heart in hand (if you stumble, you'll drop it) . Sherlock . One-shot

Jan 01, 2011 13:10

Title: heart in hand (if you stumble, you’ll drop it)
Author: pprfaith/ Faithunbreakable
Disclaimer: I do not own Sherlock.
Pairing: Gen. Ish. Slight girl!john/Sherlock, but not really.
Rating: PG-13/ R.
Word Count: A bit under 6500.
Warnings: Meandering prose, slight angsting, discussion of suicide. Genderswap and asexuality.
Summary: John Watson isn’t ( Read more... )

idek, asexuality is sexy, fandom: sherlock, fanfic, pairing: gen, all the boys are girls, non-crossover, pairing: het

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hestia14 January 1 2011, 13:02:46 UTC
Omg, I think I have a new OTP. Wow, just wow.

At first I was worried, these types of stores don't always work out. But your story just completely blew my theory out of the water. Well done.

I love how everyone is in character and the story itself is believable.I wish I could write a longer review (for this story deserves it), but its 5 AM and I am sleepy.

Anyways, I do hope you write much more. For this is FANTASTIC!

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pprfaith January 1 2011, 13:08:53 UTC
Five am? Poor you, go to sleep and thank you very much for taking the time to comment despite the late/early hour!

Thanks!

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girlingoldboots January 1 2011, 13:06:12 UTC
Very good. Very, very good. In character despite the gender switch. Are you sure this is a one shot? *enables*

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pprfaith January 1 2011, 13:10:26 UTC
Yes!!! Thank you! I hoped I managed to keep it in character despite the switch, but I wasn't sure. Glad to know it worked.

As for more, I think there might be a coda in my head, somewhere, but I'm not sure. These things come and go. :)

Thank you.

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sciosophia January 1 2011, 13:06:20 UTC
That was stunning. Brutal, but utterly stunning. You didn't shy away from the difficult things, the ugly things, like the way Sherlock treats women or the effect it has on him and John. Your motifs, the beating heart, your prose--it has this rawness to it, a kind of truth, that made it feel incredibly special, like being gifted a glimpse of something spectacular. I love John, and I hated Sherlock a little bit, but I also understood.

I will remember this wonderful story for a long, long time ♥

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pprfaith January 1 2011, 13:10:57 UTC
Thank you very, very much. <3

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lavvyan January 1 2011, 13:21:13 UTC
That's fantastic. I find John to be utterly believable, genderswitch or no, and Sherlock is wonderfully in character. If the story had been twice as long, I'd have happily stayed glued to the monitor. ♥

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pprfaith January 1 2011, 13:28:33 UTC
Thank you!

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pprfaith January 1 2011, 13:29:26 UTC
Because it's my first story in the fandom, and that always makes me fret.

I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the love. :)

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