2462: The Hogwarts Experiment - Taniru Kurosa
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TITLE: The Hogwarts Experiment
PERPETRATOR: Soulless227
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a picture of Harry and Draco
SUMMARY:”Hogwarts is having an exchange program between houses! Follow OC Taniru Kurosa suffer as a Slytherin easing himself into each of the houses and try his hardest not to kill people. WARNING: Themes that involve gender, sex, and sexually diverse people. Don't like, don't read. Rating may change. ”
FULL NAME: See summary. “So what if he had a Japanese name in an English school? It's not that weird to have moved overseas from your home country...”
SPECIES: He is a part of the Next Generation, but isn't a canon character.
HAIR: brunet
EYES: green I think
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: He knows Scorpius.
ORIGIN: The origins pretty much summarized by the
SPECIAL ABILITIES: He's gay and supposed to represent the journey towards a better understanding of the LGBT community. Otherwise he sadly serves no purpose.
NOTES: I don't see the point of resorting students as there is no real justification for doing this. I also don't think the writer understands the reason Japanese names end nitpicked is because writer's like to make their original characters Japanese because the writer has some kind of interest in Anime and a Japanese OC is cool, and not because said character is actually needed.
SAMPLE:
Finalling rid of the annoying hat; he rushed over to Cameron, the shadows threatening to take him over, lured by the ancient magic in the hat.
However, as he sat the shadows coated his eyes again,
I like thisssss, All it isssss.
Sitting up suddenly I tried to escape the shadows choking me only to hit my head on the bottom of Cameron's bed.
Some days it sucked to be on the bottom bunk.
"That dream again, Taniru?" called a sleepladen voice from above me.
"Cam... were you eavesdropping?" I chuckled, getting a pillow to my face.
He had the ability to dreamwalk, his nifty little quirk that could get him the secrets of whoever he wanted... if he could control it that is. It was a touchy subject some days.
"Not on you, idiot!" he whispered loudly, glaring at me from his bed, his hair flopping down as he head popped over the edge of his bed.
Touching his nose I grinned at him, letting him know I was fine.
"Will you guys shut up? It's an ungodly hour in the morning to be awake," growled our good friend.
"What? Haven't you gotten enough beauty slip yet Scorpius? Come on, isn't six hours enough?" I joked knowing well enough that all of my roommates hated mornings more than anything. "Bloody vampires."
TITLE: The Hogwarts Experiment
PERPETRATOR: Soulless227
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a picture of Harry and Draco
SUMMARY:”Hogwarts is having an exchange program between houses! Follow OC Taniru Kurosa suffer as a Slytherin easing himself into each of the houses and try his hardest not to kill people. WARNING: Themes that involve gender, sex, and sexually diverse people. Don't like, don't read. Rating may change. ”
FULL NAME: See summary. “So what if he had a Japanese name in an English school? It's not that weird to have moved overseas from your home country...”
SPECIES: He is a part of the Next Generation, but isn't a canon character.
HAIR: brunet
EYES: green I think
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: He knows Scorpius.
ORIGIN: The origins pretty much summarized by the
SPECIAL ABILITIES: He's gay and supposed to represent the journey towards a better understanding of the LGBT community. Otherwise he sadly serves no purpose.
NOTES: I don't see the point of resorting students as there is no real justification for doing this. I also don't think the writer understands the reason Japanese names end nitpicked is because writer's like to make their original characters Japanese because the writer has some kind of interest in Anime and a Japanese OC is cool, and not because said character is actually needed.
SAMPLE:
Finalling rid of the annoying hat; he rushed over to Cameron, the shadows threatening to take him over, lured by the ancient magic in the hat.
However, as he sat the shadows coated his eyes again,
I like thisssss, All it isssss.
Sitting up suddenly I tried to escape the shadows choking me only to hit my head on the bottom of Cameron's bed.
Some days it sucked to be on the bottom bunk.
"That dream again, Taniru?" called a sleepladen voice from above me.
"Cam... were you eavesdropping?" I chuckled, getting a pillow to my face.
He had the ability to dreamwalk, his nifty little quirk that could get him the secrets of whoever he wanted... if he could control it that is. It was a touchy subject some days.
"Not on you, idiot!" he whispered loudly, glaring at me from his bed, his hair flopping down as he head popped over the edge of his bed.
Touching his nose I grinned at him, letting him know I was fine.
"Will you guys shut up? It's an ungodly hour in the morning to be awake," growled our good friend.
"What? Haven't you gotten enough beauty slip yet Scorpius? Come on, isn't six hours enough?" I joked knowing well enough that all of my roommates hated mornings more than anything. "Bloody vampires."