3731: Magical Daughter of the Dove - Harry Potter
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- The Fourteenth Annual Pottersues is also currently running.
Here’s day two, an entry which relates to two turtle doves.
TITLE: Magical Daughter of the Dove
PERPETRATOR: crazybrit1987
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART: A female Harry, I guess, done in Anime style.
SUMMARY:”what if Holly Potter was more than one type of Half - blood. What if her Mother was in fact Aphrodite and not Lilly Potter and what's this about three soul mates? Fem Harry/ Hermione/ Hestia/ OC Demigoddess”
FULL NAME: Holly Alice Potter
SPECIES: She’s supposed to be Harry, but she’s not.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter has Holly thinking of Hermione, whose fourteen, in a manner that I found perverted. Here’s a bit of forewarning. The story is rated T, but I’m not sure if it should be rated T, given the rather intimate description given of Hermione when Holly felt her “friend” lean into her on Buckbeak. She’s far more concerned about confessing to a girl, as she goes to see Dumbeldore, flashes to where Ron is being rude to Hermione, so that we’ll hate Ron. Dumbeldore then tells her that her real mother is Aphrodite. She leaves, and when she finds Hermione gets excited about Hermione’s shampoo. Then bam! The two are married on June 24th of 1996. (If there was a chance this might not get a toxic rating, it is now gone.) She gets to go to camp, and take Hermione with her despite the fact Hermione isn’t half-blood. (I’m glad there are only three chapters so far.) Nothing much in chapter two, except we have a “Head of Emigration office USA” and Sirius cleared of all charges just because the writer wanted it this way. Nothing much happens plot wise in chapter three. Which is possibly a good thing, considering the rather creepy relationship between a thirteen and fourteen year old, albeit they’re almost at their birthdays.
ORIGIN: No, Holly being the daughter of Aphrodite does not excuse her being a pervert. It makes it worse given what her powers are likely to be.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Harry is now female, interested in Hermione, and no longer Lily’s child, but a demigoddess. How is that Harry? It is not.
NOTES: Again, I’m not buying this idea of having more than one soul mate at a time, and by this I mean romantic soul mate. Is this the new trend that we’ll be seeing pop up in Harry Potter fanfiction, but fanfiction in general? I know writers think that having multiple romantic soul mates at one time makes someone special, but it doesn’t. How is that more special than having one special someone? Is it really possible?
Then again, the story forgets that Hestia is a virgin goddess. That’s supposed to emphasize the fact she’s chaste. I’m also left wondering what the point of this one is.
You know, I don’t think this is a case of three soul mates, particularly since that defeats the purpose of a soul mate. It’s a harem. Period. It's gratuitous self insertion.
SAMPLE:
Stopping quickly, she stared dumbly at the gargoyle trying to remember the password to get in. after five minutes she gave up.
"Can you please just open up the headmaster asked to see me" she asked giving the statue her best puppy dog eyes and pouring as much power as she could in to her voice. Holly had recently found that if she concentrated enough she could make someone do anything she asked. It was one evening when Ron was driving her up the wall bout that rat Peter or Scabbers, as they had still known him then that she found out.
(Flashback)
Ron and Holly were sitting by the fire in the common room, despite the fact they were both supposed to be doing their defence homework in her case this week's work, in Ron's last weeks as he had failed to do it despite being reminded by Holly every day since they were given it. The only reason Ron wasn't in detention was because he had promised Professor Lupin he would have it for him first thing tomorrow. But instead he had been ranting about the fact their other friend and Holly's secret crush Hermione's cat had eaten his pet rat. Finally, after nearly an hour Holly had snapped.
"Ronald, shut up, stop bad mouthing Hermione, sit down and do you damn homework before I smack you round the head with my text book." She screamed at him making even the few higher years in the common cringe. They had all heard stories of her mother's famous rants with her father in their school days. Holly had almost had a heart attack when Ron did exactly what she said. Holly had expected Ron to start yelling at her for taking Hermione's side then storm off to the boy's dorm. Ever his twin brothers Fred and George look shocked and looked at Holly in awe. Who just looked back to them in shock.
