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TITLE: Promises
CULPRIT: tortuga
SUMMARY: "CompetedFaith had known Jack ever since her town was attacked and turned to piracey herself. NOw after years of not seeing each other how will they react towards one another in adventure. I always thought that Jack should love someone from his past."
BEST LINE: You guys can choose. I really can't stand to re-read this to look for one.
THE VERDICT
It's a short drop and a sudden stop for you.
NAME: Faith
EYES: "deep brown eyes"
HAIR: "long black hair"
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: "rather pale skin"
OH SO SPESHUL POSSESSIONS: none
OBNOXIOUS AND/OR IMPLAUSIBLE ORIGIN: She's kidnapped (from England!) by the crew of the Black Pearl to be sold into slavery on Tortuga.
OBNOXIOUS AND/OR IMPLAUSIBLE CANON CONNECTIONS/AFFILIATIONS: Will's childhood friend. Jack's true love.
SOOPER SPESHUL ABILITIES: Giving me a headache.
THE "PLOT": Sue is sad because her buddy Will has just left England. Then she looks up and the Black Pearl is attacking her town and kidnapping all of the women and children to sell them on Tortuga. She is approached by Jack once on the ship and he tells her that he and his friend "Will" are going to help save her. He also says that he'll be captain of the ship soon. After I sat there confused for a while I figured out that "Will" is Bootstrap Bill which is more proof (added on to the fact that at the time Will left England Jack had lost the Pearl two years before and Bootstrap Bill was probably at the bottom of the ocean already) that the author didn't pay attention to the movie. Big surprise. Anyway the second chapter is apparently 20 years later and the author exposits that in the week it took them to get to Tortuga (!) she and Bootstrap Bill became good friends (because I guess he liked to go around befriending kids his son's age) and he told her about his son whom he named after him.
Anyway, after this non-sequiter we find out that Sue is working on some guy named Captain Morgan's ship. She's somehow just finding out that Jack is the captain of the Black Pearl again. Will has also become a pirate too, since he's Jack's first mate. When Jack and Will see Sue they both recognize her on sight, even though it would have been 20 years since either of them had seen her and Jack only knew her for a week... but whatever. So anyway both the Black Pearl and the ship Sue sails on go after the same treasure. Sue angsts about Will leaving her in England. Then Jack makes a deal with the captain of Sue's ship. Jack'll let him take 70% of the treasure if he gives him Sue (?!) and the remaining 30%. Sue is angry about this and Jack tells her that he did it so that they could catch up. Then she gets even angrier when she finds out that Will is engaged. Which makes sense no sense on two counts since 1) Why the hell aren't Will and Elizabeth married TWELVE YEARS after the movie and 2) They were childhood friends and in her early angst Sue is sad about the fact that she felt something more for him but come 20 years later she's acting like they were promised to each other or something since she's angry that he didn't even try to find her before getting engaged. Will's defense is that he didn't know where she was when he got engaged. Anyway, Sue angst some and we find out that she gave Jack the compass (!) which Jack refers to as broken (!) and that she also gave Bootstrap Bill something. Jack is acting like he's been stuck on her for years despite the fact that she was 14 when he last saw her and they only knew each other for a week. Will and Jack both apologize to Sue. Will for getting engaged and not telling her (!) and Jack for not telling her his plans (!). A storm comes up and Sue grabs the wheel and tries to steer them towards some island. Jack tries to stop her or something and they both end up overboard. Jack saves Sue and makes it to an island. Sue's then mad at Jack since, apparently, he should have listened to her. Then they pretty much play out the island scene from the movie only they kiss. Will sees them and gets jealous and I lose all will to recap this mess in detail.
The story continues in this manner getting worse and worse as it goes along. Will is bitter when Sue decides that she is in love with Jack, Sue abuses Elizabeth, and then a bonus Sue pops up for Will. Other highlights include: Sue slapping Will for no reason whatsoever and having a fake treasure map tatooed on her back by her previous captain. Somehow Sue and Jack get thrown in jail or something and some little girl who's the French Ambassador's daughter saves them. Or, more accurately, she just saves Sue and Jack is hanged. Then, seven years later Sue is dying from a disease or something and Jack is somehow miraculously not dead. Then, Sue dies. I think. I don't really know. All I know for sure is that this is one amazingly shitty story.
