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I skipped a story that had a Sue paired with Semus in it because while it had over nine thousand words, it also lacked substance of any kind. And it is a one-shot. That reminds me, don't forget about the contest. :D
On the twelfth day of Christmas the Suethor's gave to me
A little loving for Ronald Weasly
A mysterious girl with mysterious connections.
A person other then Lily Evans for Snape to love
A multi universe sue in both dimensions and fandoms
An ultra sweet sister for Nymphadora Tonks
A rather obvious self insert by the Suethor
A whole series of fanfics about one Sue
A girl that Remus just happened to need
A Christmas Ball happening every year
A godmother to step in for Sirius for Harry
A tiny female who Snape happens to fine
A German girlfriend for poor Fred Weasley
TITLE: A Dinner to Remember
PERPETRATOR: FantasyRW15
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: The title of the fic sideways with “It's Not Your Average Dinner” and “One-Shot!” and the writers name. I didn't think the dinner was anything special really.
FULL NAME: Lynn, Leene and Hermione
SPECIES: miss annoying
HAIR: “Leene and Lynn walked up to the front door of the Burrow with their dresses on and their hair done very neatly.”
EYES: “He complimented me saying that my eyes were a pretty chocolate brown!”
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Lynn... “an orange, one silver-sleeved dress with silver sparkles encircling the entire gown” and Leene... “a light blue dress that ended in purple, also with silver sparkles and with a fabric star right at the hip, holding a pretty sash”
CONNECTION TO CANON: The Weasly family is having a special dinner and these girls are invited. Hermione gets all jealous and is treated like dirt and complains about “Where's my happily ever after?”. She storms off upstairs and then Ron and she kiss under the mistletoe.
ORIGIN: I love it when the summary does the job for me. “Ron has always liked this girl that's a friend in the family. She was going to attend Hogwarts with her twin sister in third year, but when they suddenly moved, Ron could no longer be with his one true love. Then, one Christmas break, the twins are invited over for dinner. Will Ron and his true love still have feeling for each other? And will Hermione get jealous?”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Her moving happens to prevent her from attending Hogwarts despite the fact Hogwarts takes students from across the entire UK. If Draco could have attended Durmstrang despite living in the UK, then they could have attended Hogwarts despite living in Fance. Lynn also seems to have the ability to make. She's also Ron's true love. Also, “Hermione went red with rage and jealousy. She wasn't very pleased with the fact that Ron had liked a girl that wasn't her, or maybe still likes her since he acted that way when she said her name...”
NOTES: I don't see how Harry and Hermione couldn't have known about Lynn and Leene. If Ron hadn't mentioned them then one of the other Weasly family members would have.
SAMPLE:
"Ugh!" Ron finally broke the silence in the room. "Who are these guests that are so important anyways?" interrogated Ron, annoyed. "I mean, we have guests coming over to eat all the time, but none of them were so important that we had to bloody deprive ourselves of food just because they were coming!"
Hermione shook her head. "Ronald, you and your food, can't you just hold your hunger just for a couple of hours until the guests arrive? Plus, Ginny told me that some of the guests that were coming were old family friends. I'm not sure what the names of everyone were, but I caught the names Lynn and Leene."
Ron's jaw dropped. Those names seemed to have bothered him. Not in a bad way but in a surprised way. He hadn't seen Lynn and Leene since he was in the third year. They decided to move from America to England, but right before they were going to attend Hogwarts they transferred to Beauxbatons. Not a very smart move he had thought at the time, but he guessed that was only his opinion.
He remembered the many times he went to Diagon Alley with Lynn… The many times he bought her a butterbeer, or the way they would always sit outside of the Burrow and watch the sun set. He sighed as he remembered those times… They had almost dated, but since she was moving to France, what was the point? Long distance relationships usually never lasted. Not that he even had the courage to ask her out on a real date, but he always intended to. But, now that she was coming over for Christmas, it changed his opinion about the "important guests" thing completely. Lynn was important.