(End flashback)
- The Fourteenth Annual Pottersues is also currently running.
Here’s day two, an entry which relates to two turtle doves.
TITLE: Magical Daughter of the Dove
PERPETRATOR: crazybrit1987
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART: A female Harry, I guess, done in Anime style.
SUMMARY:”what if Holly Potter was more than one type of Half - blood. What if her Mother was in fact Aphrodite and not Lilly Potter and what's this about three soul mates? Fem Harry/ Hermione/ Hestia/ OC Demigoddess”
FULL NAME: Holly Alice Potter
SPECIES: She’s supposed to be Harry, but she’s not.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter has Holly thinking of Hermione, whose fourteen, in a manner that I found perverted. Here’s a bit of forewarning. The story is rated T, but I’m not sure if it should be rated T, given the rather intimate description given of Hermione when Holly felt her “friend” lean into her on Buckbeak. She’s far more concerned about confessing to a girl, as she goes to see Dumbeldore, flashes to where Ron is being rude to Hermione, so that we’ll hate Ron. Dumbeldore then tells her that her real mother is Aphrodite. She leaves, and when she finds Hermione gets excited about Hermione’s shampoo. Then bam! The two are married on June 24th of 1996. (If there was a chance this might not get a toxic rating, it is now gone.) She gets to go to camp, and take Hermione with her despite the fact Hermione isn’t half-blood. (I’m glad there are only three chapters so far.) Nothing much in chapter two, except we have a “Head of Emigration office USA” and Sirius cleared of all charges just because the writer wanted it this way. Nothing much happens plot wise in chapter three. Which is possibly a good thing, considering the rather creepy relationship between a thirteen and fourteen year old, albeit they’re almost at their birthdays.
ORIGIN: No, Holly being the daughter of Aphrodite does not excuse her being a pervert. It makes it worse given what her powers are likely to be.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Harry is now female, interested in Hermione, and no longer Lily’s child, but a demigoddess. How is that Harry? It is not.
NOTES: Again, I’m not buying this idea of having more than one soul mate at a time, and by this I mean romantic soul mate. Is this the new trend that we’ll be seeing pop up in Harry Potter fanfiction, but fanfiction in general? I know writers think that having multiple romantic soul mates at one time makes someone special, but it doesn’t. How is that more special than having one special someone? Is it really possible?
Then again, the story forgets that Hestia is a virgin goddess. That’s supposed to emphasize the fact she’s chaste. I’m also left wondering what the point of this one is.
You know, I don’t think this is a case of three soul mates, particularly since that defeats the purpose of a soul mate. It’s a harem. Period. It's gratuitous self insertion.
SAMPLE:
Stopping quickly, she stared dumbly at the gargoyle trying to remember the password to get in. after five minutes she gave up.
"Can you please just open up the headmaster asked to see me" she asked giving the statue her best puppy dog eyes and pouring as much power as she could in to her voice. Holly had recently found that if she concentrated enough she could make someone do anything she asked. It was one evening when Ron was driving her up the wall bout that rat Peter or Scabbers, as they had still known him then that she found out.
(Flashback)
Ron and Holly were sitting by the fire in the common room, despite the fact they were both supposed to be doing their defence homework in her case this week's work, in Ron's last weeks as he had failed to do it despite being reminded by Holly every day since they were given it. The only reason Ron wasn't in detention was because he had promised Professor Lupin he would have it for him first thing tomorrow. But instead he had been ranting about the fact their other friend and Holly's secret crush Hermione's cat had eaten his pet rat. Finally, after nearly an hour Holly had snapped.
"Ronald, shut up, stop bad mouthing Hermione, sit down and do you damn homework before I smack you round the head with my text book." She screamed at him making even the few higher years in the common cringe. They had all heard stories of her mother's famous rants with her father in their school days. Holly had almost had a heart attack when Ron did exactly what she said. Holly had expected Ron to start yelling at her for taking Hermione's side then storm off to the boy's dorm. Ever his twin brothers Fred and George look shocked and looked at Holly in awe. Who just looked back to them in shock.
(End flashback)