NOTES: OMGWTFBBQ?! is all that comes to mind.
EXCERPT:
Sue's village is attacked by the Black Pearl. Her village is in England.
This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic so please don't flame too much. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` `````````````````````````````` A young girl sat behind a large tree that overlooked the sea. She was like any other girl you would find. She had long black hair, deep brown eyes, and rather pale skin. She sighed. Her best friend Will had left today. He had been her only friend and now she was all alone. Since his parent's deaths he had to leave England and leaving her only with a promise that they would meet again someday, she felt dejected.
"Its all for the best I guess." She said while holding back tears that stung her eyes.
She was the young age of 14 but she felt something more for him. She would cry herself to sleep that night. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ```````````````````````````````` She awoke with a start when she heard the sounds of cannons in the distance.
"That's coming from the village!" she screamed to no one.
She ran as fast as she could towards the sounds but as soon as she got there she couldn't see past all the people who were screaming and running away. She covered her ears from the sounds of metal hitting metal, gunshots and more cannons. Then she heard someone call her name.
"Faith! Run child! Run!" Said a fat woman who she recognized as the bakers wife.
"What's happening? Where is everyone going?" She screamed over the noise but the woman had already run away.
"Get out of the way wench!!" Yelled a rough voice. Then she was thrown against something hard and hit her head.
"Why'd you do that Pintel! The captain said to bring all the children and women with us! We have to bring her to the ship!" Yelled another man. This one was skinny and had shorter hair. She felt herself being lifted up and thrown onto the mans shoulders.
"Let go of me!! Who are you!!? What do you want!!?" Faith screamed while hitting and screaming and even biting the man who carried her.
"Bloody Hell!" Yelled the man as his fingers were bitten and hair pulled.
"I've just about had enough of you wench!" He screamed. Then she was hit over the head with something blunt but heavy and she blacked out. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ```````````````````````````` She groaned and rolled over as something hit her head. A few minutes later she heard soft footsteps coming toward her and her shoulder was shaken.
"You still alive girl?" Said a quiet yet rough voice. Her eyes fluttered open and she saw the most amazing warm brown eyes she had ever seen.
"Who are you? Where am I?"
"You on the pirate ship The Black Pearl heading towards Tortuga. You and all the other kids are going to be sold there."
"What!! They cant do that!! What's going to happen to me!!?" She screamed and then broke into tears. She had heard many horrible stories about pirates and this was the last place she wanted to be.
"It'll be alright lass. I'm here. Me and me friend will here are going to help you. Nothing bad is going to help you. What's your name?"
"Faith. You still haven't told me who you are." She whispered.
"I'm Jack Sparrow. Captain one day." ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ````````````````````````````
So there's the first chapter. I hope you liked it. It's not as good as I wanted it to be but like I said, this is my first try. Well please review and let me know it you like it. Suggestions are appreciated. Thanks a bunch!!
~Tortuga~
I'm so confused by this story.
I'm back!! I know the first chapter was crap so I fixed this one a bit before I put it up.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything that is POTC. I'm serious. I don't even own the DVD. (Hopefully soon though anyway if I don't even own the DVD how do you expect me to own them. I dunno just read the story because I'm confusing myself. ````````````` "Faith! Faith! Come on now lass don't be dreamin' now we got work to be doing!" Yelled Captain Morgan (I know its like a beer thing but get over it) Faith sighed as she was brought back to reality.
"Aye cap'n I'm on me way now." She yelled back as she climbed the web of ropes on her way to untangle the ropes that the cabin boy had messed up. It had been along time ago that she had met Jack and Will, who was more commonly known as Bootstrap Bill. She had become close friends with Will and he had told her about his son whom he named after himself who was about her age. It was Jack who was a mystery to her. But that was a long time ago. At least a good 20 years ago and they had separated as soon as they had gotten to Tortuga the same week that they had met. 'Speak of the devil' She thought. 'On my way there right now.'
"Penny for yer thoughts Faith." Said the little cabin boy who was working with her on the mess of ropes.
"None of yer business." She answered.
"Did ye hear about the Black Pearl? She's going to Tortuga." The boy trying to strike up a conversation with her. She cringed as he said the name. The same ship that had attacked her seaside village.
"Really now?" She said trying to sound uninterested but with no success.
