Lies, Sex, And Genes Part 14

[premerseahshiko]

Title: Lies... (Part 14)
Characters: Feilong, Mikhail, Takato, Kou
        Mention of: Asami & Aki
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine.

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 14

Fire gasped at the intensity of the kiss and the coldness of the mouth on his sent a shiver down his spine as his own flesh heated to counter the cold hands roaming over his body. His

Comments

[miershyk]

weeeeeeeeeee~ i mean... OMG~~~~~~~~~

Misha!!! T_______________________________T why!!! woman~ you killed me... omg~ poor Mik!!! *hugs Mik* that's a total shock man! and was such a good smex... woa~ that really hit, HARD...

and i'm very very very happy with how you included both Kou and Takato in the story too... ^_^ makes it all the more interesting that everyone's involved one way or the other...

comments eh? yea true... i know how it feels with what i usually post on other forums about my dolls... i usually just do it for myself but when you're not even getting some comments for all the hard work you did, it hurts... and i dun wanna get comments jz because i point out "i'm not getting enough comment"... i want people to comment because they love it or at least some appreciative words, advice etc...

but i'm glad you're replying to comments too cause one thing that makes me keep commenting is that the writer also replies to comments... it shows that they are also responsive and read our comments too... when people comment, i'm happy too and i reply back... it works both ways, really...

anyway enough of that cause i'm sure you know what you're doing now... ^_^ shall read next chap!!! gosh! Fei!!! *rubs rubs Mik's cheek* oh i forgot to mention, the first paragraph describing Mik had me laughing... it was hilarious... XD oh dear...