4191: The Witch and the Faerie
Title: The Witch and the Faerie
Perpetrator: Katsy17
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: The writer’s cover is one of those doll programs. She shows off her super annoying original fiction characters that she’s trying to pass off as belonging in the Harry Potter fandom.
Summary: “Capella never knew what she was getting into when she went to her brothers club. It started with a party and ended in a wedding. Capella never expected to attract the attention of a faerie let alone the faerie prince.”
Full Name: Capella Hitchens and of course the faerie prince
Species: She is the daughter of Isla Black nee Hitchens and her husband Bob.
Hair: “light chocolate brown hair”, but the princes has “almost white blonde hair”
Eyes: “dark brown eyes” but he has “the brightest green eyes Ella had ever seen”
Markings: Nothing at this point.
Possessions: She has a ton of flowers from the faerie prince. I also feel she has a very shallow storyline as it is all sparkles and fluff. “A day ago, a satin box pleated evening party clutch with a long silver chain arrived. This morning she had awoke to find a royal blue jewellery box waiting for her to open. Inside was a shining silver and diamond jewellery set, consisting of a pair of earings, a necklace and a silver bangle.
Connection to Canon: It’s original fiction, not fanfic. It starts with a super annoying info dump. As the summary says, after the info dump she goes to a party and meets the faerie prince. It’s a party celebrating Kalin’s hundredth birthday. (Why would they invite humans?” Second chapter has him becoming her secret admirer and flooding her with flowers. The third chapter is their winter ball, so yet another party.
Origin: The writer decided to completely ignore Rowling’s canon regarding fairies.
Special Abilities: The Sue is falling in love with his looks and his money.
Notes: Slapping canon names onto your original fiction does not make it fanfic. Particularly when these canon names only show up when your original fiction character conveniently needs an info dropped background story and a mother to swoon over how special she is with the secret admirer stuff. Simply telling us this takes place in the world Harry Potter takes in does not make it so. Did I mention the fact they're a witch and a faerie isn't important to the plot either. Oh, wait. There is no plot.
Sample:
Capella Hitchens was born in 1990 to Helene and Gray Hitchens and had two twin brother's Ara and Vega. Ara and Vega were three years older than Capella and currently running a night club on Lonsdale Street, Melbourne. The club was called Wasat, meaning middle of the sky, as it was on the top floor off a twenty five story hotel. The hotel was owned and run by Vega's best friend's family the Junipers. The Junipers were happy to let the twins have the club space since the last tenants business had failed and they need someone they could trust to use the space wisely. Wasat was popular with the locals as well as overseas visitors. The average age of their clients was about twenty five to thirty.
Helene and Gray owned a restaurant on Little Collins Street not far from Russell Street called Ruby Moon. They specialized in organic fresh and local foods. It was a big hit with the locals. The restaurant had been going for almost twenty five years now.
Ara and Vega were identical twins. Most people couldn't really tell them apart but since growing up with them Capella could tell the difference. They were both taller than Capella, had blue eyes and caramel coloured hair. Both were slim and healthy, always dressed in the latest fashion. Vega was always one to keep his hair short and Ara liked it a little longer.
Capella looked nothing like her brothers. People were always surprised when she was introduced as their sister. She a little shorter than average with dark brown eyes and light chocolate brown hair, Capella had taken after their mother while the twins took after their father.
Capella, Elle for short, was a little different from her family. Her parents cooked for a living, her bothers ran a dance club and Ella was the official healer for one of the Australian Quidditch teams, The Thundelarra Thunderers.
Ella had born with magic, the first in a long time in her line and had attended Australia's only magical academy, the Australian Institute of Magical Learning. Students joined the Institute at aged eleven and studied for seven years before either graduating or continuing on for further study. The location of the Institute a big secret, all anyone ever found out was that it was somewhere in central Australia. All students were given portkeys to use to travel to and from the school and the start and end of term. Not everyone attended the Institute though, many people were still home schooled.
At the Institute Ella had been in the top ten students of her year. She worked hard for her marks and it had paid off. Ella had been accepted into the healer program after her seven years. The healer program was four years of intensive training in all areas of healing. It was during her fourth year in training that she was scouted for the Thundelarra Thunderers as their assistant healer. She had gladly taken the job. For a few months she had to juggle training and work but she managed and passed her healer exams with an almost perfect score.
Six months after training and eleven after starting work she was given the position on Official healer for the team when the last had resigned to get married and have children. She had said that she wanted to enjoy her new life before finding part time work somewhere else. A new assistant, Joan Williams, had been hired for her.
Currently Ella could be found in her office trying to work though a huge pile of paper work. Quidditch season was almost over and she was running out of time to get all the paperwork sent to the right people. The season had gone well for the team. There were minimal injuries and the general health of the player was good. The team's owner was changing and the team was going to be getting a makeover, new uniforms, new brooms, updated stadium and more. Even Ella and Joan were included in the changed. They were getting new robes and new equipment. The new robes were still in the standard healer's style but in the team new colours of green and bronze, instead of the old green and white. They had the teams crest on the back and their name and position stitched on the left breast of the robes.
The new owners were investing a lot of money and they had a goal of being in the quidditch world cup final within the next three years. The team had never rated more than 15th in the world cup but the new owners had high hopes.
