0658: Winds Nocturne - Lenya Lunatone, Hisakira 'Ly' Lycan and Xiomara
On the subject of MPreg (I know this isn't something sane people like to dwell on, but c'mon, you guys should have pretty strong stomachs by now)... it's sometimes interesting to run the same search string in different fandoms and see what it brings up. Do a summary search for the word 'pregnant' in the Inuyasha section of fanfiction.net, and you'll find fics about Kagome, Sango, Rin, Kagura... do it in the Harry Potter section and you get fics about Harry, Draco, Ron, Sirius...
TITLE: Winds Nocturne
PERPETRATOR: Lady Ireth
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: the first name mentioned is 'Lenya Lunatone', which sounds like the brand name of one of those tv phones they use in The Jetsons. There's also a 'Hisakira Lycan', called Ly, running around - I think she's supposed to be the main Sue character - and a 'Xiomara' who does not appear to be Madam Hooch.
SPECIES: Human/Witches
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: the Dark Mark on her arm. I think.
POSESSIONS: 'Ly' has a Ravenclaw prefect badge.
ORIGIN: Not a clue.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: 'Ly' has a thing for Professor Lupin.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: none mentioned
NOTES: Wow. This is one of the most confusing things I've ever read. I have no idea who these people are, what they're doing, or why I should care. It's chapter two before there's any mention of the Potterverse, and by then my eyes were watering. Everybody in it also has ridiculous names, even the boys. There's a 'Trendan', which I can only assume was the product of his parents being unable to decide whether to call him 'Trent' or 'Brendan', and a John who likes to be called 'Relic'.
SAMPLE:
"Hold still"said a very annoyed Lenya Lunatone as she tended to something on her cousins left forerm The girl yelped as her cousin touched whatever it was
"what part of 'it burns it burns'do you not understand?"she said wincing
"are these things allways supposed to hurt?"she asked her cousin who merely shrugged.
"well this is all i can do for the pain Lenya said,handing her cousins arm warmer back to her,who placed it immediatly on,not wanting any of her family to see what lay beneth it,she was ashamed,deeply ashamed.
It was the summer holidays,and Hisakira 'Ly' Lycan was staying with her relatives on her dads side,not out of force,Ly pretty much liked her cousins,all ten of them,sevral of which were also visiting Lenyas parents,
Lenya was eighteen,just got out of hogwarts and was training to become a healer,Xiomara,who was the closest to Ly's age at fifteen(who was also Relics twin sister),The fifteen year old punky silver haired 'Relic',who's actual name was John,and the familys only animagi(and oldest son),Trendan,who no longer lived with his parents at the age of twenty six.
And then there was Ly,a fourteen year old Gryffindor who had an awful secret that no one but her parents,and cousin Lenya knew about.
There was a loud 'CRACK' and Relic appeared in the doorway,(the cracking had come from the Exploding Snap Packet that he apparently was carrying in his pocket),smiling as allways,
"Hey Ly,long time no see,eh?"he said,messing with one of his silver ear studs,apparently the back had come off.
"Hey Relic!"Ly said grinning back,despite his appearence,he was one of her favorite relatives.
And then there was another crack,not from Relics Snap Pack,but from Trendan,who had apparated,Trendan was a very brilliant wizard who worked at the office of 'Giant Relations and Restrictions'(the G.R.R for short)
"Tren hey!"shouted Relic,as he crossed the room to greet his brother.
"Hello Joh-err what is it you call yourself again?ah erm...Relic"Trendan said nervously fiddling with his glasses.
He then turned to Ly "Hey Hisakira,hows school going?"he asked his cousin,who gave him a foul look.
"
How many times do i have to tell you its Ly,and school is great,how are things at the G.R.R?"she said shrugging.
"
Things have been better,Fudge is still against them"he said sighing.
All of a sudden Ly's aunt called from downstairs for them to come down and help with dinner..
TITLE: Winds Nocturne
PERPETRATOR: Lady Ireth
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: the first name mentioned is 'Lenya Lunatone', which sounds like the brand name of one of those tv phones they use in The Jetsons. There's also a 'Hisakira Lycan', called Ly, running around - I think she's supposed to be the main Sue character - and a 'Xiomara' who does not appear to be Madam Hooch.
SPECIES: Human/Witches
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: the Dark Mark on her arm. I think.
POSESSIONS: 'Ly' has a Ravenclaw prefect badge.
ORIGIN: Not a clue.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: 'Ly' has a thing for Professor Lupin.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: none mentioned
NOTES: Wow. This is one of the most confusing things I've ever read. I have no idea who these people are, what they're doing, or why I should care. It's chapter two before there's any mention of the Potterverse, and by then my eyes were watering. Everybody in it also has ridiculous names, even the boys. There's a 'Trendan', which I can only assume was the product of his parents being unable to decide whether to call him 'Trent' or 'Brendan', and a John who likes to be called 'Relic'.
SAMPLE:
"Hold still"said a very annoyed Lenya Lunatone as she tended to something on her cousins left forerm The girl yelped as her cousin touched whatever it was
"what part of 'it burns it burns'do you not understand?"she said wincing
"are these things allways supposed to hurt?"she asked her cousin who merely shrugged.
"well this is all i can do for the pain Lenya said,handing her cousins arm warmer back to her,who placed it immediatly on,not wanting any of her family to see what lay beneth it,she was ashamed,deeply ashamed.
It was the summer holidays,and Hisakira 'Ly' Lycan was staying with her relatives on her dads side,not out of force,Ly pretty much liked her cousins,all ten of them,sevral of which were also visiting Lenyas parents,
Lenya was eighteen,just got out of hogwarts and was training to become a healer,Xiomara,who was the closest to Ly's age at fifteen(who was also Relics twin sister),The fifteen year old punky silver haired 'Relic',who's actual name was John,and the familys only animagi(and oldest son),Trendan,who no longer lived with his parents at the age of twenty six.
And then there was Ly,a fourteen year old Gryffindor who had an awful secret that no one but her parents,and cousin Lenya knew about.
There was a loud 'CRACK' and Relic appeared in the doorway,(the cracking had come from the Exploding Snap Packet that he apparently was carrying in his pocket),smiling as allways,
"Hey Ly,long time no see,eh?"he said,messing with one of his silver ear studs,apparently the back had come off.
"Hey Relic!"Ly said grinning back,despite his appearence,he was one of her favorite relatives.
And then there was another crack,not from Relics Snap Pack,but from Trendan,who had apparated,Trendan was a very brilliant wizard who worked at the office of 'Giant Relations and Restrictions'(the G.R.R for short)
"Tren hey!"shouted Relic,as he crossed the room to greet his brother.
"Hello Joh-err what is it you call yourself again?ah erm...Relic"Trendan said nervously fiddling with his glasses.
He then turned to Ly "Hey Hisakira,hows school going?"he asked his cousin,who gave him a foul look.
"
How many times do i have to tell you its Ly,and school is great,how are things at the G.R.R?"she said shrugging.
"
Things have been better,Fudge is still against them"he said sighing.
All of a sudden Ly's aunt called from downstairs for them to come down and help with dinner..