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TITLE: The Daemons Are Coming
PERPETRATOR: Flames of the Goddess224
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: Their avatar, which is supposed to be a dragon made from flames, but the mouth got cut off even on the site.
FULL NAME: Mea and Harry Potter
SPECIES: Daemon
HAIR: She has “mid-back wavy raven hair”. Harry's “hair was down to just past his shoulder blades, and his bangs almost covered his emerald green eyes.” When he puts the glamour back on “, Mea watched avidly as brother's long, silky raven hair disappeared and became short and messy, lightening just slightly.” Her hair in torn becomes short, “no unlike his own”
EYES: See above for Harry's eye color. When the glamour is put on... “His eyes dimmed from the glowing green they had been, the circles under them disappeared and the haunted look in them was hidden.” “Her eyes [without the glamour], the same shade of emerald as his, fairly glowed with power.” Without the glamour though, “her eyes sparkled with a special amount of energy that only she had, Mea almost bounced in place with happiness that filled all of those around her.”
MARKINGS: She has a “lightening bolt scar under her eys-one of the two famous ones- [that] gleamed with dried tear tracks.” “His skin, scarred from heavy abuse tanned and became flawless.” “Without the glamour, Mea was pale, almost vampyre looking, she had purple bruise looking circles under her eyes, highlighting her own famous scar that ran from just under her eye to the top of her cheek. “ “Her scars were only visible to him, to the others in the world Mea was tanned “ Also, “The glamours were down, revealing that Harry and Mea were indeed almost identical.”
POSSESSIONS: They share a room.
CONNECTION TO CANON: We have the twins setting off to the bank to get their creature inheritance, but they haven't a clue what they were going to be. The boglin tells them, “the glamorus... they're endangering your magic, the inheritance will draw on it. Keeping them up will lower you immunities and magic levels in the upcoming months.” We then get a whole boring speech about daemon bonding, the “familia bond” and how daemon to daemon bonds are different when its with a human”. They then go and talk to Fred and George before going and looking up the Daemon types. There are two chapters past that, but... I'm having a problem being interested in something that feels way to much like original work.
ORIGIN: These two annoying Daemon decided to kill off Harry Potter and replace him tricking even the Goblins despite the fact they speak in such an inhuman manner.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The two have special glamours they put over themselves because they are both to beautiful and too identical to each other. They have a special bond that means Harry will be protective to the extreme of his sister. There is also a whole thing about mating bonds.
NOTES: Creature inheritances... good grief..
SAMPLE:
"If this is true, it changes everything." A girl muttered. She glanced at the door and nervously ran a hand through her mid-back wavy raven hair. The lightening bolt scar under her eyes-one of the two famous ones-gleamed with dried tear tracks. She shifted and laid her head on the shoulder of the boy next her. He wrapped an arm around her. "Everything would be different for. Or everyone could hate us."
"I know Mea, I know." The boy said. He too kept glancing at the door. The hair was down to just past his shoulder blades, and his bangs almost completely covered his emerald green eyes. You couldn't even see his lightening bolt scar. "But if the goblins are right, and they usually are, then we'll have to tell Sirius and Remus before school."
"And Percy and Olli, they're around more and more often." Mea added, giving Harry a small smile. "They should just admit they like each other. Get rid of the sexual tension."
Harry laughed, "I know what you mean. One more dinner and I may just lock them in a room alone. Come back in the morning."
"Harry! Mea! Percy and Oliver are here for dinner! Come on!" Sirius shouted from down the hall. The twins shared a grin as the stood. Speak of the devil and they shall appear.
"Hold on, we need to put the glamours back up. No one needs to have a heart attack tonight." Mea said softly, waving her hand at Harry. It always fascinated the other to watch the features that identified them as twins disappear. They looked nothing alike with the glamours on, without them was a different story.
Hence, they let the other put the glamour back up. So, Mea watched avidly as brother's long, silky raven hair disappeared and became short and messy, lightening just slightly. His skin, scarred from heavy abuse tanned and became flawless. His eyes dimmed from the glowing green they had been, the circles under them disappeared and the haunted look in them was hidden. To Mea he even seemed to shrink a little, she always thought it was from the weight of acting, from being the golden 'boy-who-lived'.
