Comments | pr_au100: Team Building with Jack Landors (SPD, A Squad, #14, T)

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Team Building with Jack Landors (SPD, A Squad, #14, T)

Jan 26, 2008 00:08

characters: SPD’s A Squad (Jack, Kat)
prompt #14: save the day
word count: 1900
rating: T
summary: Kat's sister interrupts her conference with Jack.

( Team Building with Jack Landors (save the day) )

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Comments 12

sgpr_fan January 26 2008, 05:43:48 UTC

OMG!!!! Thats such a cool twist and kind of worrisome.. well not kinda-is and JEn hasn't changed much but what I want ot know is what going on?? and that last line is just cruel---I like :hugs:

starandrea January 27 2008, 03:17:28 UTC

::glee:: You are full of awesome! I love that Jen actually sounds like Jen--thank you!! ♥ (I have decided to interject some actual plot into this story. Briefly. I'm sure it won't clutter up the romance and holiday drama for long ::amused::)

dragovianknight January 26 2008, 06:13:56 UTC

This just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait for the next part.

starandrea January 27 2008, 03:20:13 UTC

Yay! You are so kind! ::warm fuzzies::

rosabelle January 26 2008, 08:46:57 UTC

So... Jack, Sky, and Syd aren't related after all? That'd be really cool! And for some reason, I'd totally believe it. ::laughs:: I think I'm too easily convinced, sometimes... But if Jack's file is being messed with, then that means that he's not lying to Sky about being his half-brother and that's a good thing.

And I'm totally confused now, but I like it! I ♥ Jack and Kat.

starandrea January 27 2008, 03:29:17 UTC

Do you know what would be cool? Is if they were all a giant family! ::laughs:: For some reason, this is common in "Magnificent 7" fanfic: to make all of the riders brothers in varying stages of growing up o.O

I think Jack totally IS going to end up as Syd's brother, once the important people catch up with that file change that was either made by or from the future ::nods:: I will try to refrain from having characters ENDLESSLY mock Jack and Sky for the resulting familial relationship ^_^

(Do you know what prompted this storyline? The "king" and "queen" prompts in the au table! I was like, "Who can be my king and queen... Jack and Kat!" I mean, you know, not literally, but I thought it was funny that you said "I ♥ Jack and Kat," because that's so where this came from!)

wild_force71 January 26 2008, 20:10:52 UTC

JEN! It's Jen! And she's all... :: Fumbles :: ...like Jen! Cos she's JEN! And if Jen's here then there's got to be some more Time Force Rangers, and if Time Force is here there has to be Wild Force! Cos when you write them they're the same team! I can't stop exclaiming! :: Gasps for breath ::

In summary, I very much enjoyed these two installments. ::Nods regally::

starandrea January 27 2008, 03:40:48 UTC

Laughs! This made me laugh! (Regally!)

You win Jen! I mean--WILD FORCE! Except that I don't see any Wild Force ::squints:: ...Perhaps you'll sneak some in while I'm not looking. I'll have to keep watch ::eyes you::

I love you! ::glee::

pink_thunder17 January 27 2008, 21:04:11 UTC

:D Love it

starandrea February 1 2008, 15:57:10 UTC

Love! ♥