3515: Timers - Dave Potter, Blake Potter, Blaise Zabini, Draco Malfoy, George Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Yesterday I had some internet problems, so was unable to post an entry.
- The link of the day is Badfic Bingo!!.
- Flashback Sue
J is for... jossed. I picked the Blaise being female theory for this one.
TITLE: Timers
PERPETRATOR: Silverstar44
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”Dave was not the Boy-Who-Lived. No one knew that though. Everyone thought he was and that was that. No one noticed the girl who stood in the shadows, a clock hanging around her neck. They weren't fazed by the disappearance of two pure-blood children. They didn't notice one less Weasley, and They sure didn't notice that crazy man's lost daughter. WrongBWL, Fem!Blaise,”
FULL NAME: Dave Potter, Blake Potter
SPECIES: The Harry Potter twins, a male and a female.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: “After Blaise was out of the place she used to call home, we found out that she was a total girly girl/hipster. I was a tomboy, and Drake was a music addict.” (Why is a six year old even using these labels! They wouldn't know!”
POSSESSIONS: See sample. “I slipped on turquoise leggings under some plain denim shorts. On top of that I put on a Fall Out Boy shirt, which Drake had gotten for her. (Once he was free of his father, he fell in love with music, especially Fall Out Boy.) After slipping on my favorite combat boots, I decided to just leave my hair down as it was.( cgi/set?id=185854825)” We also get this. “Right as I was finishing the waffle mix, Blaise entered the kitchen. She had on a cedar dress with a matching beanie, and grey leggings with black boots and black leg warmers. To top off the outfit she added a charcoal jacket. The whole outfit was definitely her (),” and this “Speaking of, Drake soon came down wearing jeans and a red t-shirt with a flannel shirt on under a sweater. He had on high-tops and his hair was messy as always ( cgi/img-thing?.out=jpg&size=l&tid=63538171).” They also have run of the library in the house. Here are their outfits when they are nine. “I threw on some black jeans with a union jack tank top and a flannel shirt on top. I slipped on my high tops and grey beanie and headed out of our room ( . ). […] Blaise was already up, wearing some denim shorts with a white tank tucked into them. Over it she put a flannel, and finished the outfit off with some nude sandals ( . ). […] George was over by the counter, and it looking like he was making pancakes! Heck yeah! He was wearing a grey shirt under a red and black varsity jacket and jeans. He also had on red high-tops and a black beanie ( . )”
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter has Blake having angst over the fact she's ignored compared to her brother. (This is out of character for at least Lily people.) She ends up with a special clock she randomly finds, then next year is in Diagon Alley allowed to go around by herself. She runs into Draco who is trying to run away, and for some reason he promised Blaise (not Blake though) she could go to. She also talks about her clock to him. However, we jump to a year later, and Blake's already soul mates and cuddling with Draco. Lily and James have no problems with two more children showing up. A year later the three are cooking for Blake for her birthday. For some reason George also shows up, and is added to their family. (Really?) Then we jump to when they are nine, and they're cooking again. Luna randomly apparates into their family.
ORIGIN: It's another WrongBWL story.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: I doubt I'll ever find a well written WrongBWL fic because the implication here is people can't tell whose the one who lived, but canon makes it clear that who lived should be very evident. Blake as a three year old doesn't talk like a three year old. The writer also says, “they weren't fazed by the disappearance of two pure-blood children” at the end, but we both know this is true. We've also got a six year old wearing a Fall Out Boy shirt. Third chapter we get, “they didn't notice one less Weasley” at the end. The last chapter we get “and They sure didn't notice the crazy man's lost daughter.”
NOTES: The chapters are short on this one. The four existing chapters didn't even make 2,000 words. I suspect a very young writer here.
SAMPLE:
The whole of the Wizarding World was celebrating. It was July 31, their savior's third birthday. There was a lavish party at his house and almost everyone who was anyone was invited. Everyone was happy.
Except one little girl, hiding in the shadows of her room.
She was surrounded by ragged stuffed animals, thrown out by her brother that she just barely managed to save from being tossed out for good. Singing quietly to herself, she hugged one of the bears and frowned as she felt something cold and metallic around her bears neck. It was a necklace, shaped like a clock. Tapping it once, a hologram of s timer sprang out of it.
