fic: can't stay away

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can't stay away
PG. Bobby/B.I. 5438 words. AO3 mirror.

Hanbin is mad at Bobby. It's not the end of the world, but it's not fun, either.

Comments

[uurhae]

YOUR WRITING IS MAKING MY FACE IS DOING THAT DUMB THING AGAIN

THE DUMB "I CANT STOP SMILING BC THIS IS SO CUTE" THING

aaaaaaaa

so unlike your other fic, i've actually read this fic before, but i decided to read it AGAIN because it's so damn feels good.

where the hell do i even start.

okay, i think in all im just in love with the way you capture the boys? it's honestly amazing to me how you can capture their personalities in a brief moment -- the part about chanwoo actually debating whether to go back and help bobby , yunhyung making that decision FOR him (the sleeping in the bed he made part, still has me cackling because it's so sassy and motherly and yunhyung, i can't ) DONGHYUK????? BEING SO FRICKIN CUTE IM SCREAMING LITERALLY EVERYWHERE junhoe being the loveable punk he is -- despite the fact that they weren't stars of the fic, you made them shine in their own way, they werent just used to propel the plot, they were very much a part of it, even in the small details.

the bibohwan pre-predebut scene literally melts my heart i just....there is so much perfect, i really wont do it justice by retelling it to you. just know, it was very emotional, and i was very touched.

AND FUCK the double b. the reason why i love this fic, is that you dont know why hanbin is mad until the near ending scene. it just sets up this interesting dynamic of "fuck what did bobby do" combined with "why are they such punks" i absolutely loved the dynamic you worked with here, it wasnt strange or sappy at all, just cute cute, cute in the best way.

thank you so much for this fic, it's honestly one of my faves in this fandom!

[preorder]

oh gosh thank you so much this comment is so nice!!!! I'm so grateful you liked this >__< and especially grateful you thought my characterizations worked!! that's what I worry about the most, so it's always so nice to hear that my interpretation rang true for others.

I LOVE DOUBLE B!!!!! I love muppet hanbin and bobby who always goes too far, and I'm sooooo excited they've finally debuted *__* thanks again for reading!