3548: Only Time Will Heal You - Scarlett Black/Snape and daughter
It's tme for Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. Accepting entries for the Thirteenth Annual Pottersues Contest.
Today we have a Purity Sue. Here is a quote from the tropes page.
“. It is a character that is intentionally made by the author to be overly positive. They almost never have any flaws that actually affect them in a way that truly matters, usually going for endearing traits such as "clumsiness" or naïveté, instead getting overloaded with overwhelmingly positive but largely passive traits (i.e. beauty, innocence, etc.). The character will usually be soft-spoken, have a pleasant voice, and be mild-mannered. Often, the traits verge towards the ethereal, with auras, non-human lineage, and other such things.”
Today's link of the day is Fanfic Cliches (It's kinda long sorry)
TITLE: Only Time Will Heal You
PERPETRATOR: Jasper's Sister
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: Does anybody recognize the writer's avatar? It's this person with long white hair wearing an orange helmet with a part which sticks out like Elvis' hair style, and a yellow visor. I think there's also red markings on the face, and their dressed in a rusting red outfit. The style the character is drawn in isn't very familiar either. I think it might be Seven Universe.
SUMMARY:”Severus and Scarlett were the perfect couple they married after high school. They were about to begin there next chapter together as parents. The day came for the baby to arrive the baby was born but Scarlett died. When the baby was two Severus couldn't take it and gave her up. Now years later she wants to know who she is. Spanking of a child, pre teen and teen”
FULL NAME: Scarlett Black/Snape
SPECIES: She is the sister of Narcissa and Bellatrix.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The entire first chapter is about cooing over babies. Scarlette doesn't make it. Her sisters burst into tears.
ORIGIN: “One month later Harry Potter was born and Lilly with James were killed.” The story pretty much covers the birth of Severus' Mary Sue daughter with his Mary Sue wife.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: How can Scarlett be his high school sweet heart when he was crushing on Lily like he was?
NOTES: I want to say the writer is a young writer, but they've also been on the site since 2012 and have almost fifty stories.
SAMPLE:
" Scarlett my beloved wife." Severus said as she walked down the stairs in a gown and her baby belly was showing
" Yes my beloved?" Scarlett said as he kissed her hand and smiled at her
" Promise me this isn't a dream that am married to my high school sweetheart and she's pregnant with my child." Severus said as he looked at her and kissed her stomach
" It's no dream Severus am really yours and this is your child in here." Scarlett laughed as he smiled and lifted her up
Today we have a Purity Sue. Here is a quote from the tropes page.
“. It is a character that is intentionally made by the author to be overly positive. They almost never have any flaws that actually affect them in a way that truly matters, usually going for endearing traits such as "clumsiness" or naïveté, instead getting overloaded with overwhelmingly positive but largely passive traits (i.e. beauty, innocence, etc.). The character will usually be soft-spoken, have a pleasant voice, and be mild-mannered. Often, the traits verge towards the ethereal, with auras, non-human lineage, and other such things.”
Today's link of the day is Fanfic Cliches (It's kinda long sorry)
TITLE: Only Time Will Heal You
PERPETRATOR: Jasper's Sister
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: Does anybody recognize the writer's avatar? It's this person with long white hair wearing an orange helmet with a part which sticks out like Elvis' hair style, and a yellow visor. I think there's also red markings on the face, and their dressed in a rusting red outfit. The style the character is drawn in isn't very familiar either. I think it might be Seven Universe.
SUMMARY:”Severus and Scarlett were the perfect couple they married after high school. They were about to begin there next chapter together as parents. The day came for the baby to arrive the baby was born but Scarlett died. When the baby was two Severus couldn't take it and gave her up. Now years later she wants to know who she is. Spanking of a child, pre teen and teen”
FULL NAME: Scarlett Black/Snape
SPECIES: She is the sister of Narcissa and Bellatrix.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The entire first chapter is about cooing over babies. Scarlette doesn't make it. Her sisters burst into tears.
ORIGIN: “One month later Harry Potter was born and Lilly with James were killed.” The story pretty much covers the birth of Severus' Mary Sue daughter with his Mary Sue wife.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: How can Scarlett be his high school sweet heart when he was crushing on Lily like he was?
NOTES: I want to say the writer is a young writer, but they've also been on the site since 2012 and have almost fifty stories.
SAMPLE:
" Scarlett my beloved wife." Severus said as she walked down the stairs in a gown and her baby belly was showing
" Yes my beloved?" Scarlett said as he kissed her hand and smiled at her
" Promise me this isn't a dream that am married to my high school sweetheart and she's pregnant with my child." Severus said as he looked at her and kissed her stomach
" It's no dream Severus am really yours and this is your child in here." Scarlett laughed as he smiled and lifted her up