Blue with flecks of gold underneath the cloudy sky

[pretty_in_mango]

the bit of sky
peeks through the trees
but all I see are school days from long ago
and clouds.

dizzy dizzy
describing 4 square and
summer afternoons

juicy raindrops fall
spluttering the memories
we jump off the rocks
and run home

.....nostalgia for another day

Comments

[___sodapop]

spluttering? lol.

[civman2]

and nostalgia? Does she ever stop making up words?

[pretty_in_mango]

v. splut·tered, splut·ter·ing, splut·ters
v. intr.

1. To make repeated or sporadic spitting sounds.

nos·tal·gi·a- Pronunciation Key (n-stlj, n-)
n.

1. A bittersweet longing for things, persons, or situations of the past.

so there.

[___sodapop]

can't you just say splattering? that sounds more like a real word. :)