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Here is day five. I checked my inbox yesterday and found this bit of wank.
TITLE: Queen of the Hunt
PERPETRATOR: YuriFanGirl15
SUE-O-METER:
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar. I haven't a clue what it is supposed to be of.
FULL NAME: Hermione, Minerva, Bellatrix and Fleur
SPECIES: Hermione is some kind of royalty. She's also a werewolf.
HAIR: It should be like canon, but there is no telling nor am I going to dig into this one.
EYES: See above...
MARKINGS: See above...
POSSESSIONS: Hermione happens to have four soul mates who will help her fight against darkness.
CONNECTION TO CANON: None. The first chapter is about Hermione getting sorted into Gryffindor and the sorting hat bragging about Hermione's special blood line. Second chapter involves Hermione calling Ron a bloody git and her saying things like “by the Goddess” and “what the Goddess is going on”. The troll then speaks about how a two faced man came and shoved potions down his throat. The rest is a major yawn simply because... well, when I read Harry Potter fanfic I want it to be Harry Potter fanfic, not original fiction.
ORIGIN: Here is the summary. “AU OOC Futa Femslash Hermione Granger is destined for greatness. Since the day she was born her lineage promised her power. She was meant to fight against the darkness and was chosen by Artemis herself. As Hermione grows stronger, so does the darkness. Even with all of her power and strength, she will need allies, she will need her Soul Mates to get her through. HG/MM/FD/BL/NM “
SPECIAL ABILITIES: According to the author's note for the first chapter... “AU OOC Futa Femslash Hermione Granger is destined for greatness. Since the day she was born her lineage promised her power. She was meant to fight against the darkness and was chosen by Artemis herself. As Hermione grows stronger, so does the darkness. Even with all of her power and strength, she will need allies, she will need her Soul Mates to get her through. HG/MM/FD/BL/NM” Also, we get this from the first chapter. “We wolves can differentiate ourselves from mere humans. And this woman was a werewolf, has been for a while it seems. It looks like she wants to keep the fact that she ages slower than others a secret. After a certain age we wolves start to age slower than humans. Though those with magical blood live and look younger than they should be we live nearly two times longer. The wolf blood makes our body stronger.” Hermione gets to call McGonagall by her first name. According to the author's note in chapter three. “Yes, there is a special connection between my lycans. The wolf inside will immediately recognize its soul mate. And before you even think about asking, Hermione's mate instinct has not kicked in yet as she is only like 13. That is why she hasn't recognized Minerva as one of her soul mates yet, and vice versa. Minerva will not recognize Hermione as her soul mate because Hermione is not of the proper age yet.”
NOTES: Another story where the writer admits right in the summary that their story is both AU and OoC. According to an author's note for the third chapter, “Yes, I am kind of merging the ideas from Harry Potter and Underworld but this story has nothing to do with Twilight. I know that I brought up the Volturi in the past, but that was just to get my point about Hermione's clan across.” Chapter four is an author's note which is against site rules because they got a negative review. Having read the review and the authors note.... well, the review was spot on and the defenses the writer came up with are bad. Also... is it just me, or am I finding more and more toxic stories as I go along?
SAMPLE:
There are three clans in total, the Meniscus clan, the Luna Plena clan, and lastly the Luna Nova clan. The Plena are respectful of our rule and leadership but the Nova are bitter and resentful toward us. The Nova had sided with the dark but has done nothing to rise against us as of yet. We the Meniscus won our right to rule many centuries ago in The Wolf War and were given the blessing from the Goddess. In tales of old, passed on through generations, it is said that Artemis herself conducted the ascension of my families rule.
(A/N: Meniscus family is the royal family. The Meniscus Clan is the entire clan is general. Those of the Meniscus Clan do not necessary have Meniscus family blood in them. Hermione's family is the Meniscus family. They rule over all three clans but they themselves are categorized as part of the Meniscus Clan. For example, The Volturi (bear with me) are a clan, but the only ones of power are of the "Volturi family", Aro, Caius, and Marcus. I know they are not related but, do you get my point?)
"Dear, you must board the train before it leaves without you." Mom says as she lifts my trunk onto the train. Mother is silently crying as I hop onto the train. Mom rustles my hair while Mother squeezes me into one last hug.
Mother releases me and they both step back as the train jerks in an effort to move. I look at both my mothers with love.
"I love you. I'll see you at Christmas." I tell them as the train starts to move slowly.
