0017: Story for Alli - Alli

[pottersues]

Today's isn't as interesting as the last few - just spectacularly bad.

TITLE: Story for Alli
PERPETRATOR: Eurika-lee

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

Comments

Punctuation is good. Punctuation is our friend.

[anonymous]

This author's comma and fullstop button cannot function. I know some authors who put way too many peroids in one sentance. They can probably lend this poor punctuation-lacking girl a few.
I can see why she failed her Geometry exam.

"I was just wondering if this seat was taken" the girl asked.
"No have a seat"
"Thanks my name is Alli"
"Im Harry?"

Yes, you're Harry? And I'm wondering why you're ending that sentance with a question mark? Unless, of course, you know you're under the Imperius curse and being subjected to this humiliating role in a Mary-Sue fic??

"I know" Alli could of killed her self with that remark.

Please do.

Re: Punctuation is good. Punctuation is our friend.

[anonymous]

I so totally agree! I've seen sentences that have more commas than they do words, and that was in English fic. I thought we were a nation of geeks!? Besides, do they realise that there are two words that sound like YOUR but don't mean the same thing!? ~loads shotgun~ Aagh! I see Mary-Sues. They're everywhere! Help me, Eru!! (I am a serious LotR fan.) ~goes on mad MS killing spree~ Thankyou. Y'all write back now! (jesting) Yours
BulldogFace

Re: Punctuation is good. Punctuation is our friend.

[anonymous]

Yeah! When can I have them? (this re the invite codes)~whack~ Thankyou. Yours
BulldogFace

Re: Punctuation is good. Punctuation is our friend.

[whitetower]

Although to be fair, dear Anonymous - spelling is also our friend, is it not? :)

peroids = periods

sentance = sentence