
[Prompt: 2lineschallenge 2007]
[A/N: laaaaaaaaaaate.]
[Beta: audreysrev & universeunfold]

i've watched you fly on paper wings halfway around the world
until they burned up in the atmosphere and sent you spiraling down
-rise against, paper wings

Comments

[imntsaying]

\o/

Jon/Ryan FTW!!!

<3

[prettykitty_fic]

\o/ jon/ryan \o/

thanks for reading!!

[imntsaying]

My goodness, thank *you* for writing!!

(runs away to snuggle fic to bosom)

[slashxmistress]

Wow. beautiful.
Things I loved-
Spencer's POV I love when that "best friend" dynamic is explored in fic.

Subtle use of stoned! Panic LOL

Stealth Brendon/Spencer!
and this:
He wants to argue, wants to yell at Brendon too - Don't you remember, Brendon? You're the one who had to sing all his words, his heartbreak and anger, for him. Don't you remember? - which is stupid. Of course Brendon remembers, but he wasn't there for the beginning, and Spencer's taken care of Ryan for so long that he doesn't really know how to turn it off.

yep- best friend-exactly!

Fabulous.

[prettykitty_fic]

ahaha, both my betas were like 'no relevance, but AHAHAHA' at the pass the pipe part :P

and you pretty much pointed out all my favorite parts in writing this piece, so \o/!

thanks for reading, btw :D

[prettykitty_fic]

oh man, i actually started it with the main focus on the pairing, lol, and then it became about spencer instead!

thank you so much for reading :)

[strongplacebo]

This is gorgeous. I love the sense of newness in both the Ryan/Jon and the Ryan/Spencer.

[prettykitty_fic]

thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment :)

[prettykitty_fic]

thank you!!