TITLE: Queen of the Hunt
PERPETRATOR: YuriFanGirl15
SUE-O-METER:
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar. I haven't a clue what it is supposed to be of.
FULL NAME: Hermione, Minerva, Bellatrix and Fleur
SPECIES: Hermione is some kind of royalty. She's also a werewolf.
HAIR: It should be like canon, but there is no telling nor am I going to dig into this one.
EYES: See above...
MARKINGS: See above...
POSSESSIONS: Hermione happens to have four soul mates who will help her fight against darkness.
CONNECTION TO CANON: None. The first chapter is about Hermione getting sorted into Gryffindor and the sorting hat bragging about Hermione's special blood line. Second chapter involves Hermione calling Ron a bloody git and her saying things like “by the Goddess” and “what the Goddess is going on”. The troll then speaks about how a two faced man came and shoved potions down his throat. The rest is a major yawn simply because... well, when I read Harry Potter fanfic I want it to be Harry Potter fanfic, not original fiction.
ORIGIN: Here is the summary. “AU OOC Futa Femslash Hermione Granger is destined for greatness. Since the day she was born her lineage promised her power. She was meant to fight against the darkness and was chosen by Artemis herself. As Hermione grows stronger, so does the darkness. Even with all of her power and strength, she will need allies, she will need her Soul Mates to get her through. HG/MM/FD/BL/NM “
SPECIAL ABILITIES: According to the author's note for the first chapter... “AU OOC Futa Femslash Hermione Granger is destined for greatness. Since the day she was born her lineage promised her power. She was meant to fight against the darkness and was chosen by Artemis herself. As Hermione grows stronger, so does the darkness. Even with all of her power and strength, she will need allies, she will need her Soul Mates to get her through. HG/MM/FD/BL/NM” Also, we get this from the first chapter. “We wolves can differentiate ourselves from mere humans. And this woman was a werewolf, has been for a while it seems. It looks like she wants to keep the fact that she ages slower than others a secret. After a certain age we wolves start to age slower than humans. Though those with magical blood live and look younger than they should be we live nearly two times longer. The wolf blood makes our body stronger.” Hermione gets to call McGonagall by her first name. According to the author's note in chapter three. “Yes, there is a special connection between my lycans. The wolf inside will immediately recognize its soul mate. And before you even think about asking, Hermione's mate instinct has not kicked in yet as she is only like 13. That is why she hasn't recognized Minerva as one of her soul mates yet, and vice versa. Minerva will not recognize Hermione as her soul mate because Hermione is not of the proper age yet.”
NOTES: Another story where the writer admits right in the summary that their story is both AU and OoC. According to an author's note for the third chapter, “Yes, I am kind of merging the ideas from Harry Potter and Underworld but this story has nothing to do with Twilight. I know that I brought up the Volturi in the past, but that was just to get my point about Hermione's clan across.” Chapter four is an author's note which is against site rules because they got a negative review. Having read the review and the authors note.... well, the review was spot on and the defenses the writer came up with are bad. Also... is it just me, or am I finding more and more toxic stories as I go along?
SAMPLE:
There are three clans in total, the Meniscus clan, the Luna Plena clan, and lastly the Luna Nova clan. The Plena are respectful of our rule and leadership but the Nova are bitter and resentful toward us. The Nova had sided with the dark but has done nothing to rise against us as of yet. We the Meniscus won our right to rule many centuries ago in The Wolf War and were given the blessing from the Goddess. In tales of old, passed on through generations, it is said that Artemis herself conducted the ascension of my families rule.
(A/N: Meniscus family is the royal family. The Meniscus Clan is the entire clan is general. Those of the Meniscus Clan do not necessary have Meniscus family blood in them. Hermione's family is the Meniscus family. They rule over all three clans but they themselves are categorized as part of the Meniscus Clan. For example, The Volturi (bear with me) are a clan, but the only ones of power are of the "Volturi family", Aro, Caius, and Marcus. I know they are not related but, do you get my point?)
"Dear, you must board the train before it leaves without you." Mom says as she lifts my trunk onto the train. Mother is silently crying as I hop onto the train. Mom rustles my hair while Mother squeezes me into one last hug.
Mother releases me and they both step back as the train jerks in an effort to move. I look at both my mothers with love.
"I love you. I'll see you at Christmas." I tell them as the train starts to move slowly.