Return to Baskerville (Chapter 16)

[pottsfanatic]

Thank you all for the kind reviews, keep them coming(even if you hate the story, that's how I'll learn).

Continued thanks and mass amounts of love to my beta babe. Texty, I use my 'cheat sheet' all the time, thank you. It's invaluable. :)

A bit of language in this one and Harry Watson has decided to make a reappearance, coincidence? I think not.
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Comments

[tay_21]

Oh wow that was a ride. Harry has some nerve! What a bitch. No wonder John doesn't call her.

I am so relieved that you didn't leave us hanging at the end there. LOL. As if we haven't had enough angst with these too. LOL.

Oh, are we actually going to get to hear John's story, or see how Sherlock reacts to it. I love all you've done with this so far. Keep it up. How many chapters do you think it's going to be? Going great so far. :-D

[pottsfanatic]

Well, we already know John's story. It's going to be more the way Sherlock reacts and what happens after. I think it's almost done. I've got a couple more things I wanted to do and of course we need the big smexy payoff at the end. :)

Not to mention, this story will feature in my next, but you won't need to have read it to get the new story. Thank you so much for sticking with it. 16 chapters is a lot.

Harry is a bitch...but she did have a point. LOL

[tay_21]

Right. I was meaning more of Sherlock's reaction. ;-) ANd hey, smexy payoff is always good. :-D

I'm super happy that you already have another story planned. :-D That's exciting.

She did, still BITCH! LOL

[pottsfanatic]

The new story was also a dream but not as developed as this one was so I'm trying to figure out the rest of the story before I start writing. Is that right? or should I just start?

[tay_21]

I don't think there is a right or wrong its your preference. Me personally, I like to just start writing and let it flow organically. It's how certain aspects of my stories end up writing themselves. LOL. That's also why I always use a beta too. I have to vet some body else to verify that my brilliance makes sense. ;-) :-P