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1110: A Rose Among Thorns - Echo Bailey

May 04, 2006 23:58

TITLE: A Rose Among Thorns
PERPETRATOR: darkfarie14
SUE-O-METER:

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rating - toxic, je - teacher (new)

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thechangingwind May 5 2006, 08:53:50 UTC

That was the first and only real thing that stood out for me. Maybe it was because it was so terrible. "The Stunning spell" or "the Stupefying spell" would've been much better... not to mention correct.

greyathena May 5 2006, 14:58:45 UTC

or just "before I Stupefy you!" No one really says "I will cast Crucio on you till you scream!" etc.

fairykiss22 May 5 2006, 04:31:03 UTC

She wanted to crawl off somewhere and just die!

Actually, dear Sue, we--

Well, okay. That's too easy. I'll let it slide.

lobsterbelle May 5 2006, 04:32:42 UTC

It's a charity Sue!

taekochan May 5 2006, 04:35:03 UTC

I hate rebellious!Sues. And maybe I missed something, but how exactly did Snape get her thong?

pico_cailin May 6 2006, 03:08:27 UTC

Not having made it past the first couple of sentences, your comment scares me.

supinefairy May 5 2006, 04:35:06 UTC

if she didn't like the pink thong, then why did she pack it?! sexual-tension!sue's subconcious needs a little loving...

supinefairy May 5 2006, 04:36:24 UTC

subconscious even

sailormac May 5 2006, 16:57:32 UTC

I assume the Sue was given the pink thong by her parents, which is just ALL KINDS of disturbing.

mybrokenlocket May 5 2006, 23:29:25 UTC

No no, better- her aunt Sonya.