More FIC: "Lacings and Longitude" (Luna/Cho, NC-17)

[pre_raphaelite1]

So I'm finally getting around to reposting my first lengthy Femslash fic, so I'd appreciate some comments on what you think. Especially since the person it was written for never commented. *growls* God but that is the rudest, most inexcusable thing in a fest. Honestly.

Title: "Lacings and Longitude"
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Luna/Cho, implied

Comments

[pre_raphaelite1]

Eee yay!

*cuggles the puppies and the chocolate while eating you* Wait. No. That didn't work right. *winks*

Thank you so much for reading and leaving the lovely comment! Really. I'm not big on the femslash either (i think I wrote a Lily/Cissa drabble once... and a Sprout/Aunt Marge one), so I was particularly worried about this.

OH that map is all thanks to orlanstamos who plays Luna at hex_files I asked what sort of fabric Luna would like and her answer gave me theglue for the fic.

It was hard to get Luna's voice. I wrote her one other time in, actually in my springsmut of last year. So that probably explains why there's little dialogue. :P

Awww! Yay! *gives you an awesome, warm, fuzzy buttplug* (and I totally just typed that as blutpug?!)

*mutters*

[amchara]

This was gorgeous. I haven't read much femslash lately, but reading this one made me remember how much I like it. I loved Luna's corset as well- and how she decides she's going to help Cho after what happened with Cedric.

Also,very hot!

[pre_raphaelite1]

Eee! Thank you! I really wasn't sure if it was going to work well enough but I'm glad you enjoyed it!

*adores*

[ardaunt]

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Fic: Lacings and Longitude

[secondsilk]

This is wonderful. Lovely and heart squeezing.
I love the sense of Cho's grief and Luna's determination. And the simplicity of I see Finland.
Also, just hot.

It is a world map, muted colours curving in Italian boots and African horns around her compressed body.
Want! (Both the corset and with Luna inside it. :-) )