3495: A Potter Among Winchesters - Margaret "Daisy" Lily Evans-Potter

Jan 09, 2016 18:48

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TITLE: A Potter Among the Winchesters
PERPETRATOR: SilverMoon2015
SUE-O-METER: Bad
COVER/BANNER ART: I forgot to check this one.
SUMMARY:”Summary in first chapter as its too lengthy. ( Read more... )

related to the potters, rating - bad, e - american, related (character from another canon), p - crossover

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cal_yn January 10 2016, 08:31:40 UTC
Look, Suethor:

-GIT YOUR PAWS OFF MARY WINCHESTER, SHE IS WAY TOO BADASS FOR YOU. And also Amy Gumenick is really pretty.

-Mary has enough problems without adopting your five-year-old Sue and then dying two years later.

-You can't keep Mary alive without literally rewriting all of Spn. ALL OF IT, from the first episode on, including the character of John and the boys. Given the complete lack of consideration for this that you're showing in your Winsister fic, I really doubt you have the required skill to do so.

-You are considering writing in the Chronicles of Narnia fandom, eh? Rest assured I will be waiting with spork at the ready.

One of her reviewers said this: "If Mary winds up still getting killed without her telling John the truth about Daisy, I can already imagine what Daisys life is going to be like in the future with her formerly loving uncle turned into supernatural hating and killing ruthless Hunter, suddenly turning on her when he finds out she has magic and mistakes it for soul selling demon witch magic instead of NATURAL born magical non-demon witch."

Honestly, that could be a super interesting story if executed well.

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