Perpetrator: Katsy17
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: The writer’s cover is one of those doll programs. She shows off her super annoying original fiction characters that she’s trying to pass off as belonging in the Harry Potter fandom.
Summary: “Capella never knew what she was getting into when she went to her brothers club. It started with a party and ended in a wedding. Capella never expected to attract the attention of a faerie let alone the faerie prince.”
Full Name: Capella Hitchens and of course the faerie prince
Species: She is the daughter of Isla Black nee Hitchens and her husband Bob.
Hair: “light chocolate brown hair”, but the princes has “almost white blonde hair”
Eyes: “dark brown eyes” but he has “the brightest green eyes Ella had ever seen”
Markings: Nothing at this point.
Possessions: She has a ton of flowers from the faerie prince. I also feel she has a very shallow storyline as it is all sparkles and fluff. “A day ago, a satin box pleated evening party clutch with a long silver chain arrived. This morning she had awoke to find a royal blue jewellery box waiting for her to open. Inside was a shining silver and diamond jewellery set, consisting of a pair of earings, a necklace and a silver bangle.
Connection to Canon: It’s original fiction, not fanfic. It starts with a super annoying info dump. As the summary says, after the info dump she goes to a party and meets the faerie prince. It’s a party celebrating Kalin’s hundredth birthday. (Why would they invite humans?” Second chapter has him becoming her secret admirer and flooding her with flowers. The third chapter is their winter ball, so yet another party.
Origin: The writer decided to completely ignore Rowling’s canon regarding fairies.
Special Abilities: The Sue is falling in love with his looks and his money.
Notes: Slapping canon names onto your original fiction does not make it fanfic. Particularly when these canon names only show up when your original fiction character conveniently needs an info dropped background story and a mother to swoon over how special she is with the secret admirer stuff. Simply telling us this takes place in the world Harry Potter takes in does not make it so. Did I mention the fact they're a witch and a faerie isn't important to the plot either. Oh, wait. There is no plot.
Sample:
Capella Hitchens was born in 1990 to Helene and Gray Hitchens and had two twin brother's Ara and Vega. Ara and Vega were three years older than Capella and currently running a night club on Lonsdale Street, Melbourne. The club was called Wasat, meaning middle of the sky, as it was on the top floor off a twenty five story hotel. The hotel was owned and run by Vega's best friend's family the Junipers. The Junipers were happy to let the twins have the club space since the last tenants business had failed and they need someone they could trust to use the space wisely. Wasat was popular with the locals as well as overseas visitors. The average age of their clients was about twenty five to thirty.
Helene and Gray owned a restaurant on Little Collins Street not far from Russell Street called Ruby Moon. They specialized in organic fresh and local foods. It was a big hit with the locals. The restaurant had been going for almost twenty five years now.
Ara and Vega were identical twins. Most people couldn't really tell them apart but since growing up with them Capella could tell the difference. They were both taller than Capella, had blue eyes and caramel coloured hair. Both were slim and healthy, always dressed in the latest fashion. Vega was always one to keep his hair short and Ara liked it a little longer.
Capella looked nothing like her brothers. People were always surprised when she was introduced as their sister. She a little shorter than average with dark brown eyes and light chocolate brown hair, Capella had taken after their mother while the twins took after their father.
Capella, Elle for short, was a little different from her family. Her parents cooked for a living, her bothers ran a dance club and Ella was the official healer for one of the Australian Quidditch teams, The Thundelarra Thunderers.
Ella had born with magic, the first in a long time in her line and had attended Australia's only magical academy, the Australian Institute of Magical Learning. Students joined the Institute at aged eleven and studied for seven years before either graduating or continuing on for further study. The location of the Institute a big secret, all anyone ever found out was that it was somewhere in central Australia. All students were given portkeys to use to travel to and from the school and the start and end of term. Not everyone attended the Institute though, many people were still home schooled.
At the Institute Ella had been in the top ten students of her year. She worked hard for her marks and it had paid off. Ella had been accepted into the healer program after her seven years. The healer program was four years of intensive training in all areas of healing. It was during her fourth year in training that she was scouted for the Thundelarra Thunderers as their assistant healer. She had gladly taken the job. For a few months she had to juggle training and work but she managed and passed her healer exams with an almost perfect score.
Six months after training and eleven after starting work she was given the position on Official healer for the team when the last had resigned to get married and have children. She had said that she wanted to enjoy her new life before finding part time work somewhere else. A new assistant, Joan Williams, had been hired for her.
Currently Ella could be found in her office trying to work though a huge pile of paper work. Quidditch season was almost over and she was running out of time to get all the paperwork sent to the right people. The season had gone well for the team. There were minimal injuries and the general health of the player was good. The team's owner was changing and the team was going to be getting a makeover, new uniforms, new brooms, updated stadium and more. Even Ella and Joan were included in the changed. They were getting new robes and new equipment. The new robes were still in the standard healer's style but in the team new colours of green and bronze, instead of the old green and white. They had the teams crest on the back and their name and position stitched on the left breast of the robes.
The new owners were investing a lot of money and they had a goal of being in the quidditch world cup final within the next three years. The team had never rated more than 15th in the world cup but the new owners had high hopes.