"Yep. Barbossa's been killed and that Captain Sparrows taken over. Him and some Will Turner man." He said seeing her interest.
"CAPTAIN AND WILL WHO?!?!" She sputtered almost falling from the ropes. She thought that Will had died.
"Umm...Sparrow. Talks real funny and gestures a lot with his hands." He said quietly shocked at her reaction. She just stared at him for the longest time then smiled.
"He finally got his wish then." `````````` When they reached Tortuga it was very odd. There was hardly anyone out and even then they were running home. There weren't even any 'night walkers' out. Now even for Tortuga that was odd. 'Oh well' she thought 'I need a drink more than anything right now.' She started to walk to the closest bar that was still open. The Faithful Bride. When she got inside it was unlike what it was like outside. People were drinking and there were whores everywhere. She shrugged as she looked around.
When she got something to drink she walked towards a large crowd in the corner of the room. 'This should be entertaining' she thought 'someone's probably eating something gross.' As she got nearer to the group and pushed her way the front she heard a familiar voice. A very LOUD voice but she couldn't remember who it belonged too. When she got to the front she saw him and gasped. It was Jack and Will. Or a very young looking Will. That's when Will saw her and gasped.
"FAITH?!?! What are you doing here?"
"What the bloody hell Will! Don't interrupt me when I'm telling a st..BLOODY HELL!! FAITH!! That you? Sit sit sit!!" Jack said moving over so she could sit alcohol with strong on his breath. Will still had his mouth open when she sat down. The curious crowd moved in closer trying to find out who she was.
"How've ye be.WHAT ARE YE SCRUVY DOGS STILL DOING HERE?! GO!!" Jack bellowed.
"Nay, continue with yer story. I have to be getting back me ship." Faith said as she stood up to leave.
"Which ship ye be sailin' on?" Said Jack a plan forming in his mind
"The Haywood. Under Cap'n Morgan." Faith said before leaving. ```````````` As Will started to walk back to the Pearl, and leave Jack to whatever it was that he said he needed to do, he thought about the bar. He hadn't seen her in such a long time. 'Its not hard to imagine her as a pirate. We always used to play pirates when we were children' But now she seemed different now. Not helpless. His thoughts turned to Elizabeth. 'How can I think of another woman when I have all I need with Elizabeth' ``````````` As Jack walked towards another bar he also thought about her. 'She changed so much' He thought. 'When I first met her she was slightly pathetic lying there and during the day she was pretty week. Now she's.beautiful.' He shook his head to try and get rid of the thought.
"She's just a lass" He said out-loud. He tried not to think of her as he walked into the bar. He spotted who he was looking for and slowly walked towards them.
"If it isn't ol' Cap'n Jack Sparrow." The drunk pirate said as he offered him some rum. Jack put up his hands.
"I wont have rum here. Its been watered down. Only good rum in this town is at the Faithful Bride. Anyway I didn't come here for yer company Morgan. I've eard of a treasure and come to ask if ye be lookin' fer some fun." Jack explained with many exaggerated expressions with his hands.
"A treasure eh? Have a seat Jack." `````````
"Faith lass were have you been? We leave in two hours!" Said the first mate.
"Why are we leaving?"
"While in a bar he 'eard a story of some kind of treasure and now e's going after it." The first mate said as he started to walk away. The whole deck was busy as she made her way to help way anchor. ````````````
There's the second chapter I hope you liked it! I am very open to suggestions. Well please review I thrive off of reviews. I already have ideas for the third chapter but I'm not going to put it up it nobody reviews.
~Tortuga~
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Honestly, I don't believe this author even watched the movie.
Hello again!! Id like to hello to all the people who read and DON'T review. Tsk tsk tsk. Any who I'd like to thank my first reviewer ever! PED-sarah who sent me a review and inspired me to keep writing. Thanks a lot you're my new favorite person in the world! Cept for Cap'n Jack that is. Sorry you'll have to fight for it.
Disclaimer: I don't own Potc or anything relating to potc. Except for a picture of Jack and Will, which I look at every night before bed. I am NOT obsessed.
Faith sat in the room she and the other female pirate, Iz, shared. She hadn't seen Will in such a long time. She had been angry and hurt when he had left and thought that she would hate him for the rest of her life for leaving her. But when she saw him again two nights ago everything she had felt for him before came rushing back.
