Comments | pr_au100: Team Building with Jack Landors (SPD, A Squad, #18, K+)

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Team Building with Jack Landors (SPD, A Squad, #18, K+)

Feb 14, 2008 00:54

characters: SPD’s A Squad (Charlie, Cruger)
prompt #18: joker (wild card)
word count: 700
rating: K+
summary: Charlie contemplates the future.

( Team Building with Jack Landors (joker) )

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Comments 9

pink_thunder17 February 14 2008, 06:28:41 UTC

*snerk* "I suppose they don't make greeting cards for torture survivors."

I honestly wonder where you come up with some of these lines!

Loved it.

starandrea February 15 2008, 01:33:01 UTC

::giggle:: I think everyone I've ever spoken to should get credit for the way my dialogue comes out! I'm sure all our brains form some sort of gestalt consciousness, and although I don't think I've ever heard someone say, "I suppose they don't make greeting cards for torture survivors," there are any number of people I can picture saying it ::grin::

Thank you so much! ♥

wild_force71 February 14 2008, 10:08:23 UTC

Wow, you made me like Cruger. i didn't think anyone could make me like Cruger.

starandrea February 15 2008, 01:36:40 UTC

I actually don't like Cruger, so I'm struggling to make him sympathetic enough that I want to write about him ^_^ You'll notice that I lost that battle with the Time Force organization ::amused::

I totally appreciate that, by the way ♥

rosabelle February 15 2008, 21:32:53 UTC

Well... he's trying, at least. (I think?)

You write life so very well. ♥

starandrea February 16 2008, 21:21:58 UTC

Ohh... I think that's the nicest compliment ever ♥

purplestripe66 February 25 2008, 15:20:33 UTC

The banner amuses me. ^_^ Poor Charlie. But Cruger actually sounded, what's the word? Helpful? No, because that would imply a solution. How about atemptedly helpful? :D

"greeting cards for torture survivors"

One of these days I will open a greeting card business and make all the greeting cards they don't make. That one is going on the top of the list. :D

starandrea February 27 2008, 21:38:44 UTC

::laughs:: Sadly, I think I remember to mention the banner more than I remember the kitten. Maybe the kitten should get loose and climb the tree or something.

Yes! ♥ Cruger really tries, I think. He just doesn't seem to get humans, for all the he's lived among them for ten years.

One of these days I will open a greeting card business and make all the greeting cards they don't make. That one is going on the top of the list. :D

And I can't wait to see what it says inside ::grin:: "Dying to wish you a happy birthday"?

purplestripe66 February 28 2008, 04:15:57 UTC

Yes! Oh! You should have the kitten sign the banner! You know, with a paw print. ^_^

"And I can't wait to see what it says inside ::grin:: "Dying to wish you a happy birthday"?"

LOL