3650: The Sharpest Thorns - Ellie Potter
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- Flashback Sue
TITLE: The Shrpest Thorns
PERPETRATOR: Ontril86
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART: The writer's avatar is is a geometric design in black and grey.
SUMMARY:”Harry Potter is born as the older brother to the Girl Who Lived. Read on to discover what adventures unfold as he navigates through the perils of school, an uncertain future and the need of an older brother to protect his younger sister.”
FULL NAME: Ellie Potter
SPECIES: Parasite Sue/Girl Who Lived
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: Stealing important canon roles for herself, including claiming the title of “Girl Who Lived” despite the fact the prophesy would not apply to her, but also Cedric's role in the Triwizard tournament so that the ending changed to favor her.
ORIGIN: “This is the prologue for a new story that I have been working on for some time now. It is my first story on this site, however it is not my first fan fiction.” Taking the plot from the original book and editing Cedric out in replace for your OC is not something you've been working on for some time.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Stealing the thunder of the canon characters.
NOTES: How unoriginal...
SAMPLE:
"On three, right?" said Ellie. "One - two - three - "
She and Harry both grasped a handle.
Instantly, Harry felt a jerk somewhere behind his navel. His feet had left the ground, he could not unclench the hand holding the Triwizard Cup; it was pulling him onward in a howl of wind and swirling color, Ellie at his side.
Harry felt his feet slam into the ground and stumbled. Beside him, he noticed Ellie's injured leg give out and she fell forward; letting go of the cup as she did. She raised her head and looked around.
"Where are we?" she said.
- Flashback Sue
TITLE: The Shrpest Thorns
PERPETRATOR: Ontril86
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART: The writer's avatar is is a geometric design in black and grey.
SUMMARY:”Harry Potter is born as the older brother to the Girl Who Lived. Read on to discover what adventures unfold as he navigates through the perils of school, an uncertain future and the need of an older brother to protect his younger sister.”
FULL NAME: Ellie Potter
SPECIES: Parasite Sue/Girl Who Lived
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: Stealing important canon roles for herself, including claiming the title of “Girl Who Lived” despite the fact the prophesy would not apply to her, but also Cedric's role in the Triwizard tournament so that the ending changed to favor her.
ORIGIN: “This is the prologue for a new story that I have been working on for some time now. It is my first story on this site, however it is not my first fan fiction.” Taking the plot from the original book and editing Cedric out in replace for your OC is not something you've been working on for some time.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Stealing the thunder of the canon characters.
NOTES: How unoriginal...
SAMPLE:
"On three, right?" said Ellie. "One - two - three - "
She and Harry both grasped a handle.
Instantly, Harry felt a jerk somewhere behind his navel. His feet had left the ground, he could not unclench the hand holding the Triwizard Cup; it was pulling him onward in a howl of wind and swirling color, Ellie at his side.
Harry felt his feet slam into the ground and stumbled. Beside him, he noticed Ellie's injured leg give out and she fell forward; letting go of the cup as she did. She raised her head and looked around.
"Where are we?" she said.