3684: Dark Realization - not Harry Potter
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TITLE: Dark Realization, and Dark Realization” The Journey Home
PERPETRATOR: Ainaak Ka-lyrra
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: I don’t know what the writer’s avatar is supposed to be of.
SUMMARY:”X over with Christine Feehan's Dark Series. The red haze of rage slowly fled him and he froze, they both stared at each other. 'What have I done' He asked himself in shame. Suddenly she smiled and he found salvation in her eyes. Genderbending fem!hp.”, and ”Just a Teaser for now but Chapter 1 is coming soon. Mass Crossovers. Genderbending Fem!Harry.”
FULL NAME: Harry Potter
SPECIES: Demon
HAIR: See markings…
EYES: See markings…
MARKINGS: “Albus had to admit that she looked nothing like Harry Potter. Her face was more aristocratic, her lips redder, her eyes, once emerald green, were now a deep purple color with splashes of blue, her hair, that had been identical to James, had lengthened and straightened out and fluttered around her knees now that she was sitting slumped over. But he knew it reached to at least her thighs when she stood up straight. She had even grown an inch or two, and had the body of a grown woman. If you were to compare pictures of Harry Potter and the young woman who sat before them, there would be nothing in them that would tell that they were the same person.”
POSSESSIONS: Nothing specific jumped out at me.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Chapter one has Lily find a baby. Chapter two has Harry staring into a mirror, and Dumbledore and Moody talking about it. They’re “hoping with all of his might that it did pass, because if it didn’t and Harry some how managed to learn the truth, it would bring the wrath of the Wizarding worlds savior on their heads.” Chapter three has Dudley wanting to “Harry Hunting”. His demon blood awakens in chapter four, though I don’t know who “he” is. Some demon from the crossover is able to kick Dumbledore, Remus, Moody and Snape around to the point they’re hiding under the table. Oh, wait, it is Harry. “We decided to keep you a secret. And we did so for a year before Lily and James decided that she was ‘pregnant’ with you and they gave potions, deemed safe for babies your age, just in case you weren’t human and were from a race that couldn’t tolerate certain things, and cast many charms and glamors that would last until you no longer needed them.” The story is pretty much Harry finding out he’s female, his birth parents aren’t his parents, and falling in love with a demon character from another fandom. Plot wise, nothing.
ORIGIN: Nineteen years ago, “Lily's mind went blank. There was a baby on her door step. Lily and the baby just stared at each other before Lily bent down and picked the baby up. Lily quietly turned around and walked into the house.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Not being Harry. When you go so far as to change everything about the character, it’s not the character anymore. Period!
NOTES: One of the reviews for the story says this.
“About your summary, if write "no slash" into it don't just turn the guy into a girl, to get him on a guy... gender bender and no slash is just as stupid as normal slash... (I like Harry Potter stories and I like Twilight/other vampire stories but I don't like slash because of that its very hard for me to find good stories because 9/10 HP/Vampire stories are slash stories and thats why its very disappointing to start a "No Slash" story only for the main GUY to get turned into a girl to fuck a GUY without being GAY...)”
SAMPLE:
A loud screech split the air, and Dumbledore cringed from his place under the kitchen table. Unsurprisingly Remus, Alastor and Severus were under there with him. Dumbledore could understand why they were. Remus had, had the misfortune of being kicked... well down there, Alastor's rotating eye was somewhere in the living room from where Harry had punched him in rage, and Severus would undoubtedly say that he was not stupid enough to get to close to Harry while Harry was so angry and then give a pointed look to Remus and Alastor.
There was a series of loud crashes as Harry completely trashed the entire first floor, and Dumbledore winced. He really wished that Lily and James had lived now more then ever, then they could've given Harry an explanation of what was happening and he wouldn't be here cowering under a table, petrified of a teenaged... Ah yes the whole reason Harry was so angry. He had become a she.
That was what made their cowering even more ridiculous, they were hiding from a short teenaged girl for Merlins sake. Albus shot a look at Alastor. Albeit the teenage girl in question had mean right hook. He looked at Remus, and a harsh left kick.
Everything suddenly quieted down and they all looked at each other, wondering if Harry had finally calmed down or if it was a false alarm and Harry was just waiting chop their heads off with a butcher knife as soon as they popped their head out. But they weren't willing to ask, not wanting to seem like an idiot even though they were sure they were all thinking the same thing. Remus took a deep breath and bravely stuck his head out. After giving the okay they crawled out from under the table and looked at the damage Harry had wrought.
The chairs were in pieces, pots, and pans were thrown around, what looked like shredded and burned pieces of couch littered the floor, leading from the door to the livingroom into the back of the kitchen. They looked for Harry and saw that she was sitting in a chair, that had managed to survive her wrath, covering her face with her hands, Her black/ blue hair swishing around her.
"Why," Harry asked suddenly, breaking them from their trances.
Albus sighed, his eyes softening. "Harry-" he started.
"Just tell me what happened to me, tell me why," Harry whispered almost weakly. Albus conjured four chairs, for him the others to sit down.
" It started 19 years ago when..." Albus trailed off. Harry looked up, uncovering her face.
Albus had to admit that she looked nothing like Harry Potter. Her face was more aristocratic, her lips redder, her eyes, once emerald green, were now a deep purple color with splashes of blue, her hair, that had been identical to James, had lengthened and straightened out and fluttered around her knees now that she was sitting slumped over. But he knew it reached to at least her thighs when she stood up straight. She had even grown an inch or two, and had the body of a grown woman. If you were to compare pictures of Harry Potter and the young woman who sat before them, there would be nothing in them that would tell that they were the same person.
