3154: Mysterious Shadow - Mei Uchiha

Jan 03, 2014 23:06

Here is day twenty-six. Today's character is a Mei. Mei is one of the daughters of the Emperor in Mulan II.

TITLE: Mysterious Shadow
PERPETRATOR: Pure-chan
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: Thee is a picture of mountains and the fullmoon in the mist.

FULL NAME: Mei Uchiha “Her name, or at least, her present alias, was Mei Uchiha. Mei, as in the Chinese character for beauty, and Uchiha, as in the traditional Uchiha fan and also the name of an infamous pureblood clan from Japan. “
SPECIES: She is supposed to be Japanese but has a name that the writer clearly indicates is Chinese.
HAIR: “The young girl's black hair was pulled back; only two strands remained in front on either side of her head.”
EYES: “Her eyes were a mixture between crystal blue and misty grey, showing off her unique heritage.”
MARKINGS: None
POSSESSIONS: “She wore a large buttoned pale green sweater with large but short sleeves, a long-sleeved white shirt underneath followed by a dark green mid-length skirt.” “Upon her neck was a pendant bearing the crest of that very clan. A clan which blood flowed in her veins, as well as those of a professor in her new school.” About her wand. “"Yes, Mei Uchiha. Ten inches, willow with tengu hair and phoenix feather. According to the man himself, best for Transfiguration and Charms, especially fire spells. And you would be…?" She has a mentor named Xuenv, Jingke and Baifeng.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Mei gets onto the train and introduces herself by saying what her wand is. (Sorry... but that is not how you introduce yourself. I don't know why Suethor's feel the need to introduce themselves this way. And funny thing is they only use it once. It's almost like they have to brag about their wands.) Well... she brags about her magical ability with Eastern magic and how her mother is dead. Draco shows up and his offer stands for her too. She gets sorted into Ravenclaw because “but you should know that being friendly with others is not my most pressing priority at the moment.” She writers her letter andwe find out that Severus is her uncle. Pale Pearl is then brought to the room of requirement two months later. “The room was very vast and designed after Mei's hobbies. Her eyes widened as she realized where she was. "The Room of Requirement." There was a round stage in the middle, very similar to the one her mentor, Xuenv, used to perform on. Further behind it were an assortment of instruments, both Asian and Western (zither, flute, grand piano, shamisen…). More to the left was a wall full of weapons, including two very familiar twin swords. At the right was a study of sorts with bookshelves lined against the wall. The best though, were the other furniture in the far corner: a bed, a dresser… There was even a bathroom! Of course, Ren'S sleeping arrangements were not forgotten.” She also meets Myrtle. She decides to make friends with Draco
ORIGIN: Here is the Summary. “Mei Uchiha, Japanese pureblood and Hogwarts student. She withdraws from contact with her fellow students until one Draco Malfoy pays attention to her. What's her past? Why is she at Hogwarts? And how is she related to Snape? Not a crossover with Naruto. Potential Draco/OC and potential OOC moments, especially for Pansy. Eastern magic world VS Western magic world.” “Unlike most of the others though, the girl was not English by birth. Since she was to attend Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry for the next seven years, she became a British citizen to lessen the trouble.” . "My family believed that it was best if I learned your Western ways of Witchcraft and Wizardry since I have already mastered the basics of Eastern magic. My parents have fought against the Dark Lord ages ago and they wish that I be prepared for any eventual conflict." She changed the subject, noticing her companion's reactions. "By the way, in Japan, we refer to each other by our last names unless given permission to do otherwise. I hope that I did not seem rude."” "Mother died from a long-term curse around two-three years after the man's downfall. Father doesn't speak much of those days and it was mostly Mother who fought amongst people like your parents." Mei sighed. "From what I've gathered though, he was a terribly powerful foe. Definitely not one to underestimate, yet overestimating such a man will lead to one's downfall." Nothing is added to the series.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: For some reason there was a need for her to have British citizenry so she can go to Hogwarts. What about the republic of Ireland, huh? And what about the fact the Muggle government has nothing to do with the Wizarding government? Well... the reason for her going to Hogwarts is because she's already mastered Eastern magic at age seven. (Sorry... but no.) She also only talks to ghosts and eleves.

NOTES: Chapter five is an author's note explaining Eastern magic. The Japanese kind is based off Naruto, the Chinese is based of f Bleach. But it isn't a crossover until after the half-blood prince. Honestly... it's pretty bad when the story gets a review that says... “You should do the honorifics. Also, England is EASTERN, not western. Western is America and Canada and blah blah blah.” (This is only the case when it's only these areas being mentioned! Otherwise Britain is Western culture.) The character is pretty much a spoiled brat. That also said... when I found this one I didn't realize how annoying it would be.


SAMPLE:

An eleven year-old girl stared outside in boredom. Like the many other pre-teens and teenagers as well as young adults on the train, she was to attend Hogwarts for the following school year. Unlike most of the others though, the girl was not English by birth. Since she was to attend Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry for the next seven years, she became a British citizen to lessen the trouble.

The young girl's black hair was pulled back; only two strands remained in front on either side of her head. Her eyes were a mixture between crystal blue and misty grey, showing off her unique heritage. She wore a large buttoned pale green sweater with large but short sleeves, a long-sleeved white shirt underneath followed by a dark green mid-length skirt.

Her name, or at least, her present alias, was Mei Uchiha. Mei, as in the Chinese character for beauty, and Uchiha, as in the traditional Uchiha fan and also the name of an infamous pureblood clan from Japan. Upon her neck was a pendant bearing the crest of that very clan. A clan which blood flowed in her veins, as well as those of a professor in her new school.

Sighing deeply, Mei resumed her search for a cabin where to put her trunk. Soon, she found one occupied by only two boys, a red-head and a dark-haired one who were chatting quite animatedly. "Excuse me, you two, do you mind if I join you? The other compartments are full."

Both boys turned to look at her. In the dark-haired boy's eyes was confusion, then recognition. "You're Mei, right? From Ollivander's?" He asked, somewhat hesitant.

"Yes, Mei Uchiha. Ten inches, willow with tengu hair and phoenix feather. According to the man himself, best for Transfiguration and Charms, especially fire spells. And you would be…?"

"Harry. Harry Potter. And he's Ron Weasly." Harry introduced them. "You can sit down if you like. Who knows how long we'll be in the train."

e - asian, rating - toxic, pc - parasite sue, ap - instrumental pursuit, ap - academic pursuit, e - japanese

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