PERPETRATOR: Flames of the Goddess224
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: Their avatar, which is supposed to be a dragon made from flames, but the mouth got cut off even on the site.
FULL NAME: Mea and Harry Potter
SPECIES: Daemon
HAIR: She has “mid-back wavy raven hair”. Harry's “hair was down to just past his shoulder blades, and his bangs almost covered his emerald green eyes.” When he puts the glamour back on “, Mea watched avidly as brother's long, silky raven hair disappeared and became short and messy, lightening just slightly.” Her hair in torn becomes short, “no unlike his own”
EYES: See above for Harry's eye color. When the glamour is put on... “His eyes dimmed from the glowing green they had been, the circles under them disappeared and the haunted look in them was hidden.” “Her eyes [without the glamour], the same shade of emerald as his, fairly glowed with power.” Without the glamour though, “her eyes sparkled with a special amount of energy that only she had, Mea almost bounced in place with happiness that filled all of those around her.”
MARKINGS: She has a “lightening bolt scar under her eys-one of the two famous ones- [that] gleamed with dried tear tracks.” “His skin, scarred from heavy abuse tanned and became flawless.” “Without the glamour, Mea was pale, almost vampyre looking, she had purple bruise looking circles under her eyes, highlighting her own famous scar that ran from just under her eye to the top of her cheek. “ “Her scars were only visible to him, to the others in the world Mea was tanned “ Also, “The glamours were down, revealing that Harry and Mea were indeed almost identical.”
POSSESSIONS: They share a room.
CONNECTION TO CANON: We have the twins setting off to the bank to get their creature inheritance, but they haven't a clue what they were going to be. The boglin tells them, “the glamorus... they're endangering your magic, the inheritance will draw on it. Keeping them up will lower you immunities and magic levels in the upcoming months.” We then get a whole boring speech about daemon bonding, the “familia bond” and how daemon to daemon bonds are different when its with a human”. They then go and talk to Fred and George before going and looking up the Daemon types. There are two chapters past that, but... I'm having a problem being interested in something that feels way to much like original work.
ORIGIN: These two annoying Daemon decided to kill off Harry Potter and replace him tricking even the Goblins despite the fact they speak in such an inhuman manner.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The two have special glamours they put over themselves because they are both to beautiful and too identical to each other. They have a special bond that means Harry will be protective to the extreme of his sister. There is also a whole thing about mating bonds.
NOTES: Creature inheritances... good grief..
SAMPLE:
"If this is true, it changes everything." A girl muttered. She glanced at the door and nervously ran a hand through her mid-back wavy raven hair. The lightening bolt scar under her eyes-one of the two famous ones-gleamed with dried tear tracks. She shifted and laid her head on the shoulder of the boy next her. He wrapped an arm around her. "Everything would be different for. Or everyone could hate us."
"I know Mea, I know." The boy said. He too kept glancing at the door. The hair was down to just past his shoulder blades, and his bangs almost completely covered his emerald green eyes. You couldn't even see his lightening bolt scar. "But if the goblins are right, and they usually are, then we'll have to tell Sirius and Remus before school."
"And Percy and Olli, they're around more and more often." Mea added, giving Harry a small smile. "They should just admit they like each other. Get rid of the sexual tension."
Harry laughed, "I know what you mean. One more dinner and I may just lock them in a room alone. Come back in the morning."
"Harry! Mea! Percy and Oliver are here for dinner! Come on!" Sirius shouted from down the hall. The twins shared a grin as the stood. Speak of the devil and they shall appear.
"Hold on, we need to put the glamours back up. No one needs to have a heart attack tonight." Mea said softly, waving her hand at Harry. It always fascinated the other to watch the features that identified them as twins disappear. They looked nothing alike with the glamours on, without them was a different story.
Hence, they let the other put the glamour back up. So, Mea watched avidly as brother's long, silky raven hair disappeared and became short and messy, lightening just slightly. His skin, scarred from heavy abuse tanned and became flawless. His eyes dimmed from the glowing green they had been, the circles under them disappeared and the haunted look in them was hidden. To Mea he even seemed to shrink a little, she always thought it was from the weight of acting, from being the golden 'boy-who-lived'.