3309: Betrayal - Harry Potter
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TITLE: Betrayal
PERPETRATOR: uoduck
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar. I'm guessing off the top of my head The Hobbit or Game of Thrones.
SUMMARY:”Harry Potter experiences betrayal of the worst sort. The Ministry of Magic drugs him then hands him over to a muggle terrorist organization and bids him goodbye. Harry Potter/Tony Stark/Loki.”
FULL NAME: Harry Potter
SPECIES: Elf?
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Jarvis orders that Harry get a phone towards the end of chapter seven.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Harry Potter ends up helping Yinsen with the healing of Tony. This continues into the second chapter where Harry blabs about the Wizarding world which continues into chapter three. We get more of the Iron Man plot line. In continues to the forth chapter where both are stuck outside in the desert and run into a Griffin. A helicopter comes in chapter five and suddenly Draco, Neville, Hermione and Ginny. Draco and Hermione are together. Harry then heads to the International Wizarding Council in chapter six to gain “political immunity from Britian” as well as “attain American citizenship for [him] and [his] friends.” Chapter seven has Kreacher show up.
ORIGIN: Of all the terrorist organizations within the Marvel universe to hand him over to... this one isn't believable. The writer can't be bothered to pay attention to canon. Harry then rescues Tony's life in chapter nine. (Is it just me, or is it similar to a scene between Pepper and Harry?) Despite the change in plot Lily, Albus and James show up in chapter ten. This... or we're talking about the dead people and not the kids.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Harry is turned into a Tag-a-Long-Stu. In chapter seven Harry mentions his “elemental magic”. Apparently “elemental magic” is the solution to not having a wand instead of wandless magic.
NOTES: Harry's response to Draco asking him if he can use elemental magic is, “all elves can use some kind of elemental magic”. There are other things that occur in the story, but this is the gest of it.
SAMPLE:
Harry wearily paced the length of the cell, staring at the door from time to time. It was as always warded against him; the petty ministry had made sure to include that in the deal.
"Harry, you'll wear yourself out," Yinsen remarked then glanced at the door too. "You don't want them to drug you again, do you?"
Harry sighed and went to sit on his cot, turning to look at Yinsen who had become his friend in the first day.
"No, I don't," Harry replied quietly, scratching softly at his curved ear. "Just... I have a strange feeling."
Yinsen raised an eyebrow at him then glanced at the door too. "What kind of strange feeling?"
"Like we're about to have company," Harry answered.
"Our captors?" Yinsen questioned, getting to his feet.
"No, well, yes. But like there will be a third person sharing our cozy living space as well," Harry drawled.
Yinsen rolled his eyes and they lapsed into comfortable, if a little wary, silence.
The minute that the door to their cell opened, Harry and Yinsen moved back to the rock wall and held their hands up.
Harry watched as their captors stalked in, bringing in someone on a stretcher. The leader of the Ten Ring's terrorist group walked in behind them with the customary guards waiting by the door, pointing rifles at Harry and Yinsen both. The dark wizard that had kept Harry in line was also at the door, smirking at him. Harry glared at him then recoiled as one of the other guards raised a rifle and shot him. It was as always a dart gun with a mix of drugs in it, designed to keep Harry obedient and to keep him from using his magic or any of the elements to escape.
Harry winced and swayed a minute, feeling sweat start to pool on his body. He glared at the guards and the wizard. "Trou du cul!" (asshole)
The leader started to shout something at Yinsen then pointed at a few of the guards then at the guy on the stretcher. The guy on the stretcher was whimpering in pain and writhing. There was blood leaking out from a spot on his chest, along with cuts and bruises all over his body. There were rudimentary bandages on his chest but there was blood leaking through them.
"Yinsen, what's he saying?" Harry murmured.
Yinsen stared at the leader then turned to Harry. "He wants us to fix the man up."
"Like heal him?" Harry asked.
TITLE: Betrayal
PERPETRATOR: uoduck
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar. I'm guessing off the top of my head The Hobbit or Game of Thrones.
SUMMARY:”Harry Potter experiences betrayal of the worst sort. The Ministry of Magic drugs him then hands him over to a muggle terrorist organization and bids him goodbye. Harry Potter/Tony Stark/Loki.”
FULL NAME: Harry Potter
SPECIES: Elf?
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Jarvis orders that Harry get a phone towards the end of chapter seven.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Harry Potter ends up helping Yinsen with the healing of Tony. This continues into the second chapter where Harry blabs about the Wizarding world which continues into chapter three. We get more of the Iron Man plot line. In continues to the forth chapter where both are stuck outside in the desert and run into a Griffin. A helicopter comes in chapter five and suddenly Draco, Neville, Hermione and Ginny. Draco and Hermione are together. Harry then heads to the International Wizarding Council in chapter six to gain “political immunity from Britian” as well as “attain American citizenship for [him] and [his] friends.” Chapter seven has Kreacher show up.
ORIGIN: Of all the terrorist organizations within the Marvel universe to hand him over to... this one isn't believable. The writer can't be bothered to pay attention to canon. Harry then rescues Tony's life in chapter nine. (Is it just me, or is it similar to a scene between Pepper and Harry?) Despite the change in plot Lily, Albus and James show up in chapter ten. This... or we're talking about the dead people and not the kids.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Harry is turned into a Tag-a-Long-Stu. In chapter seven Harry mentions his “elemental magic”. Apparently “elemental magic” is the solution to not having a wand instead of wandless magic.
NOTES: Harry's response to Draco asking him if he can use elemental magic is, “all elves can use some kind of elemental magic”. There are other things that occur in the story, but this is the gest of it.
SAMPLE:
Harry wearily paced the length of the cell, staring at the door from time to time. It was as always warded against him; the petty ministry had made sure to include that in the deal.
"Harry, you'll wear yourself out," Yinsen remarked then glanced at the door too. "You don't want them to drug you again, do you?"
Harry sighed and went to sit on his cot, turning to look at Yinsen who had become his friend in the first day.
"No, I don't," Harry replied quietly, scratching softly at his curved ear. "Just... I have a strange feeling."
Yinsen raised an eyebrow at him then glanced at the door too. "What kind of strange feeling?"
"Like we're about to have company," Harry answered.
"Our captors?" Yinsen questioned, getting to his feet.
"No, well, yes. But like there will be a third person sharing our cozy living space as well," Harry drawled.
Yinsen rolled his eyes and they lapsed into comfortable, if a little wary, silence.
The minute that the door to their cell opened, Harry and Yinsen moved back to the rock wall and held their hands up.
Harry watched as their captors stalked in, bringing in someone on a stretcher. The leader of the Ten Ring's terrorist group walked in behind them with the customary guards waiting by the door, pointing rifles at Harry and Yinsen both. The dark wizard that had kept Harry in line was also at the door, smirking at him. Harry glared at him then recoiled as one of the other guards raised a rifle and shot him. It was as always a dart gun with a mix of drugs in it, designed to keep Harry obedient and to keep him from using his magic or any of the elements to escape.
Harry winced and swayed a minute, feeling sweat start to pool on his body. He glared at the guards and the wizard. "Trou du cul!" (asshole)
The leader started to shout something at Yinsen then pointed at a few of the guards then at the guy on the stretcher. The guy on the stretcher was whimpering in pain and writhing. There was blood leaking out from a spot on his chest, along with cuts and bruises all over his body. There were rudimentary bandages on his chest but there was blood leaking through them.
"Yinsen, what's he saying?" Harry murmured.
Yinsen stared at the leader then turned to Harry. "He wants us to fix the man up."
"Like heal him?" Harry asked.