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TITLE: Padfoot's Pride (The Story of Sirius Black's Daughter)
PERPETRATOR: yodudette
BANNER: Creepy Sirius is Creepy
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Carter Artemis Black aka you
SPECIES: witch
HAIR: "Long Curly Black hair"
EYES: "Deep Brown Eyes"
MARKINGS: "Slim figure with curves in all the right places. Looks around 16 [but is 13]. Very developed for her age, Gorgeous. Basically a female Sirius."
POSSESSIONS: clothes that are not described in any way. See "Notes" for explanation
ORIGIN: Sirius and Esmerelda had Carter, then Esmerelda went and married Remus, and they have a son together. She is the same age as Harry. No one knows, yet, that she is Sirius' daughter.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She helps out Remus during the full moon like her father did. I don't know how much use a 13 year-old is going to be against an adult werewolf. That is not the least of this stories' logic issues, though. She is best friends with the Trio and will be paired with Harry. She is a third-year Gryffindor.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: "You aren’t an ordinary witch, your known as a Beta. Your the last of your kind. A Beta is a witch that is born an anigmas, can do wand less magic and read other people’s mind. As the Beta magic is so rare many people are after her magic (cough Voldemort cough) so a person close to the Beta becomes the protector. The protector can talk to the Beta through their mind no matter the distance and can feel the Beta’s emotions. Carter’s Protector is Sirius." Her name in animagus form is "Paws". That is much better than the usual: Moonshadow, Vixen, Glitter Star, etc. She is a "prankster", as well.
NOTES: It appears that the Suethor's image codes for the Sue's clothing does work. This means we have blank spaces and no words describing what she is wearing. Nice! This is why you use words to describe things in stories, and not just pictures.
SAMPLE:
“Morning everyone,” I greeted kissing my mum and Remus on the cheek and blowing a raspberry on my 7 year old brothers cheek.
“Morning sweetie, are you already to go?” My mum asked as I sat down to eat.
“Yes mum,”
“Good, Now remember Remus is going to be there so you better behave,”
“Mum, when do I ever miss behave?” I asked before changing into my Anigmas form “Paws” and pulling the best puppy dog eyes I could.
“Oh I don’t know, maybe when you dyed Professor Snape’s hair and skin Pink, when you hung Draco Malfoy upside down in his underwear from a chandelier.” Oh man the good times.
“You’re definitely your father’s daughter.” It’s true I am a mini replica of my dad. With the black looks and my dad’s attitude. Although I can talk to him whenever I want because of my power, I still miss him.
“Well if you’re finished eating should we go?” Remus asked trying to avoid me being sad and dwelling on my dad to long.
“Sure Remus,” I kissed my mum and baby brother goodbye before grabbing my trunk and Remus’ arm before side-apparating to Platform 9 ¾.
“I’m going to wait for my friends, is that ok?”
“It’s fine, I’ll see you at school!” Remus replied before kissing my cheek and leaving to board the train.
It wasn’t long before my best friends ever came up to me. Well more like ran.
“CARTER” Hermione screamed before knocking me to the floor with her hug.
“Hey Mione, I missed you too, but to you mind getting off of me?”
“Oh sorry,” she replied while slowly getting up.
“No problem,” I took the hand being offered and pulled myself up.
“Thanks Harry,” I said hugging my best friend.
“No problem” Once i released Harry i hugged Ron before suggesting to get on the train.
We walked along the train looking for an empty compartment. It was proving to be impossible. I finally found a compartment with only one person in it. Remus.
“Let’s just go in here,” I said
“Are you sure it will be alright, i mean that’s a Professor.”
“It’s Professor Lupin Mione, my step-dad.” I pushed open the door and made my way in and sat next to Remus. Mione sat next to me with Ron opposite her, and Harry was opposite me.
“Do you think he’s really asleep. I need to tell you something?” Harry asked us all.
“Wait for it...” SNORE“Yeah his asleep.” I said with a slight giggle.
Harry closed the door and told us all about how Sirius Black had escaped Azkaban to kill him.
I couldn’t believe my dad had escaped Azkaban, not only that on of my best friends thinks he wants to kill him. My dad wouldn’t do that though. His innocent. I decided to talk to my dad, get some answers.
