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0004: Trinity Snape - Trinity Snape

Apr 09, 2003 09:06

From the girl who brought us Lynx Potter?... this one is actually much worse.

TITLE: Trinity Snape
PERPETRATOR: Lady Knight Nick

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING: **

SUEAGE: *****

WRONGNESS: ****

FULL NAME: Trinity Snape
SPECIES: Human - possibly a witch, but I don't think any mention is ever made of her using any magic.
HAIR: ( Read more... )

y - hogwarts years (non-specific), be - blue eyes, ar - martial arts, pc - child genius, ap - athletic pursuit, ar - friend to all, pa - au - canon mangled, af - warrior magic, sw-o - sparklypoos, rom - draco malfoy, b - heterochromia, rating - awful, be - golden eyes, nts - speshul name, sw-o - bitchiwitch, sw-o - quanonreip, nts - name is in the title (oc), b - unknown hair color, or - weapons, rom - oc, jc - healer, ship - draco/oc, je - teacher (new), rom - severus snape, pa - au doesnt excuse the impossible

Comments 26

kaesa April 9 2003, 08:44:04 UTC

"A weapon of war is swords, knifes, daggers, staffs, bow and arrow, axe, war hammer, or a lance." Staffs? Knifes? "You may now GAURD?" 0_o

painttheskyblue April 9 2003, 09:13:42 UTC

what do wizards do with squib children, anyway?

Give them evil red-eyed cats and set them loose in Hogwart's as caretaker?

pottersues April 9 2003, 13:42:22 UTC

Besides that. ^_^

iczer6 April 10 2003, 09:34:04 UTC

First isn't it bad form to have your students address by your first name?

Second how about guns? Are guns 'Weapons of War'? I think a bazooka could out do a sword any day of the week.

Unless you're going up against those super powered monks who can fly and have those kick ass swords.

Enough Hong Kong action movies for me.

Icz

anonymous January 8 2004, 00:50:47 UTC

You can use the comma after dialogue. Not just a period- a *comma.* The comma is your friend.

vara_s February 22 2004, 11:15:17 UTC

Is there a name for stuff that just borrows the body and name of a pre-existing char?

Please?! Lets make a term up, if we have to!

I hate being associated with...I dunno how t' describe it, such childish blither. Almost makes me ashamed to say I write fanfic.

yemi_hikari December 14 2020, 05:00:36 UTC

There is a term now. It's called a Possession Sue.

Scary anonymous October 22 2004, 13:24:15 UTC

Oh dear lord. It's one of Tamora Pierces hideous girl-warrior characters stuck in a Harry Potter fanfic. Lord save us all. Graceyxx

Re: Scary anonymous April 4 2005, 20:12:52 UTC

Gracey don't you ever fucking say that Tamora Pierce's characters are hideous! Just to let you know Tammy is my favorite writer and I will not let anyone bad mouth her so shut the fuck up before I have to find you and cut your tongue out of your bloody head so to keep her out of this!

Hell hath no furry as a dragon's scorn

I fight to protect The Goddess Tamora Pierce!

Re: Scary anonymous March 6 2006, 17:59:15 UTC

Wow, that is such a mature response.

Re: Scary audreytiphaine November 17 2009, 09:41:57 UTC

HHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! wow. a real live scary flamer person. whoo.