3989: The First Male Wizard - Harry Potter, Ruby, Tammy Riddle
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- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
- The Fourteenth Annual Pottersues is also currently running.
TITLE: The First Male Wizard
PERPETRATOR: SliverShadow904
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: I didn't pay attention.
SUMMARY:This is a The first male nin but a Harry Potter version! Sorry if I am useing your type of story, but I really like the plot so sorry and if you say to delete it? I will. So this a genderbender and I do not know if it is a harem probably will be but a large harem. Also the names I am not good at names so they will most likely be the same. Sorry. Also please give me idles.””
FULL NAME: Harry Potter, Tammy Riddle, Ruby, etc.
SPECIES: Part of a Mary Sue pileup. Ruby is supposed to be a giant, and seems to replace Hagrid. (Wait, it is Hagrid. Good grief, no.)
HAIR: See markings.
EYES: See markings.
MARKINGS: “On one Halloween night a toddler that had black hair with red highlights and mismatch eyes was.”
POSSESSIONS: “Harry saw a white with dust of blue on its fure wolf cub in a cage and decide to get her. Harry named the cub Seppen (Snowflake in Japanese.)
CONNECTION TO CANON: Harry is given a makeover, Lily still dies, someone named Tammy Riddle shows up, then Ruby, a giant shows up and starts bawling her head off. James is now for some reason Jamey. Then Daisy Dursley pounces on him. Then he goes shopping, and gets his pet. (Pets actually.) We get another one of those obnoxious inheritances, which include “Black and Potter”. Yes, this is mild. Then it ends with them getting on the train. There used to be a forth chapter.
ORIGIN: The writer, I honestly hate to say I don’t know what they’re doing. Then I read the second chapter. The writer thought to genderbend the entire cast except Harry so he’s the first male wizard. (You have got to be kidding me?
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “occlumency, rune, animagus (three forms white tiger, black owl, and grim), metamorphagas, Power lever, 667/9000." Is Tammy actually Tom? That's just, bad.
NOTES: I believe the First Male Nin is a Naruto fanfic. Yup, and it is very popular despite the fact the writer Gary Stu’s Naruto in that. Apparently said writer for the Naruto fic ended up having to redo the story due to the piece getting purged. There weren’t any lemons though. That one is a Toxic though. What's the logic behind the "first male" concept? I don't see any.
SAMPLE:
On one Halloween night a toddler that had black hair with red highlights and mismatch eyes was awake. But that was not the odd thing he was just staring at the door like someone was coming.
The was some yelling and then a thud was heard. The door to the toddlers room was open in a hurry. A woman with red hair and green eyes ran in to the room. She went over to the toddler she picked up the child and tried to leave the room. Before she could leave the room, someone in a black cloak came in.
The person in black was obvious a woman by the way the cloak hug the persons body.
The woman in the cloak pulled a wand and pointed at the red haired woman. The one cloak hissed two worlds "Avada Kedavra." Their was a green light and a THUD the red head was dead.
The wand was then pointed at the toddler. The woman in black toke off her hood to show a beautiful face with long black hair and red snack eyes.
Her name is Voldem The Dark Lady, but her real name is Tammy Riddle.
(Author :You know why she is there. I am not writing it.)
"I can not let you live you would be a threat to me later on so goodbye, Harry Potter." Voldem hissed.
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
- The Fourteenth Annual Pottersues is also currently running.
TITLE: The First Male Wizard
PERPETRATOR: SliverShadow904
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: I didn't pay attention.
SUMMARY:This is a The first male nin but a Harry Potter version! Sorry if I am useing your type of story, but I really like the plot so sorry and if you say to delete it? I will. So this a genderbender and I do not know if it is a harem probably will be but a large harem. Also the names I am not good at names so they will most likely be the same. Sorry. Also please give me idles.””
FULL NAME: Harry Potter, Tammy Riddle, Ruby, etc.
SPECIES: Part of a Mary Sue pileup. Ruby is supposed to be a giant, and seems to replace Hagrid. (Wait, it is Hagrid. Good grief, no.)
HAIR: See markings.
EYES: See markings.
MARKINGS: “On one Halloween night a toddler that had black hair with red highlights and mismatch eyes was.”
POSSESSIONS: “Harry saw a white with dust of blue on its fure wolf cub in a cage and decide to get her. Harry named the cub Seppen (Snowflake in Japanese.)
CONNECTION TO CANON: Harry is given a makeover, Lily still dies, someone named Tammy Riddle shows up, then Ruby, a giant shows up and starts bawling her head off. James is now for some reason Jamey. Then Daisy Dursley pounces on him. Then he goes shopping, and gets his pet. (Pets actually.) We get another one of those obnoxious inheritances, which include “Black and Potter”. Yes, this is mild. Then it ends with them getting on the train. There used to be a forth chapter.
ORIGIN: The writer, I honestly hate to say I don’t know what they’re doing. Then I read the second chapter. The writer thought to genderbend the entire cast except Harry so he’s the first male wizard. (You have got to be kidding me?
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “occlumency, rune, animagus (three forms white tiger, black owl, and grim), metamorphagas, Power lever, 667/9000." Is Tammy actually Tom? That's just, bad.
NOTES: I believe the First Male Nin is a Naruto fanfic. Yup, and it is very popular despite the fact the writer Gary Stu’s Naruto in that. Apparently said writer for the Naruto fic ended up having to redo the story due to the piece getting purged. There weren’t any lemons though. That one is a Toxic though. What's the logic behind the "first male" concept? I don't see any.
SAMPLE:
On one Halloween night a toddler that had black hair with red highlights and mismatch eyes was awake. But that was not the odd thing he was just staring at the door like someone was coming.
The was some yelling and then a thud was heard. The door to the toddlers room was open in a hurry. A woman with red hair and green eyes ran in to the room. She went over to the toddler she picked up the child and tried to leave the room. Before she could leave the room, someone in a black cloak came in.
The person in black was obvious a woman by the way the cloak hug the persons body.
The woman in the cloak pulled a wand and pointed at the red haired woman. The one cloak hissed two worlds "Avada Kedavra." Their was a green light and a THUD the red head was dead.
The wand was then pointed at the toddler. The woman in black toke off her hood to show a beautiful face with long black hair and red snack eyes.
Her name is Voldem The Dark Lady, but her real name is Tammy Riddle.
(Author :You know why she is there. I am not writing it.)
"I can not let you live you would be a threat to me later on so goodbye, Harry Potter." Voldem hissed.