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ALL STARS: THE GREAT BATTLE OF THE LIGHT CHAPTER 3 (Part 2)

Jul 21, 2011 17:06

*series: yes! precure 5 gogo, *series: futari wa precure max heart, *series: heartcatch precure!, *series: futari wa precure splash star, *series: fresh precure!, *series: suite precure, *fanfiction

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rainbow169 July 21 2011, 22:56:06 UTC

I'm relieved to hear that Nagisa and Honoka are probably being controlled by an evil force, rather than acting evil and attacking other Cures on their own. I was hoping it would be something like that, since I didn't like the idea that they would be acting like that on their own free will.

cure_e July 22 2011, 00:47:28 UTC

xD This gonna be better, I promise you. There's is a really big reason for them acting like that.

;D thanks for read X3.

curefan101 July 22 2011, 01:36:18 UTC

Love the story its great!! I'm not into Yuri but the part with Love and Setsuna had me laughing I could almost... no I can imagine everyone's expression in this story. Its very detailed and I can't wait to read the next chapter keep up the awesome work!

(P.S. The link for the Spanish version isn't working. I wanted to read the rest in Spanish since I understand it but it says its not found.)

cure_e July 22 2011, 02:07:45 UTC

:D thanks for read! ... and for the link D: I gonna fix it in this moment *edits entry*

Peace~

acmeeoy July 22 2011, 02:51:58 UTC

Very interesting story you got here. I noticed you have a tag for the Suite series and wonder how you're going to fit an in-progress series in here.

And I think you meant gender, not genre in one of the lines about Love and Setsuna.

BTW, when quoting something within a quote, you use the apostrophe marks. For example, "I think that sign says 'Destroyer of Worlds.' What a...strange name for a bookstore."

cure_e July 22 2011, 03:26:10 UTC

Got it! Thanks for the advice, xD I'm gonna fix that.

Suite duo is in the fic, yup. They're in the chapter seven... at least in the spanish version. We're fixing details in the chapter 4, the 5 is in process.

;D thanks for read!!

acmeeoy July 22 2011, 15:21:17 UTC

Your welcome.

This might be tied into future chapters, but where's Shiny Luminous?

cure_e July 22 2011, 15:31:52 UTC

xD Chapter Six and waiting for some action.

hen_yo July 22 2011, 05:27:11 UTC

YATTA! the 2nd part's finally here!

i can finally read chapter 3 in one go!(yes, i waited for the second part \ to come out.)

to the members who are good at coloring using photoshop(or whatever program you use) i can give you the drawings. you can try to color it yourselves!

cure_e July 22 2011, 15:54:04 UTC

:D Chapter 4 gonna be ready very soon X3.