3671: The Boy No One Noticed - Hadrian Potter
- The link of the day is content warning doesn't excuse bad writing.
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
TITLE: The Boy No One Noticed
PERPETRATOR: SylasBlack
SUE-O-METER: Good (other than the grammar)
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”A Potter in Slytherin? One would never think it was possible. Hadrian Potter, the twin of Harry Potter, is in his sixth year. Everyone else rejected him but one certain Slytherin decides to befriend him, Draco Malfoy. Hadrian starts receiving letters from a man named 'Tom.' He grows fond of the man he's never met. Voldemort x Hadrian fanfiction. Don't like? Don't read.”
FULL NAME: Hadrian Potter
SPECIES: Harry's twin
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: He's Harry's ignored twin.
ORIGIN: I think the writer decided to turn a lot of cliches on their head.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Actually making sense...
NOTES: Why feature this fic? I featured this fic because we get a lot of stories with the traits this story has, so said traits tend to be associated with Sues. This shows how one can take those traits and do them right, although this one is only one chapter up so far.
SAMPLE:
If Hadrian had a galleon for every time someone shoved him past him, to get to his brother. He'd be rich. Hadrian winced as his backside hit the ground, a girl, probably not even twelve years old bounded up to a bewildered Harry, Hadrian would have laughed if he wasn't on the ground.
Bloody hell, they hadn't even left the Dursleys let and Harry was already noticed
The young girl seemed to be ecstatic about meeting the Green eyed boy, Hadrian laughed silently as he watched Harry be assaulted with questions and almost violent hugs. Harry's eyes were wide and he stuttered, not expecting the sudden 'fangirl' attack so soon, Hadrian loved counting down when they arrive at the station. Usually the attacks didn't start until they had reached Platform 9¾, let alone in the street he lived in. Whenever Hadrian started quietly counting Harry would flush profusely and send a half-hearted glare at his brown eyed twin.
The girl glanced at Hadrian and stopped. Hadrian merely raised an eyebrow at her. For a few short moments Hadrian wondered where the girl had even come from, he hadn't seen anyone in the street when he left the house.
"Y-you look like Harry." She stuttered, her rosy cheeks seemed to darken.
"Well that usually happens with twins." Hadrian deadpanned and looked at the house, praying Uncle Vernon would hurry up, he didn't have time for this. He had to get on the train and find Draco, his best friend.
The girl spun to face Harry, who jumped a bit and smiled hesitatingly at her.
"You have a twin!?" Hadrian sighed and rolled his eyes, 'here we go'.
"Um, yeah, I've had one since birth, y'know..." Harry stated, he was confused, didn't everyone know this?
- Flashback Sue
- Don't forget about the Sorting Hat.
TITLE: The Boy No One Noticed
PERPETRATOR: SylasBlack
SUE-O-METER: Good (other than the grammar)
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”A Potter in Slytherin? One would never think it was possible. Hadrian Potter, the twin of Harry Potter, is in his sixth year. Everyone else rejected him but one certain Slytherin decides to befriend him, Draco Malfoy. Hadrian starts receiving letters from a man named 'Tom.' He grows fond of the man he's never met. Voldemort x Hadrian fanfiction. Don't like? Don't read.”
FULL NAME: Hadrian Potter
SPECIES: Harry's twin
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: He's Harry's ignored twin.
ORIGIN: I think the writer decided to turn a lot of cliches on their head.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Actually making sense...
NOTES: Why feature this fic? I featured this fic because we get a lot of stories with the traits this story has, so said traits tend to be associated with Sues. This shows how one can take those traits and do them right, although this one is only one chapter up so far.
SAMPLE:
If Hadrian had a galleon for every time someone shoved him past him, to get to his brother. He'd be rich. Hadrian winced as his backside hit the ground, a girl, probably not even twelve years old bounded up to a bewildered Harry, Hadrian would have laughed if he wasn't on the ground.
Bloody hell, they hadn't even left the Dursleys let and Harry was already noticed
The young girl seemed to be ecstatic about meeting the Green eyed boy, Hadrian laughed silently as he watched Harry be assaulted with questions and almost violent hugs. Harry's eyes were wide and he stuttered, not expecting the sudden 'fangirl' attack so soon, Hadrian loved counting down when they arrive at the station. Usually the attacks didn't start until they had reached Platform 9¾, let alone in the street he lived in. Whenever Hadrian started quietly counting Harry would flush profusely and send a half-hearted glare at his brown eyed twin.
The girl glanced at Hadrian and stopped. Hadrian merely raised an eyebrow at her. For a few short moments Hadrian wondered where the girl had even come from, he hadn't seen anyone in the street when he left the house.
"Y-you look like Harry." She stuttered, her rosy cheeks seemed to darken.
"Well that usually happens with twins." Hadrian deadpanned and looked at the house, praying Uncle Vernon would hurry up, he didn't have time for this. He had to get on the train and find Draco, his best friend.
The girl spun to face Harry, who jumped a bit and smiled hesitatingly at her.
"You have a twin!?" Hadrian sighed and rolled his eyes, 'here we go'.
"Um, yeah, I've had one since birth, y'know..." Harry stated, he was confused, didn't everyone know this?