"Tha's crazy. I cant blame em' for leavin. He didn't know what was going to happen." Faith though out loud to herself.
"Oh Bloody 'ell woman!! Will ye jus shut up!! Yeve been talking to yerself for an hour. Give it a rest already!" The other pirate said throwing an apple at her.
"I'm going to need that back." She said looking at the apple with great interest. Faith just looked at her, picked up the apple and bit into it.
"It'll shut me up." Faith said glaring at the other woman.
It was dusk and Jack was almost all alone on the deck as he steered the ship. He had made a bargain with Morgan and it would soon be complete.
"I wonder if it's still there?" He said quietly to himself.
Will was walking aimlessly around the ship's deck wondering where they were going seeing that Jack didn't tell anyone.
'This probably has something to do with Faith.' Will thought.
When both ships had arrived at Isle Diete they met at the large rock formation and started to count off paces. When they found the spot where the treasure was they started to dig and found an old tunnel that led to a small underground cave that was filled with treasure.
"Rudders and sails! Look at all this gold!" Iz yelled. They started to go through everything and started to divide everything up evenly. When that was done about two hours later Morgan's men started to take about half of Jack's men's share.
"Bloody Hell!! What do ye think yer going with me share of treasure?!" Gibbs yelled pulling out his pistol along with many other of Jack's crew.
"Put em' away you bloody idiots!" Jack yelled at his crew.
"Jack. I'm not if ye noticed that their takin our share of the treasure." Gibbs told the captain.
"O' course I knew that. What do ye take me fer? A blind man? It' was agreed on that Morgan be takin 70 % of the booty while we be taking 30% and the girl." Jack told Gibbs who was lookin very confused.
"WHICH GIRL YE BE TALKIN ABOUT JACK?!?" Faith yelled.
"Ye o' course. Welcome to the Black Pearl Faith." Jack said winking at her at the same time flashing a gold grin.
"YE AGREED WITH THIS?" Faith turned and yelled at Morgan.
"Aye and there'll be no need to be yellin at me it's a done deal." Morgan said then quickly added when Faith glared at him and stated to curse under her breath. "Ye can't blame I was drunk!" He said picking out some treasure for himself. Faith walked over to Jack and pulled him out of the cave not paying attention to all the laugher and dirty comments thrown at them.
"Why did ye make a deal with me cap'n fer me?"
"Jus cause I avn't seen ye in a while and thought that we might catch up." Jack said putting his arm around her shoulders.
"Don't touch me!" Faith yelled at him. But in truth the hadn't wanted him to move it. But she was supposed to be angry with him!
"Are you two okay out here?" Came Will's voice from behind her.
"Jack made a deal with Morgan and now I'm on is' ship." Faith said starting to calm down.
"I had a fight similar to this with Elizabeth before I left on the Pearl."
"Who's she?" Faith said.
"Oh Elizabeth? She's my fiancée. Anyway we had a fight that was kind of like this in a.."
"Yer fiancée'??" Faith yelled. With that she turned and ran off towards where her ship was docked to get her things.
"Well tha was a little bit distressing." Jack said turning to Will.
"Why is she angry at me? I didn't know where she was when Elizabeth and I got engaged." Will said looking confused.
"I can't believe them!! Jack making that deal with me cap'n and Will getting engaged before even trying to find me!!" Faith fumed
"Well I'll miss ye but I'll be glad to get me own room again." Iz said coming up behind her.
"Peace and quiet at last" Iz said grinning.
"Leave me alone Iz I've 'ad a long day." Faith said before grabbing her stuff and leaving the room and started to make her way towards the Black Pearl. Again. She didn't understand why she was so mad at Will. He didn't know where she was and it's not like it mattered. He loved Elizabeth and from her experience when he set his mind on something or someone he was stuck on it.
"Then why do I feel broken?"
Jack waited for Faith to come aboard and had already given her the room that Anna Maria had slept in. She had changed so much from the day he had first seen her. She had shorter hair about her shoulders and dark eyes. He remembered the day she had given him his compass. It had been the last day she was on the Black Pearl. She had given something to Bootstrap. He forgot what it was but he remembered that she had wanted to talk to him the whole day but he didn't want to hear what she had to say because he hated goodbyes. She had walked off the ship and turned to him and given it to him.
