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Jul 26, 2009 23:50


The Miracles || jiyong/seungri ||

All it pretty much boils down to is the fact that Jiyong has managed to cock-up the only relationship he's ever truly wanted.

and whispers his love in a thousand languages... )

fic: jiyong/seungri

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peaxhie July 26 2009, 14:36:21 UTC
OH MY FREAKING GOD
i think I just died with this one

*insert uncontrollable amount of rantings here about how I'm not a GRi shipper* but dayum' - this fic makes me wanna be

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pretty_yellow July 26 2009, 16:16:16 UTC
a~ don't die. don't die.

i'm so glad you enjoyed the story. and that you gave it a try even though you don't like the pairing!

thank you so much for your lovely words!

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oxygenlove July 27 2009, 16:33:14 UTC
you know you want to
haha~

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parkchoongjae July 26 2009, 14:40:59 UTC
spot

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parkchoongjae July 26 2009, 15:29:44 UTC
THIS IS MADE OF AWESOME. OMG.

his mind a blur of frustration and jealousy and love and broken, broken, broken bones.
^that line~ wow. i love it. it's beautiful, painful and definitely heartbreaking.

“And there wasn’t anyone else there with me, Seungri, and I wasn’t drunk. All I could think about was you though, sweetie. All I could think about was how much I hurt you.”
^and i can imagine jiyong saying that and my heart bled for him. :(

“I know you think I’m lying. I know I don’t treat you right. But I just- Sometimes I just want to hold you.”
^ONE OF THE BEST LINES IN THIS FIC!

MY MOST FAVORITE PART:

“I love you like the sun and the moon.”

And I have my own personal reason for this one. OMG! I love you so much for putting that line it. GAAAAH.

This piece of art is brilliant like your other two (gri fics). FOR SALE is still my favorite but this comes a really close second. <3

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pretty_yellow July 26 2009, 16:19:27 UTC
i was going to write i love you like the sun loves the moon. but i though. jiyong loves seungri like both of them put together /laughs. i'm glad that meant something special to you.

for sale is my favourite also. i think 'cause i had a solid plot for that one, i enjoyed it more. yup.

And gosh! thank you so much for your review. i love detailed reviews with all my heart!!

<3

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whoelse_i July 26 2009, 14:53:31 UTC
the pain..
but it's sweet too..
which is it anyway?
hehehe~
i feel for them~
this is really beautiful~
going to save it for my fav collections!!

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pretty_yellow July 26 2009, 16:20:47 UTC
that's exactly the question i wanted you to ask yourself! /laughs. if jiyong is so in love, why is he so nasty?. i don't even know the answer myself.

thank you so much for your kind words!!

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whoelse_i July 27 2009, 03:40:43 UTC
because ji yong is ji yong~
he is nasty in showing his love to baby..
but that's what makes baby love him too!!
hehehehe!!
nope, thank you for your beautiful fics..
i adore and love them!!
it's becoming my inspiration to write a GRi fic like you and the others someday in the future~
fighting!!

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minn_rox July 26 2009, 15:07:48 UTC
SPOT!!

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minn_rox July 26 2009, 15:13:04 UTC
OMG....It's so freaking SAD!!!!

dAMN..its been a while since i read sad GRI..
i love it but the pain and the hurt is killing me..
why is it so hard for ri to believe dat ji's love him?

mang....you are SO GOOD..with words..with expressing emotions..i feel every emotions dat ji and ri felt.. dat awesome...

ily..as always..tysm for writing this..

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pretty_yellow July 26 2009, 16:24:40 UTC
i think seungri's skeptical because to him it looks like jiyong just says he loves him to see what happens, to see what others say about it. and because seungri actually loves jiyong this is hard for him. /smiles.

you made me blush with your comments!! thank you so much.

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prpldrkrse July 26 2009, 16:03:05 UTC
God...

It's so beautiful, sad but sweet in the same time.. How Ji and Ri loves each other but yeah.. Ji acts like himself and makes Ri doesn't believe in his love.. but the end is just lovely<3

I just hate it. I hate that I make you cry. I hate that you won’t let me kiss your falling tears, kiss your lips and lay you down to sleep. I only want to care for you. But I can’t even do that. All I do is harm.
I really love this part.. it makes me cry though ;____;<3

I love this as always<3

Thank you very much for sharing :D and bookmarking it again<3

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pretty_yellow July 26 2009, 16:26:52 UTC
sad but sweet in the same time.. How Ji and Ri loves each other

that's exactly what i wanted you to feel! because they're both in love, but they're both struggling to show it. i'm so happy with your comment!!

a~ i send you so much love for you wonderful review!

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