1414: Goddess Aphrodite please - Ginerva Molly Weasley

Mar 16, 2007 23:48

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TITLE: Goddess Aphordite please
PERPETRATOR: phix27
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)

FULL NAME: Ginerva Molly Weasley
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: red ringlets, then Lavender braids it "Jamaican style".
EYES: "big, depthless, brown eyes."
MARKINGS: "Cho started off with some foundation. Then, she put on some rose blush. Next, some black mascara. Dark emerald green eye shadow, some pale pink lipstick and, to top it off, some pale pink lip gloss."
POSSESSIONS: "A little black and white tee with vertical strips (“To make you look thinner!”) that barely came to the middle of her stomach and that said ‘Gothic Chickee’ and a pair of black hip-hugger jeans that really hugged. (and it turns out Lavender was just kidding, they didn’t cut her clothes.) Luna paired this with a white and black belt and a black and white bead bracelet. She picked out little green snake earrings and a silver star dangling chain." Red platform shoes.

ORIGIN: A fanfic challenge:"Write a fic about a makeover. Must include: a candle". The mind of a 13-year-old.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Lavender Brown, "Pamela Pavitil", Pansy Parkison, Hermione Granger, Hannah Abbot, Cho Chang and Luna Lovegood all want to give Ginny a makeover. I guess she is so ugly she created House unity. They give her the usual makeover, and then pray in a "prayer ring" to make it work and help her find a man. According to the Suethor, Pansy and Cho are in Slytherin, and that's how Ginny knows the password. Why is she going to Slytherin's Common Room? To find "Draconous Lucius Malfoy" of course! He's her True Love and she thinks her nasty makeover will win him over.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Can win the heart of Draco Malfoy despite looking like a total mess.

NOTES: Fanfic like this as well as Hermione!Sues should be used by researchers of low self-esteem.


SAMPLE:

“Okay everyone, get into the prayer ring,” said Hermione.

Everyone stepped into a circle of rose petals through a little opening left open. Hermione turned off the lights and lit all the candles. They all dipped their hands into a bowl of water, to show their sprits were pure.

“Everyone know the chant?” asked Hermione. The girls nodded.

“Remember, we’re praying to the goddess Aphrodite,” she reminded them. The girls nodded again.

“Everyone close your eyes and when I count to three, say the chant,” instructed Hermione. The girls closed their eyes.

“1… 2… 3,” said Hermione.

“Goddess Aphrodite, bring me a lover.

Let him be strong and wise.

Let him love me for who I am.

And let me love him for who he is.”

All the girl chanted. They kept their eyes closed, waiting for the pray to be answered. Then the felt the rose petals swirl around them once, which meant the pray was answered. They all got up and walked out of the ring.

“Okay Gin,” said Hermione. “Go get him.”

A little while later…

Ginny was walking down the hallway to the Slytherin common room. Being friends with Pansy and Cho, she knew where it was and what the password is. She walked up to what was supposedly a bare slab of rock wall.

“Snakecharm,” she said.

The wall moved to reveal a corridor which would take her to the Slytherin common room. She walked down it and came to a room brightly lit, despite what many think. It had black leather couches and comfy armchairs just right for reading a book at night. There was a rug by the fireplace with a moving cobra on it, the sign of the Slytherin bloodline. The walls were covered in tapestries with the same mark. Along the walls were tables for working on homework. The room was empty, except for a certain Italian boy.

“Hello Blaise,” Ginny greeted the boy sitting on one of the couches.

“Gin?” Blaise asked in amazement at the prettiest girl he’s ever seen. If he wasn’t gay, he’d be asking her out.

“Yeah,” she said as she did her best super-model spin. “Do you like it?”

“It’s fabulous!” Blaise who was now standing up and checking her clothes/hair/makeup ect. “Is this for you-know-who?” he asked in a whisper.

“Yep,” Ginny replied. “Do you think he’ll like it?”

“How could he not!” exclaimed Blaise. “He’s up in his room,” he said, pointing to the staircase.
“Thanks,” Ginny said as she climbed the stairs. Once she reached the top, she looked over her shoulder to find that Blaise had gone. She took a deep breath and knocked on the door.

“Who is it?” asked a deep voice from behind the door. She could her footsteps coming to the door. It opened right in front of her nose.

“Gin?!” asked Draco in amazement.

“Yeah, it’s me,” she said quietly, looking at her red platform shoes.

“Wow. You look… wow,” said Draco, who could barely breath at the site of the beautiful girl in front of him.

“You like it?” asked Ginny, finally looking him in the eye.

“Yeah, a lot,” he confirmed.

“You know, I did this for you,” she confessed.

“You did?” He cocks his head.

“Yeah.”

“Why?”

“So that maybe… you would ask me out if I looked pretty,” she said in barely a whisper but he heard it.

“You were already pretty and-“he falters. “I was just nervous that you would say no,” he says, looking into her big, depthless, brown eyes.

“Really?” she asks him.

“Yeah,” he says. “So… would you like to go on the next Hogsmeade trip with me, Ginerva Molly Weasley?” Draco asks playfully.

“I would love to Draconous Lucius Malfoy,” she says as she stands on tiptoe to kiss him.

The End

A/N: How do you stand on tiptoe to kiss him in platform shoes?
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