3521: Adrienne Riddle - Adrienne Riddle
- The link of the day is OOC SasuNaru fanfictions P5. I really don't know how I found this one. It's bizare to say the least.
- Flashback Sue
O is for... part two, and somehow I managed to find a third part.
TITLE: Adrienne Riddle
PERPETRATOR: melanie-chester
SUE-O-METER:
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”"So now you know," I say, laughing humourlessly. "I lost Tom Riddle years ago." AU, Tom Riddle/OC, M rating comes in later in the story. Some OOCness.”
FULL NAME: Adrienne Riddle, possibly formally Dumbledore, “my Queen”
SPECIES: She's Dunbledore's great niece.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The writer starts off their story by bragging how great Tom's team is compared to “Dumbledore's Auror's”. (They're not Dumbledore's.) She's being interrogated by Dumbldore's group, and acts like an absolute bitch. (Look, if you want us to believe Tom's side is not the dark side, don't make your OC act like Bellatrix. Just, don't.) She says she lost Tom a long time ago, so she can't tell them where he is. We jump back, and find Adrienne treating Hermione rudely, and comments about Hermione being made Head Girl, just so she can be “providing the girl with the opportunity to brag shamelessly”. We find out that Adrienne gets sorted into Slytherin. Why she's being sorted late, I didn't quite get, as all the story does is... well, nothing.
ORIGIN: Hi, it's Mel again. This is an AU, and a Tom/OC story. I'm going to start by apologising if any characters are OOC, or if I miss any important details from the books; I'm horrible at writing canonically. I'd like to keep this AN as short as possible, and not reveal too much and ruin the surprise, but there are a few things I'm going to warn you about, so you're not too confused.
- There was no Voldemort, just the original Death Eater's who tried to follow his orders without him being there.
- Tom Riddle went missing when he was around seventeen, in 1945.
- Harry Potter is not the Savior, or The Chosen One, only an orphan who Dumbledore favours.
- Adrienne is the granddaughter of Aberforth Dumbledore, who refuses to see her as she reminds him too much of her grandmother: a muggle he had loved. Making Dumbledore her grand-uncle (I think?)
- This is an AU, and my first Tom fic, so please please just bare with me.
- The interludes are in the present day, and the chapters are Adrienne telling her story.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The writer basically gives Tom such high status that her OC gets to be called “my Queen”, or at least she tries to. The characters are out of character to make the writer's OC look good as well, so my hate for the character piles on. She's also way to young to be paired up with Voldemort, so that makes it so I don't have to debate between the awful and toxic rating anymore.
NOTES: Sorry Suethor, but the reason you struggle to write canonically is because you don't even try.
- Why would the original Death Eater's even exist without Voldemort?
- Why would Tom Riddle go missing?
- Why erase Harry's importance to the story like that?
- Why so cliché, and is that even realistic?
The others don't matter so much.
SAMPLE:
White light filters in through the gaps between the thin, black curtains, hung haphazardly over the windows. It's rather shabby spell work, for such a basic, and simple enchantment. Crabbe could've casted a better spell with his hands tied behind his back-then again, Vincent Crabbe is a much more accomplished wizard than any of Dumbledore's Auror's. Thanks to Tom.
The door creaks loudly-again, something easily fixed with a simple spell-and in walks Dumbledore, looking weary and tired, a no-nonsense expression etched across his face. Quickly, I paint a smirk Draco would be proud of, and draw myself to my full height, which is slightly painful due to the heavy chains binding my arms, legs and restricting the amount of magic I am able to use. My efforts are futile, as Dumbledore tiredly gestures for me to relax, as he himself settles into a large chair.
"Why did you send me Healers?" I ask.
"Adrienne," he says softly. "Why would you ask that?"
"It's Mrs Riddle, to you," I say sharply.
"I'm aware of your choice in marital partner," he says. "Despite the disgust and disappointment it brings me."
"It's a good thing your opinion is irrelevant, then."
Sadly, he shakes his head. "I trust they gave you the Truth Serum?"
"Forced it down my throat, yes."
"There was no need to fight, Truth Serum only ensure that any answers you give are truthful, it will not force you to say anything you do not wish to, as Veriteserum would."
"How thoughtful of you," I sneer. "I trust none of your other captives have been granted the same luxury?"