"It'll always lead back to where you belong." Faith had said. He found out that it was broken. He didn't know if she had known that and he still wasn't sure. He started to hum 'A Pirates life for me' when she came aboard.
"Welcome to the Black Pearl luv!" He said grinning again. She just glared at him. 'This is going to be very interesting.' He thought as he went to show her where she would be sleeping.
Well there is the third chapter. I hope you people keep reviewing cause I won't put the fourth chapter up if nobody reviews. I know this isn't the longest chapter but I promise that the next chapter will be longer. One more time: review review review!! I like to know what people think of my work. Good or Bad.
~Tortuga~
Correction, the author must have seen the movie. She ganks scenes from it.
Hello readers. First off id like to thank my reviewers: PED-sarah and JessieRose. I love you guys and thanks for all the support and telling me to keep on going with the story. I wrote and extra long chapter for you guys so you better like it or else I'll set my . whatever it is I think of at the time on ye! Or I'll just be disappointed at ye. Anyway, Enjoy!!
Disclaimer: I don't own POTC so please don't sue me. Unless I can buy them for like 20 bucks then they really could be mine and then I could be free from these disclaimers forever! What's that? I can't buy em? Damn. I just own Faith and that's not saying much seeing as she's brought me no money. Again I say damn.
Two hours after Faith was aboard and they set sail she went down below to play poker. 'At least I'm winning' She thought 'One good thing has happened today.'
"Faith the cap'ns askin fer ye. E's on deck." Gibbs called. Faith ignored the jeers and sexual comments coming from the crew. She gathered her winnings and made her way up towards the deck. As soon as she got up it didn't take too long for her to find out where the captain was. As she walked closer to Jack she saw that Will was there with him. 'That's jus' perfect.' She thought.
"What d'ya want?" Faith said as she crossed her arms over her chest.
"I wanted to apologize for not telling you about Elizabeth. I don't know why seeing as I had only seen you for about two hours total we didn't really have a chance to talk." Will said stepping forward.
"What kinda apology is tha'? You apologize then you make an excuse? What are ye tryin to do? Confuse me? 'Cause it's working." Faith said her anger returning from before.
"He was jus tryin to apologize ye. There's no need to be yellin lass." Faith looked at him hard opening her mouth to said something but was silenced when his finger was placed against her lips.
"I'll be havin no argument. I'm tha cap'n of this ship and ye be part of me crew." Jack said as he withdrew his finger much to Faith's disappointment.
"An. I also wanted to.ap.a...Apoligize fer not telling ye of me plans." Jack said quickly before turning around.
"What?" Faith said smiling knowing that he hated having to apologize.
"I said I was sorry are ye happy now?" Jack said getting angry with her.
"Thas' all I was needin' to hear. Anythin else cap'n before I leave?" Faith said her smile now turning into a grin. Not waiting for an answer she left to go win some more money. Will stood there staring in disbelief.
"You actually apologized for something?" Will said.
"Leave it be." Jack said
Three hours later they came upon a fierce storm. It was raining hard and there was water spilling over the sides trying to take people with it.
"Cap'n!" Faith yelled over the sound of the storm.
"We'll never make it out of this storm if ye don't take it into harbor!"
"Not yet luv! We'll make it!" Jack yelled back. Faith walked over to him trying not to slip on the slick wood. She grabbed the wheel and started to turn it towards on of the islands.
"What are ye out of yer mind lass?" Jack yelled as he tried to grab the wheel away from her.
"We'll never make it and I fer one don't feel like dying!" She screamed at him as she tried to regain control.
"I'll have ye marooned fer this!" Jack yelled one more time before he struggled with the wheel. Just as Gibbs was coming up to help Jack, Faith let go of the wheel and it sent the wheel spinning and the mast heading towards them. Faith screamed as it sent her and Jack over the rails.
Faith struggled to surface but the blow had knocked the air out of her and it didn't help that she screamed. She kicked one more time before feeling something wrap around her waist and her world went dark.
Faith woke and immediately turned to her side to cough up the water that she had swallowed.
"You okay now luv?" Jack said looking down at her with worry in his eyes.
"Stop calling me luv." She said before coughing up the last of the water. Jack helped her stand up and they walked along the beach to find anything that would tell them where they were while picking up the things that were on them at the time that they fell over board.
