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Not The Time

Dec 31, 2008 01:53

Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Shige-centric
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Introspection? Angst?
Summary: Shige rationalizes not telling his friends.
Author's Note: I've sort of been starting fics and not finishing them, but I felt the need to post something. So this fic is completely different than I planned but it works, I suppose. And I'm addicted to first person ( Read more... )

f: news (je group), author: resolute_reader

Comments 17

binmusic December 31 2008, 09:14:11 UTC

I think you know how hard I find it to write about idols that I don't know well enough. I know of Shige, I know who he is of course and I actually like him a lot. Problem is, I just can't get into him the same way I get into Ryo or Jun. And in this fic, you've done just that. Obviously I'm not sure if Shige's sexual preference is really the way you've written it to be but if it was, I would imagine his frame of mind to be like this. He'd wonder about it, worry over it just a bit and agonize over his own feelings. I like the rawness of this fic. The first person POV is done very well.

I expect a sequel.Oops, wrong fic? xDD

resolute_reader December 31 2008, 09:18:22 UTC

Rawness could also be called choppy and unedited, but thank you ^^ I have no clue on his preferences either XD

Right fic, this was going to be Nishikato but it sort of seemed wrong to extend it. It just didn't work . . .

hanny2luv December 31 2008, 10:38:26 UTC

Sometimes Shige thinks too much, ne.
But i like it.
Thanks for sharing.

resolute_reader December 31 2008, 17:31:50 UTC

At least, I think he thinks to much XD

I'm glad you liked it ^^

jojibear December 31 2008, 14:59:09 UTC

That was really well written, Kesasa~ ♥

resolute_reader December 31 2008, 17:32:46 UTC

Seriously? I think it's completely choppy and jumps around too much XD

But thanks ^^

fairy_illusions January 2 2009, 05:02:09 UTC

Aw I like this. As usual, Shige thinks to much, but it's all sound and reason. :] Nicely done~

resolute_reader January 2 2009, 05:06:08 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

miss_jelly January 2 2009, 10:05:30 UTC

I really like this, it didn't seem choppy to me. :\ I really like your Shige, it just works really well. :)

bah, now that I read that this was intended to go further, I'm kinda sad that it isn't :< But it works well as a one-shot, too.

resolute_reader January 3 2009, 04:49:36 UTC

Oh, thank you very much!

I sort of have a different continuation of this in progress, it may or may not turn out to be nishikato still ^^

miss_jelly January 3 2009, 05:03:14 UTC

oh wow, well that makes me happy, again :) Hope it turns out well :)