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
- The Fourteenth Annual Pottersues is also currently running.
TITLE: Dark Realization, and Dark Realization” The Journey Home
PERPETRATOR: Ainaak Ka-lyrra
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: I don’t know what the writer’s avatar is supposed to be of.
SUMMARY:”X over with Christine Feehan's Dark Series. The red haze of rage slowly fled him and he froze, they both stared at each other. 'What have I done' He asked himself in shame. Suddenly she smiled and he found salvation in her eyes. Genderbending fem!hp.”, and ”Just a Teaser for now but Chapter 1 is coming soon. Mass Crossovers. Genderbending Fem!Harry.”
FULL NAME: Harry Potter
SPECIES: Demon
HAIR: See markings…
EYES: See markings…
MARKINGS: “Albus had to admit that she looked nothing like Harry Potter. Her face was more aristocratic, her lips redder, her eyes, once emerald green, were now a deep purple color with splashes of blue, her hair, that had been identical to James, had lengthened and straightened out and fluttered around her knees now that she was sitting slumped over. But he knew it reached to at least her thighs when she stood up straight. She had even grown an inch or two, and had the body of a grown woman. If you were to compare pictures of Harry Potter and the young woman who sat before them, there would be nothing in them that would tell that they were the same person.”
POSSESSIONS: Nothing specific jumped out at me.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Chapter one has Lily find a baby. Chapter two has Harry staring into a mirror, and Dumbledore and Moody talking about it. They’re “hoping with all of his might that it did pass, because if it didn’t and Harry some how managed to learn the truth, it would bring the wrath of the Wizarding worlds savior on their heads.” Chapter three has Dudley wanting to “Harry Hunting”. His demon blood awakens in chapter four, though I don’t know who “he” is. Some demon from the crossover is able to kick Dumbledore, Remus, Moody and Snape around to the point they’re hiding under the table. Oh, wait, it is Harry. “We decided to keep you a secret. And we did so for a year before Lily and James decided that she was ‘pregnant’ with you and they gave potions, deemed safe for babies your age, just in case you weren’t human and were from a race that couldn’t tolerate certain things, and cast many charms and glamors that would last until you no longer needed them.” The story is pretty much Harry finding out he’s female, his birth parents aren’t his parents, and falling in love with a demon character from another fandom. Plot wise, nothing.
ORIGIN: Nineteen years ago, “Lily's mind went blank. There was a baby on her door step. Lily and the baby just stared at each other before Lily bent down and picked the baby up. Lily quietly turned around and walked into the house.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Not being Harry. When you go so far as to change everything about the character, it’s not the character anymore. Period!
NOTES: One of the reviews for the story says this.
“About your summary, if write "no slash" into it don't just turn the guy into a girl, to get him on a guy... gender bender and no slash is just as stupid as normal slash... (I like Harry Potter stories and I like Twilight/other vampire stories but I don't like slash because of that its very hard for me to find good stories because 9/10 HP/Vampire stories are slash stories and thats why its very disappointing to start a "No Slash" story only for the main GUY to get turned into a girl to fuck a GUY without being GAY...)”
SAMPLE:
A loud screech split the air, and Dumbledore cringed from his place under the kitchen table. Unsurprisingly Remus, Alastor and Severus were under there with him. Dumbledore could understand why they were. Remus had, had the misfortune of being kicked... well down there, Alastor's rotating eye was somewhere in the living room from where Harry had punched him in rage, and Severus would undoubtedly say that he was not stupid enough to get to close to Harry while Harry was so angry and then give a pointed look to Remus and Alastor.
There was a series of loud crashes as Harry completely trashed the entire first floor, and Dumbledore winced. He really wished that Lily and James had lived now more then ever, then they could've given Harry an explanation of what was happening and he wouldn't be here cowering under a table, petrified of a teenaged... Ah yes the whole reason Harry was so angry. He had become a she.
That was what made their cowering even more ridiculous, they were hiding from a short teenaged girl for Merlins sake. Albus shot a look at Alastor. Albeit the teenage girl in question had mean right hook. He looked at Remus, and a harsh left kick.
Everything suddenly quieted down and they all looked at each other, wondering if Harry had finally calmed down or if it was a false alarm and Harry was just waiting chop their heads off with a butcher knife as soon as they popped their head out. But they weren't willing to ask, not wanting to seem like an idiot even though they were sure they were all thinking the same thing. Remus took a deep breath and bravely stuck his head out. After giving the okay they crawled out from under the table and looked at the damage Harry had wrought.
The chairs were in pieces, pots, and pans were thrown around, what looked like shredded and burned pieces of couch littered the floor, leading from the door to the livingroom into the back of the kitchen. They looked for Harry and saw that she was sitting in a chair, that had managed to survive her wrath, covering her face with her hands, Her black/ blue hair swishing around her.
"Why," Harry asked suddenly, breaking them from their trances.
Albus sighed, his eyes softening. "Harry-" he started.
"Just tell me what happened to me, tell me why," Harry whispered almost weakly. Albus conjured four chairs, for him the others to sit down.
" It started 19 years ago when..." Albus trailed off. Harry looked up, uncovering her face.
Albus had to admit that she looked nothing like Harry Potter. Her face was more aristocratic, her lips redder, her eyes, once emerald green, were now a deep purple color with splashes of blue, her hair, that had been identical to James, had lengthened and straightened out and fluttered around her knees now that she was sitting slumped over. But he knew it reached to at least her thighs when she stood up straight. She had even grown an inch or two, and had the body of a grown woman. If you were to compare pictures of Harry Potter and the young woman who sat before them, there would be nothing in them that would tell that they were the same person.