"I will not never turn off this clock until my parents teach me like a true daughter," she vowed to herself, starting the timer and slipping it around her neck.
- The link of the day is Badfic Bingo!!.
- Flashback Sue
J is for... jossed. I picked the Blaise being female theory for this one.
TITLE: Timers
PERPETRATOR: Silverstar44
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”Dave was not the Boy-Who-Lived. No one knew that though. Everyone thought he was and that was that. No one noticed the girl who stood in the shadows, a clock hanging around her neck. They weren't fazed by the disappearance of two pure-blood children. They didn't notice one less Weasley, and They sure didn't notice that crazy man's lost daughter. WrongBWL, Fem!Blaise,”
FULL NAME: Dave Potter, Blake Potter
SPECIES: The Harry Potter twins, a male and a female.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: “After Blaise was out of the place she used to call home, we found out that she was a total girly girl/hipster. I was a tomboy, and Drake was a music addict.” (Why is a six year old even using these labels! They wouldn't know!”
POSSESSIONS: See sample. “I slipped on turquoise leggings under some plain denim shorts. On top of that I put on a Fall Out Boy shirt, which Drake had gotten for her. (Once he was free of his father, he fell in love with music, especially Fall Out Boy.) After slipping on my favorite combat boots, I decided to just leave my hair down as it was.( cgi/set?id=185854825)” We also get this. “Right as I was finishing the waffle mix, Blaise entered the kitchen. She had on a cedar dress with a matching beanie, and grey leggings with black boots and black leg warmers. To top off the outfit she added a charcoal jacket. The whole outfit was definitely her (),” and this “Speaking of, Drake soon came down wearing jeans and a red t-shirt with a flannel shirt on under a sweater. He had on high-tops and his hair was messy as always ( cgi/img-thing?.out=jpg&size=l&tid=63538171).” They also have run of the library in the house. Here are their outfits when they are nine. “I threw on some black jeans with a union jack tank top and a flannel shirt on top. I slipped on my high tops and grey beanie and headed out of our room ( . ). […] Blaise was already up, wearing some denim shorts with a white tank tucked into them. Over it she put a flannel, and finished the outfit off with some nude sandals ( . ). […] George was over by the counter, and it looking like he was making pancakes! Heck yeah! He was wearing a grey shirt under a red and black varsity jacket and jeans. He also had on red high-tops and a black beanie ( . )”
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter has Blake having angst over the fact she's ignored compared to her brother. (This is out of character for at least Lily people.) She ends up with a special clock she randomly finds, then next year is in Diagon Alley allowed to go around by herself. She runs into Draco who is trying to run away, and for some reason he promised Blaise (not Blake though) she could go to. She also talks about her clock to him. However, we jump to a year later, and Blake's already soul mates and cuddling with Draco. Lily and James have no problems with two more children showing up. A year later the three are cooking for Blake for her birthday. For some reason George also shows up, and is added to their family. (Really?) Then we jump to when they are nine, and they're cooking again. Luna randomly apparates into their family.
ORIGIN: It's another WrongBWL story.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: I doubt I'll ever find a well written WrongBWL fic because the implication here is people can't tell whose the one who lived, but canon makes it clear that who lived should be very evident. Blake as a three year old doesn't talk like a three year old. The writer also says, “they weren't fazed by the disappearance of two pure-blood children” at the end, but we both know this is true. We've also got a six year old wearing a Fall Out Boy shirt. Third chapter we get, “they didn't notice one less Weasley” at the end. The last chapter we get “and They sure didn't notice the crazy man's lost daughter.”
NOTES: The chapters are short on this one. The four existing chapters didn't even make 2,000 words. I suspect a very young writer here.
SAMPLE:
The whole of the Wizarding World was celebrating. It was July 31, their savior's third birthday. There was a lavish party at his house and almost everyone who was anyone was invited. Everyone was happy.
Except one little girl, hiding in the shadows of her room.
She was surrounded by ragged stuffed animals, thrown out by her brother that she just barely managed to save from being tossed out for good. Singing quietly to herself, she hugged one of the bears and frowned as she felt something cold and metallic around her bears neck. It was a necklace, shaped like a clock. Tapping it once, a hologram of s timer sprang out of it.
"I will not never turn off this clock until my parents teach me like a true daughter," she vowed to herself, starting the timer and slipping it around her neck.