3713: The Lies and Loves of the Potter Twins - Lucy Rose Potter/ Lucine Eileen Snape-Lupin and co.

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TITLE: The Lies and Loves of the Potter Twins
PERPETRATOR: Lostgurl09
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART: HP letters on a background.
SUMMARY:”Lucy Rose Potter sends a letter when her brother is getting beaten to death by their uncle. The only

Comments

[afleur_de_lis]

This is a very random story. I don't like the POV jumps, but this is the least of the problems. We have such drastic changes to the canon with no explanation other than the whole "Uncle Tom is a good man and Dumbledore lied". I mean, surely this writer can read between the lines of Riddle's/Voldemort's character and see who he really is. He isn't such a good guy when he's so bent on killing off both his opponents and those he considers as 'subhuman'.

And then there is the problem with the character of Lucy. I mean, is there any point to her character other than being a love interest to Draco and being a tagalong to Harry's character? Or does she become the golden one in favour of Harry?

I'll have to read further to see where this writer is taking things, but I have a suspicion that Lucy is the special one in this.

Are we certain that this writer and the other one aren't one and the same? I mean it seems that there is a unique pattern to their mistakes and I find that a little odd. Of course, they could be two separate writers, but I see so much similarity with their work.