(A/N: *Means convo in someone’s head or between Sirius and Carter* also when Sirius and Carter talk Sirius is Blue and Carter is Red )
*ARE YOU MAD, HOW DID YOU ESCAPE AND WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME?*
*Hello to you too*
*NOT THE TIME FOR SARCASM DAD*
*Sorry sweetie, and to answer your question i couldn’t stand being away from you anymore and i didn’t tell you cause i knew this would happen*
*Yes dad, make me feel guilty for yelling now why don’t ya*
*You should be sorry, I’ve got a bit of a headache now*
* Sorry, where are you anyway?*
*I don’t really know i’m just kind of going with the flow. Where are you?*
*On my way to Hogwarts, Dad i better go before my friends realise i’m spacing out. I love you Padfoot!*
*I love you too Paws*
I came back by a hand being waved in front of my face.
“Huh, sorry what?”
“Are you alright you were spacing out?”
“Yeah just thinking that’s all”
“Ok.”
All of a sudden the train came to a stop.
“Why are we stopping, surely we can’t be there yet?”
“Dunno, but there’s something moving out there” Ron answered Hermione Shakily. The Glass started to Ice up around Ron’s hand.
“I think something’s coming aboard.” We sat in silence until an old bony hand opened the compartment door and a hooded figure came through. The compartment turned cold and depressing as the hooded figure came closer to Harry and started to suck. We watched in horror as Harry started going rigid. That was until Remus woke up.
“EXPECTO PROTONUM” (A/N: I have no idea how to spell it but you get the idea) Causing the Figure to flee and Harry to collapse. Seconds later he came back around.
“What was that thing?” He asked as i handed him his glasses.
“A Dementor, one of the guards of Azkaban, It was probably searching the train for Sirius Black” Remus replied making a sideways glance at me towards the end.
“Here eat this; it will make you feel better.” Remus said offering Harry some Chocolate. He looked at me before taking the sweet mumbling a “thanks.”
“Now if you excuse me I have to have a word with the driver.” With that he left.
TITLE: Padfoot's Pride (The Story of Sirius Black's Daughter)
PERPETRATOR: yodudette
BANNER: Creepy Sirius is Creepy
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Carter Artemis Black aka you
SPECIES: witch
HAIR: "Long Curly Black hair"
EYES: "Deep Brown Eyes"
MARKINGS: "Slim figure with curves in all the right places. Looks around 16 [but is 13]. Very developed for her age, Gorgeous. Basically a female Sirius."
POSSESSIONS: clothes that are not described in any way. See "Notes" for explanation
ORIGIN: Sirius and Esmerelda had Carter, then Esmerelda went and married Remus, and they have a son together. She is the same age as Harry. No one knows, yet, that she is Sirius' daughter.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She helps out Remus during the full moon like her father did. I don't know how much use a 13 year-old is going to be against an adult werewolf. That is not the least of this stories' logic issues, though. She is best friends with the Trio and will be paired with Harry. She is a third-year Gryffindor.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: "You aren’t an ordinary witch, your known as a Beta. Your the last of your kind. A Beta is a witch that is born an anigmas, can do wand less magic and read other people’s mind. As the Beta magic is so rare many people are after her magic (cough Voldemort cough) so a person close to the Beta becomes the protector. The protector can talk to the Beta through their mind no matter the distance and can feel the Beta’s emotions. Carter’s Protector is Sirius." Her name in animagus form is "Paws". That is much better than the usual: Moonshadow, Vixen, Glitter Star, etc. She is a "prankster", as well.
NOTES: It appears that the Suethor's image codes for the Sue's clothing does work. This means we have blank spaces and no words describing what she is wearing. Nice! This is why you use words to describe things in stories, and not just pictures.
SAMPLE:
“Morning everyone,” I greeted kissing my mum and Remus on the cheek and blowing a raspberry on my 7 year old brothers cheek.
“Morning sweetie, are you already to go?” My mum asked as I sat down to eat.
“Yes mum,”
“Good, Now remember Remus is going to be there so you better behave,”
“Mum, when do I ever miss behave?” I asked before changing into my Anigmas form “Paws” and pulling the best puppy dog eyes I could.