"This is all your fault ye know Jack. If ye would've jus' listened to me and made for the island we wouldn't be on this god-forsaken piece of land!" Faith said kicking some dirt.
"My fault! If ye had jus' listened to me I was making way for a trading town that wasn't t' far away. I am the cap'n ye know." Jack exclaimed as he stopped to glare at her. Faith also stopped as she saw three silhouettes in the distance.
"Jack."
"Wha' now! Ye want to blame yer life's mistakes on me now?" Jack yelled
"JACK!!" Faith yelled never taking her eyes of the three figures.
"WHA!"
"Look! I don't think wer' alone on this island." Faith said as she followed Jack towards the people. As the got closer they saw that they were three dead about the age of 17 tied to three poles facing the sea.
"Wha' happened?" Faith said quietly.
"I've met them before. Good boys they were." Jack said as he took off his hat for a moment. Faith moved closer to Jack.
"Who did this?"
"Rum runners must 'ave. They probably tried to steal some of their supplies and got caught." Jack said as he put his hat back on. Turning around and walking to the other side of the island saying something about having to find shelter. Faith stood there for a moment and then ran to catch up to Jack.
Will walked up to Gibbs after the storm looking around.
"Where did Jack and Faith go? I haven't been able to find them since before the storm." Will said still looking around him.
"Well they uhh.ummm.they kind of.Fell over board fighting for the wheel." Gibbs said turning his attention to the broken rail from when they fell over.
"They WHAT?!" Will yelled loudly enough that most of the crew stopped and looked their way.
"Get back ta work ya scallywags!" Gibbs yelled at the crew before turning his attention back to Will.
"Alls I saw was Jack and Faith fighting over the wheel. I ran to help Jack but before I got there they had already fallen off." Gibbs said shaking his head slowly.
"Always said that bringing a woman aboard was bad luck. Jack never listened t'me anyways." 'I hope she's aright' Will thought. 'If anything has happened to her I swear I will kill Jack.' Will surprised himself at that thought. He had never thought that he would kill anyone over her. She was a good friend of his sure but he had never even thought about killing anyone he knew over Elizabeth. Had he fallen in love with Faith? 'What am I thinking! I am in love with Elizabeth! And only Elizabeth. Wasn't he?'
"Head towards the island that we were close to the time that they fell off."
"But Will? What about the code?" asked Gibbs
"I said we're going to look for then. Now Gibbs!" Will yelled
"It'll get cold at night. We should find some shelter." Faith said looking for a place to sleep.
"How bout right here. It's too dark to look anywhere else." Jack said with a grin on his face.
"There's only room fer o' us one to lie down." Faith said as she went to leave but Jack pulled on her sleeve so she fell down.
"Bloody hell! What was that fer?" Faith yelled as she sat on a shell.
"We'll just 'ave to share luv. Now get some sleep we should try to find a way to get off the island tomorrow." Jack said closing his eyes to sleep. Faith sighed and decided just for tonight.
Faith woke to the sound of Jack's voice.
"Faith over here! I found some rum!" Jack said as he carried a box towards the fire that she had made before she fell asleep.
"Where'd ye find that Jack?" Faith said as she frowned.
"They were half buried over by that clump of trees." Jack replied as he grabbed a bottle out and took a swig.
"Ahh.Rum. Will never go bad on ye. Want some luv?" Jack said as he held a bottle out to her.
"Why not." She said as she grabbed the bottle from Jack taking a swig from it. She started to cough.
"How old is this stuff?"
"How should I know?" Jack said taking another drink form his bottle.
"Mhhmm."
An hour and a half later Jack and Faith were dancing and singing around a now very large fire. When they were done with the crates and bottles they had thrown them into the fire.
"And really bad eggs!" They sang together only stopping to take sips from their bottles. By the time that they had fallen onto the ground to dizzy to keep going Faith had already become very drunk.
"Did ye ever see me tattoo? I got it when Morgan stashed the booty from my very first transport ship. It was carrying gold and silver from some country or other." Faith said showing him a tattoo on the bottom part of her back. Not to Jack's surprise it was a map. 'Probably showing where some treasure or other is.' Jack thought
"Ye know Jack, I always thought that ye were charmin. Even though I yelled at ye a lot and didn't really talk to ye." Faith stopped to take a last drink for her bottle looking very sad when it became empty.
