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0076: Erika The Legacy of Lily and James - Erika Potter and Megan Riddle

Jun 19, 2003 20:17

ironychan drew pretty pictures for me, so in return, I am plugging her fanfic. It's an in-character Draco fic, so if the world ends tomorrow, you'll know why.

TITLE: Erika The Legacy of Lily and James
PERPETRATOR: Starlight Eve (at least that's not the Sue's name)

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
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Sue anonymous June 20 2003, 09:47:11 UTC

I'm sad, ya'll think Erika and Megan are Sues. Oh, well, I'm sad. And Erika wasn't sent the orphanage to escape from Sirius Black, but from Voldie. *tear*

Re: Sue affabletoaster June 21 2003, 19:48:55 UTC

In that case, he wasn't "then undefeated."

Re: Sue anonymous June 24 2003, 15:54:13 UTC

Well, he technically was undefeated at the time when Erika was sent there. It wasn't explained well in the first chapter, so you guys are a bit out of line by making a few of your comments without reading the rest of the story. Also, don't you think they would sorta fear for Erika's protection when he has tons of Death Eaters running around mad that their master's gone. Wouldn't it be like them to go after the closest person to HP, his sister, Erika? Look at the Longbottoms. I hope that answers your comment well enough. Starlight Eve
P.S.- I just wish ya'll would go read the rest of the story before making your comments. THEN you can judge it as you like. But a few of your comments would be cleared up in later chaps.

Re: Sue yemi_hikari October 29 2010, 03:45:57 UTC

Appologies, but if she was undefeated when she was sent away, there would be no reason for her to be sent there, as James and Lily would still be alive, right? And you don't end up in orphanages unless your parents can't take care of you, which they could, or if their parents are dead, which they aren't.

As for the Death Eaters, most are going to be heading into hiding, scared about getting caught. It is more likely for them to go after the poor defensless little baby Harry Potter then his sister, yet the Dursley's seemed like a good enough place for him, so... wouldn't it have been for Erika too?

You say later chapters... that isn't good writing btw, but there is also another comment about a prequel...

Re: Sue yemi_hikari October 29 2010, 03:42:14 UTC

I have to ask, why wasn't Erika also living with her brother?

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