“Oh I don’t know, maybe when you dyed Professor Snape’s hair and skin Pink, when you hung Draco Malfoy upside down in his underwear from a chandelier.” Oh man the good times.
“You’re definitely your father’s daughter.” It’s true I am a mini replica of my dad. With the black looks and my dad’s attitude. Although I can talk to him whenever I want because of my power, I still miss him.
“Well if you’re finished eating should we go?” Remus asked trying to avoid me being sad and dwelling on my dad to long.
“Sure Remus,” I kissed my mum and baby brother goodbye before grabbing my trunk and Remus’ arm before side-apparating to Platform 9 ¾.
“I’m going to wait for my friends, is that ok?”
“It’s fine, I’ll see you at school!” Remus replied before kissing my cheek and leaving to board the train.
It wasn’t long before my best friends ever came up to me. Well more like ran.
“CARTER” Hermione screamed before knocking me to the floor with her hug.
“Hey Mione, I missed you too, but to you mind getting off of me?”
“Oh sorry,” she replied while slowly getting up.
“No problem,” I took the hand being offered and pulled myself up.
“Thanks Harry,” I said hugging my best friend.
“No problem” Once i released Harry i hugged Ron before suggesting to get on the train.
We walked along the train looking for an empty compartment. It was proving to be impossible. I finally found a compartment with only one person in it. Remus.
“Let’s just go in here,” I said
“Are you sure it will be alright, i mean that’s a Professor.”
“It’s Professor Lupin Mione, my step-dad.” I pushed open the door and made my way in and sat next to Remus. Mione sat next to me with Ron opposite her, and Harry was opposite me.
“Do you think he’s really asleep. I need to tell you something?” Harry asked us all.
“Wait for it...” SNORE“Yeah his asleep.” I said with a slight giggle.
Harry closed the door and told us all about how Sirius Black had escaped Azkaban to kill him.
I couldn’t believe my dad had escaped Azkaban, not only that on of my best friends thinks he wants to kill him. My dad wouldn’t do that though. His innocent. I decided to talk to my dad, get some answers.
(A/N: *Means convo in someone’s head or between Sirius and Carter* also when Sirius and Carter talk Sirius is Blue and Carter is Red )
*ARE YOU MAD, HOW DID YOU ESCAPE AND WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME?*
*Hello to you too*
*NOT THE TIME FOR SARCASM DAD*
*Sorry sweetie, and to answer your question i couldn’t stand being away from you anymore and i didn’t tell you cause i knew this would happen*
*Yes dad, make me feel guilty for yelling now why don’t ya*
*You should be sorry, I’ve got a bit of a headache now*
* Sorry, where are you anyway?*
*I don’t really know i’m just kind of going with the flow. Where are you?*
*On my way to Hogwarts, Dad i better go before my friends realise i’m spacing out. I love you Padfoot!*
*I love you too Paws*
I came back by a hand being waved in front of my face.
“Huh, sorry what?”
“Are you alright you were spacing out?”
“Yeah just thinking that’s all”
“Ok.”
All of a sudden the train came to a stop.
“Why are we stopping, surely we can’t be there yet?”
“Dunno, but there’s something moving out there” Ron answered Hermione Shakily. The Glass started to Ice up around Ron’s hand.
“I think something’s coming aboard.” We sat in silence until an old bony hand opened the compartment door and a hooded figure came through. The compartment turned cold and depressing as the hooded figure came closer to Harry and started to suck. We watched in horror as Harry started going rigid. That was until Remus woke up.
“EXPECTO PROTONUM” (A/N: I have no idea how to spell it but you get the idea) Causing the Figure to flee and Harry to collapse. Seconds later he came back around.
“What was that thing?” He asked as i handed him his glasses.
“A Dementor, one of the guards of Azkaban, It was probably searching the train for Sirius Black” Remus replied making a sideways glance at me towards the end.
“Here eat this; it will make you feel better.” Remus said offering Harry some Chocolate. He looked at me before taking the sweet mumbling a “thanks.”
“Now if you excuse me I have to have a word with the driver.” With that he left.