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Notes: This is something that I'm writing for my own benefit to see if I even can write her dying in fire so uh yes. Character death warning. Also, everything that happens around it probably won't happen. IDK who would even want to light her on fire. It's just dark fic for the sake of being dark and for the sake of me writing cause she's loud.
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AUGH.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUGH. Crying. Fuck. Ow. >.<
*FLAILS*
It feels like the lower half of her is being shredded apart when she tries to move. And this is it. This is how it ends. In a moment. A breath. A drop.
The world goes dark. There's a clanking, yelling, anger anger anger, and a heavy thud.
And then.
AUGH. THIS WAS, WITHOUT A DOUBT, THE MOST PAINFUL THING I HAVE EVER READ. It just broke me. Not so much the parts where he is being torn apart, but the parts where SHE is because augh he is, in my head, it's, idek. It's hardly human. I might...have to write a companion piece or something. IDEK. -________-
GWAH. There is no room for coherency in this review so you'll have to excuse the rambling and the not making sense and AUGH totally broke me. That after EVERYTHING she still finds it in herself to reassure him they haven't touched her heart, how strong she is throughout it all and then the fire, you can SEE the shift into TOTAL PANIC AND AUGH.
You captured him perfectly, though. It didn't need dialogue because I don't think the anger and the rage and the need to kill would have LET HIM SAY ANYTHING. It's consuming and augh, this killed me. It killed me and I admire you for writing it and love you and yes.
*clings so much*
My chest hurts. KIDS. ;__;
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*CLINGS TIGHTLY*
I'm so sorry. IDK. Why.. we do this... to each other. Except we just said why. We are masochistic. -_--
*snuggles* I'm so sorry that it was so painful for you, not that... I can blame you. I couldn't handle writing the parts where he was all broken and the part where he was beaten. My chest wouldn't stop hurting and I couldn't stop crying through the whole part of it. Bad bleedover.
oh AUGH. Augh. augh. A companion piece to this fic would be so.... fucking amazing and painful cause you said that- yeah, he would. yeah. jl;akrejla.
fffff yeah. I'm not sure what it is about fire that- I guess phobias don't make a whole lot of sense and for her fire was the thing that did it, that became a phobia. Fire is the worst thing anyone could do to her beyond hurting Josef or someone else she loves but especially Josef if she was made to think it was at all her fault. She- that would be worse than the fire. There wouldn't be panic but the pain inside of her would augh.
I'm so glad that I captured him. I know he doesn't talk a whole lot as it is, and I can't imagine that situation would... help.
I love you, too, and I hope your chest feels better though that's not likely to happen tonight. *clings* *goes to write overflow*
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