On the twelfth day of Christmas the Suethor's gave to me
A little loving for Ronald Weasly
A mysterious girl with mysterious connections.
A person other then Lily Evans for Snape to love
A multi universe sue in both dimensions and fandoms
An ultra sweet sister for Nymphadora Tonks
A rather obvious self insert by the Suethor
A whole series of fanfics about one Sue
A girl that Remus just happened to need
A Christmas Ball happening every year
A godmother to step in for Sirius for Harry
A tiny female who Snape happens to fine
A German girlfriend for poor Fred Weasley
TITLE: A Dinner to Remember
PERPETRATOR: FantasyRW15
SUE-O-METER:
(bad)
COVER/BANNER ART: The title of the fic sideways with “It's Not Your Average Dinner” and “One-Shot!” and the writers name. I didn't think the dinner was anything special really.
FULL NAME: Lynn, Leene and Hermione
SPECIES: miss annoying
HAIR: “Leene and Lynn walked up to the front door of the Burrow with their dresses on and their hair done very neatly.”
EYES: “He complimented me saying that my eyes were a pretty chocolate brown!”
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Lynn... “an orange, one silver-sleeved dress with silver sparkles encircling the entire gown” and Leene... “a light blue dress that ended in purple, also with silver sparkles and with a fabric star right at the hip, holding a pretty sash”
CONNECTION TO CANON: The Weasly family is having a special dinner and these girls are invited. Hermione gets all jealous and is treated like dirt and complains about “Where's my happily ever after?”. She storms off upstairs and then Ron and she kiss under the mistletoe.
ORIGIN: I love it when the summary does the job for me. “Ron has always liked this girl that's a friend in the family. She was going to attend Hogwarts with her twin sister in third year, but when they suddenly moved, Ron could no longer be with his one true love. Then, one Christmas break, the twins are invited over for dinner. Will Ron and his true love still have feeling for each other? And will Hermione get jealous?”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Her moving happens to prevent her from attending Hogwarts despite the fact Hogwarts takes students from across the entire UK. If Draco could have attended Durmstrang despite living in the UK, then they could have attended Hogwarts despite living in Fance. Lynn also seems to have the ability to make. She's also Ron's true love. Also, “Hermione went red with rage and jealousy. She wasn't very pleased with the fact that Ron had liked a girl that wasn't her, or maybe still likes her since he acted that way when she said her name...”
NOTES: I don't see how Harry and Hermione couldn't have known about Lynn and Leene. If Ron hadn't mentioned them then one of the other Weasly family members would have.
SAMPLE:
"Ugh!" Ron finally broke the silence in the room. "Who are these guests that are so important anyways?" interrogated Ron, annoyed. "I mean, we have guests coming over to eat all the time, but none of them were so important that we had to bloody deprive ourselves of food just because they were coming!"
Hermione shook her head. "Ronald, you and your food, can't you just hold your hunger just for a couple of hours until the guests arrive? Plus, Ginny told me that some of the guests that were coming were old family friends. I'm not sure what the names of everyone were, but I caught the names Lynn and Leene."
Ron's jaw dropped. Those names seemed to have bothered him. Not in a bad way but in a surprised way. He hadn't seen Lynn and Leene since he was in the third year. They decided to move from America to England, but right before they were going to attend Hogwarts they transferred to Beauxbatons. Not a very smart move he had thought at the time, but he guessed that was only his opinion.
He remembered the many times he went to Diagon Alley with Lynn… The many times he bought her a butterbeer, or the way they would always sit outside of the Burrow and watch the sun set. He sighed as he remembered those times… They had almost dated, but since she was moving to France, what was the point? Long distance relationships usually never lasted. Not that he even had the courage to ask her out on a real date, but he always intended to. But, now that she was coming over for Christmas, it changed his opinion about the "important guests" thing completely. Lynn was important.