4137: Crazier - Claire and company
Title: Crazier
Perpetrator: hplover123451
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: None…
Summary: “Not a Harry Potter fan fiction, it really has nothing to do with it, but it has a few refrences. It's about a girl who lives with her best friends, and things just keep getting crazier and harder to deal with in her life.” We then get this in the author’s notes. “So pretty much this story is about a girl named Claire who lives with her best friends, but all of these things just get thrown at them. I inspired this off of my life. But only the part about all of them living with each other in a mansion on the beach, because I actually live with my family and friends on the beach, so without further ado, let's get started.”
Full Name: Claire Kelly, Ashley, Ava, Brett, Jess, Savannah, Erika
Species: The first two are Claire’s friends. See the sample for the rest of the relations.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: n/a
Possessions: They made themselves a house on the beach.
Connection to Canon: It’s bad when the writer admits that the only connection is references, but at least the writer is admitting that this is not a fanfic, where as the writers who use just the names of canon characters and places refuse to admit that the only connection is references.
Origin: Pretty much the writer self-inserting, but in original fiction and not. It is about a group of best
Special Abilities: They built a house on the beach. I can’t help but imagine that these are kids not yet out of high school, so that just becomes rather unbelievable. One of their siblings Brett gave up his future as his girlfriend Cecelia wasn’t pleased with the fact he was moving in with them. “She cut me off and gave me the ring back, and kicked me out of her house.” It costed him his dreams. (Costed is the writer’s word, not mine.) Then randomly some Tristen Campbell shows up who went to school with them in the sixth grade. Second chapter involve singling, and I’m not sure if there really is any mention of Harry Potter as I skim read this.
Notes: I suspect a very young writer here for them to be thinking this counts as something that can be posted in the Harry Potter category. That said, it could be turned into a fanfic. Just… not a very good one. That said, it might actually be interesting to read. Not quite understanding the writer's logic for putting it in the HP section though.
Sample:
I finally did it! I know what you're thinking. What are you talking about? I, Claire Kelly, just accomplished my dreams. By I, I mean we. My best friends, Ashley and Ava, and I built a house on the beach for us, Ashely's brother and sister, Brett and Jess, Ava's sister, Savannah, and my sister Erika.
General Third Person POV:
Ashley, Claire, and Ava walked into their beach house followed by, Brett, Jess, Erika, and Savannah.
"I have to admit, girls. This is seriously the coolest thing that I've ever seen." Brett said with a laugh.
Perpetrator: hplover123451
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: None…
Summary: “Not a Harry Potter fan fiction, it really has nothing to do with it, but it has a few refrences. It's about a girl who lives with her best friends, and things just keep getting crazier and harder to deal with in her life.” We then get this in the author’s notes. “So pretty much this story is about a girl named Claire who lives with her best friends, but all of these things just get thrown at them. I inspired this off of my life. But only the part about all of them living with each other in a mansion on the beach, because I actually live with my family and friends on the beach, so without further ado, let's get started.”
Full Name: Claire Kelly, Ashley, Ava, Brett, Jess, Savannah, Erika
Species: The first two are Claire’s friends. See the sample for the rest of the relations.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: n/a
Possessions: They made themselves a house on the beach.
Connection to Canon: It’s bad when the writer admits that the only connection is references, but at least the writer is admitting that this is not a fanfic, where as the writers who use just the names of canon characters and places refuse to admit that the only connection is references.
Origin: Pretty much the writer self-inserting, but in original fiction and not. It is about a group of best
Special Abilities: They built a house on the beach. I can’t help but imagine that these are kids not yet out of high school, so that just becomes rather unbelievable. One of their siblings Brett gave up his future as his girlfriend Cecelia wasn’t pleased with the fact he was moving in with them. “She cut me off and gave me the ring back, and kicked me out of her house.” It costed him his dreams. (Costed is the writer’s word, not mine.) Then randomly some Tristen Campbell shows up who went to school with them in the sixth grade. Second chapter involve singling, and I’m not sure if there really is any mention of Harry Potter as I skim read this.
Notes: I suspect a very young writer here for them to be thinking this counts as something that can be posted in the Harry Potter category. That said, it could be turned into a fanfic. Just… not a very good one. That said, it might actually be interesting to read. Not quite understanding the writer's logic for putting it in the HP section though.
Sample:
I finally did it! I know what you're thinking. What are you talking about? I, Claire Kelly, just accomplished my dreams. By I, I mean we. My best friends, Ashley and Ava, and I built a house on the beach for us, Ashely's brother and sister, Brett and Jess, Ava's sister, Savannah, and my sister Erika.
General Third Person POV:
Ashley, Claire, and Ava walked into their beach house followed by, Brett, Jess, Erika, and Savannah.
"I have to admit, girls. This is seriously the coolest thing that I've ever seen." Brett said with a laugh.