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TITLE: Draco Malfoy and the Bloodstone
PERPETRATOR: Quothed Nevermore
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: None
FULL NAME: Lisha Luralby and Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: She's a Sacrosanct Vampire
HAIR: “The shape of her face was hidden by locks of dark brown hair and a black hood pulled just above her forehead.”
EYES: Lisha has “sad brown eyes” The writer likes to call them the sad-eyes as well.
MARKINGS: “She was pretty, but not very healthy-looking, as if she had been sick for months. Her pale face also reflected that.” She's also a “somber-looking girl in her school robe, a light travel bag and a cage with a small owl that hooted unhappily when the three entered.”
POSSESSIONS: Draco has a duffel bag. Lisha has a red hoody.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Draco meets the sickly Lisha on the train. He then manages later on to get in a fight with Ron. He then meets up with her in the carriage and goes, “You! You.. you!!” For some reason he doesn't want to be around her. Turns out she's in their house. Draco makes comments about how she likely left because of extreme poverty. He's then wanting to sit away from Lisha during class. He gets paired with Lisha and yells that he would rather be paired with Harry Potter. Then in the next class her robes caught fire and the reason is not explained. Decided to skip to the last chapter as this story is horribly bored. And I found this line. "Which is why it is important that you bring the goblet right to her.Her fate in death as the Sacrosanct Vampire by the hand of a minion of evil is worse than becoming a Shade." Found out that Draco's dislike really dragged on a bit to long. Also, the reviews are as boring as the actual story.
ORIGIN: She's a sickly Sue.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Draco says, “We would recognize a fourth year.” She says, “It's understandable, though, why I'm not memorable.” And then the Bloody Baron floats over and says, “I remember when you were first sent over to the Slytherin house. I stopped Peeves from dropping a.... a.... water ballon, that's it, on you.” Apparently she left for “personal reasons [she'd] rather not discuss.” She's also able to tell Snape she missed his lessons and get a positive response from Snape. Also, “Malfoy surprised himself with how much he despised a person, a full-blooded witch no less, in a time span of less than two full days.”
NOTES: Draco's dislike of this Sue is horribly unrealistic. Also, normally everybody likes the Sue, but in this case we have someone hating her for no good reason. Actually, I think the writer spent a little to much time trying to create problems just so the character wouldn't be called a Sue.
SAMPLE:
Again, the dark pools stared at them, and finally landed on Crabbe. He was taken aback by her silent defiance. His mouth dropped open.
"First years," Malfoy mumbled. He said, and his mindless followers did as well.
The train whistle blew again, signaling the train was departing.
"Fourth year." The soft voice startled the three.
"What was that about fourth years?!" Goyle stood, but feel back into his seat as the train jerked forward, picking up speed. Crabbe began cracking his knuckles and pounding his fist into his palm. When the train started moving, he stood and walked over to her, as if he were about to deck her. Malfoy smacked the much larger Crabbe on the side of the head, and he obediently sat.
"WE are fourth years. If you were, we'd remember someone as pathetic-looking as you are."
The insult had nary an affect on her. "I am a fourth year," she said mechanically, monotonously, as if she were drained. "In Slytherin." To her, it seemed the response was adequate enough information. She could tell, most definitely, by the looks on their faces her words brought to them no content or answers.
Draco mumbled something under his breath about if she was a Slytherin, they'd definitely know her. He stood and proclaimed, "All right. Let's go find Potter. We didn't welcome him back to Hogwarts yet."
TITLE: Draco Malfoy and the Bloodstone
PERPETRATOR: Quothed Nevermore
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: None
FULL NAME: Lisha Luralby and Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: She's a Sacrosanct Vampire
HAIR: “The shape of her face was hidden by locks of dark brown hair and a black hood pulled just above her forehead.”
EYES: Lisha has “sad brown eyes” The writer likes to call them the sad-eyes as well.
MARKINGS: “She was pretty, but not very healthy-looking, as if she had been sick for months. Her pale face also reflected that.” She's also a “somber-looking girl in her school robe, a light travel bag and a cage with a small owl that hooted unhappily when the three entered.”
POSSESSIONS: Draco has a duffel bag. Lisha has a red hoody.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Draco meets the sickly Lisha on the train. He then manages later on to get in a fight with Ron. He then meets up with her in the carriage and goes, “You! You.. you!!” For some reason he doesn't want to be around her. Turns out she's in their house. Draco makes comments about how she likely left because of extreme poverty. He's then wanting to sit away from Lisha during class. He gets paired with Lisha and yells that he would rather be paired with Harry Potter. Then in the next class her robes caught fire and the reason is not explained. Decided to skip to the last chapter as this story is horribly bored. And I found this line. "Which is why it is important that you bring the goblet right to her.Her fate in death as the Sacrosanct Vampire by the hand of a minion of evil is worse than becoming a Shade." Found out that Draco's dislike really dragged on a bit to long. Also, the reviews are as boring as the actual story.
ORIGIN: She's a sickly Sue.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Draco says, “We would recognize a fourth year.” She says, “It's understandable, though, why I'm not memorable.” And then the Bloody Baron floats over and says, “I remember when you were first sent over to the Slytherin house. I stopped Peeves from dropping a.... a.... water ballon, that's it, on you.” Apparently she left for “personal reasons [she'd] rather not discuss.” She's also able to tell Snape she missed his lessons and get a positive response from Snape. Also, “Malfoy surprised himself with how much he despised a person, a full-blooded witch no less, in a time span of less than two full days.”
NOTES: Draco's dislike of this Sue is horribly unrealistic. Also, normally everybody likes the Sue, but in this case we have someone hating her for no good reason. Actually, I think the writer spent a little to much time trying to create problems just so the character wouldn't be called a Sue.
SAMPLE:
Again, the dark pools stared at them, and finally landed on Crabbe. He was taken aback by her silent defiance. His mouth dropped open.
"First years," Malfoy mumbled. He said, and his mindless followers did as well.
The train whistle blew again, signaling the train was departing.
"Fourth year." The soft voice startled the three.
"What was that about fourth years?!" Goyle stood, but feel back into his seat as the train jerked forward, picking up speed. Crabbe began cracking his knuckles and pounding his fist into his palm. When the train started moving, he stood and walked over to her, as if he were about to deck her. Malfoy smacked the much larger Crabbe on the side of the head, and he obediently sat.
"WE are fourth years. If you were, we'd remember someone as pathetic-looking as you are."
The insult had nary an affect on her. "I am a fourth year," she said mechanically, monotonously, as if she were drained. "In Slytherin." To her, it seemed the response was adequate enough information. She could tell, most definitely, by the looks on their faces her words brought to them no content or answers.
Draco mumbled something under his breath about if she was a Slytherin, they'd definitely know her. He stood and proclaimed, "All right. Let's go find Potter. We didn't welcome him back to Hogwarts yet."