"On the contraire," he replies. "All of our captives have been given Truth Serum, we are not in the business of forcing every secret out of our them."
- Flashback Sue
O is for... part two, and somehow I managed to find a third part.
TITLE: Adrienne Riddle
PERPETRATOR: melanie-chester
SUE-O-METER:
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”"So now you know," I say, laughing humourlessly. "I lost Tom Riddle years ago." AU, Tom Riddle/OC, M rating comes in later in the story. Some OOCness.”
FULL NAME: Adrienne Riddle, possibly formally Dumbledore, “my Queen”
SPECIES: She's Dunbledore's great niece.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The writer starts off their story by bragging how great Tom's team is compared to “Dumbledore's Auror's”. (They're not Dumbledore's.) She's being interrogated by Dumbldore's group, and acts like an absolute bitch. (Look, if you want us to believe Tom's side is not the dark side, don't make your OC act like Bellatrix. Just, don't.) She says she lost Tom a long time ago, so she can't tell them where he is. We jump back, and find Adrienne treating Hermione rudely, and comments about Hermione being made Head Girl, just so she can be “providing the girl with the opportunity to brag shamelessly”. We find out that Adrienne gets sorted into Slytherin. Why she's being sorted late, I didn't quite get, as all the story does is... well, nothing.
ORIGIN: Hi, it's Mel again. This is an AU, and a Tom/OC story. I'm going to start by apologising if any characters are OOC, or if I miss any important details from the books; I'm horrible at writing canonically. I'd like to keep this AN as short as possible, and not reveal too much and ruin the surprise, but there are a few things I'm going to warn you about, so you're not too confused.
- There was no Voldemort, just the original Death Eater's who tried to follow his orders without him being there.
- Tom Riddle went missing when he was around seventeen, in 1945.
- Harry Potter is not the Savior, or The Chosen One, only an orphan who Dumbledore favours.
- Adrienne is the granddaughter of Aberforth Dumbledore, who refuses to see her as she reminds him too much of her grandmother: a muggle he had loved. Making Dumbledore her grand-uncle (I think?)
- This is an AU, and my first Tom fic, so please please just bare with me.
- The interludes are in the present day, and the chapters are Adrienne telling her story.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The writer basically gives Tom such high status that her OC gets to be called “my Queen”, or at least she tries to. The characters are out of character to make the writer's OC look good as well, so my hate for the character piles on. She's also way to young to be paired up with Voldemort, so that makes it so I don't have to debate between the awful and toxic rating anymore.
NOTES: Sorry Suethor, but the reason you struggle to write canonically is because you don't even try.
- Why would the original Death Eater's even exist without Voldemort?
- Why would Tom Riddle go missing?
- Why erase Harry's importance to the story like that?
- Why so cliché, and is that even realistic?
The others don't matter so much.
SAMPLE:
White light filters in through the gaps between the thin, black curtains, hung haphazardly over the windows. It's rather shabby spell work, for such a basic, and simple enchantment. Crabbe could've casted a better spell with his hands tied behind his back-then again, Vincent Crabbe is a much more accomplished wizard than any of Dumbledore's Auror's. Thanks to Tom.
The door creaks loudly-again, something easily fixed with a simple spell-and in walks Dumbledore, looking weary and tired, a no-nonsense expression etched across his face. Quickly, I paint a smirk Draco would be proud of, and draw myself to my full height, which is slightly painful due to the heavy chains binding my arms, legs and restricting the amount of magic I am able to use. My efforts are futile, as Dumbledore tiredly gestures for me to relax, as he himself settles into a large chair.
"Why did you send me Healers?" I ask.
"Adrienne," he says softly. "Why would you ask that?"
"It's Mrs Riddle, to you," I say sharply.
"I'm aware of your choice in marital partner," he says. "Despite the disgust and disappointment it brings me."
"It's a good thing your opinion is irrelevant, then."
Sadly, he shakes his head. "I trust they gave you the Truth Serum?"
"Forced it down my throat, yes."
"There was no need to fight, Truth Serum only ensure that any answers you give are truthful, it will not force you to say anything you do not wish to, as Veriteserum would."
"How thoughtful of you," I sneer. "I trust none of your other captives have been granted the same luxury?"
"On the contraire," he replies. "All of our captives have been given Truth Serum, we are not in the business of forcing every secret out of our them."