"Ye don't know the half of it luv." Jack said. Faith laughed and to Jack that was the opportune moment. His eyes locked with his as they leaned in closer to each other. Their lips met in a kiss. Jack hands cupped her face and she clutched his shirt bringing him closer to her.
"William! We've reached the island and there's a large fire and dancing of some sorts going about. Shall we go ashore?" Gibbs said
"No. Me and ole Cotton will go." Will said walking to deck towards the boats.
"Aye." Gibbs said with uncertainty in his voice.
When Cotton and Will reached the shore Will told Cotton to stay there until he came back with Jack and Faith. As he reached the large fire he say them. Together.
"Dancing eh Gibbs. Certainly some kind of dance going on." Will said quietly to himself making a mental note to make sure that Gibbs was more clear next time. He watched the two and realized that he was very jealous. 'Damn why did this have to happen?' Will though angrily. Just then Faith suddenly broke their kiss and ran towards the seashore and started to throw up so violently that her whole body shook. Jack immediately ran and held her hair back and said comforting words to her. After a few minutes she washed out her mouth and fell asleep in Jack's arms. Will decided he would wait a till he was sure she was sleeping before he would bring them to the boat.
Faith awoke to a swaying motion and had a splitting headache.
"Bloody Hell!" She said loudly as she rubbed her temples and sat up.
"Careful. You got pretty sick last night." Will said pushing her to lie back down.
"All I remember was the storm. What happened after that?" Faith said still confused.
"You'll have to talk to Jack about that." Will said standing up to leave.
"Jack I need to talk to you." Will said walking up to Jack.
"What is it Will ole boy?" Jack said happier than he usually was.
"What did you think you were doing on the island with Faith. You knew she was drunk or was that your plan all along?" Will said angrily.
"I can't control the weather chum. And what do ye mean my plan all along? Ye think that ever since I saw her in Tortuga that I planned for us to 'ave a fight, get deserted on an island and end up kissing and eventually get rescued by ye?" Jack said getting angry himself. "Not in the least."
"Well the why the bloody hell did you kiss her?"
"Why do you bloody care?" Jack said raising an eyebrow.
"Because she's a good friend of mine. I care about he goes and kisses her." Will said seeming shaken up by what Jack said.
"If ye say so mate." Jack said turning away from Will.
'Wha' he said did have some merit.' Jack thought. 'I did have a plan and still do with her but not like what he was saying. I'm Captain Jack Sparrow. I don't get attached or evenfall in luv. Or do I?' Jack thought as Faith came out onto deck.
I hope you liked it. I know it's a very long chapter compared to my last ones but I hope you guys liked it. I'm told that the first treasure that they found with Jack's deal with Morgan was too easy to find so I might rewrite that part. I think it was in the 3rd chapter. Anyway. I luv all you guys who read even if you don't review but I hope you do because I love getting them.
~Tortuga~
Elizabeth is bashed. Again.
Hello again. I know that some of you guys may not have liked the last chapter and im sorry if I ruined the whole possible Will/Faith thing that nobody really wanted but I will get Will a girl. Besides Elizabeth because I really hate her ya know? Anyway on with the thank you's. PED-sarah(my first and favorite reviewer because she can see when my story starts to downhill and gives me advise.), and one of my new favorites Candace who sent me possibly the nicest review I have ever received! I luv all you guys and will work on this chapter to the best of my ability. Sorry if the last chapter was also too long but I promised you guys that a little Jack/Faith stuff and that was the only way I could see anything happening between them.
Disclaimer: Okay I think that everybody by this time has got the idea that I do not own POTC! Im not proud of it but if I did why would I be typing instead of grabbing onto Orlando Bloom's arm but more likely Johnny Depp's arm and never ever letting go. But since he lives in like France (damn) and has a girlfriend (double damn). Oh well.
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Faith woke up in Jack's room in his bed. 'Bloody 'ell what am I doing in here?' Faith thought as she sat up. 'I didn't get drunk last night did I?' She sat there for a minute as the night's events came back to her. She and Jack had been in his room all night. They had stayed u p for a while talking about things like when they had first met. They had talked for a while and got to know each other. 'In more than one way' Faith thought with a grin on her face. Everything that had happened that night had been very overwhelming but she couldn't complain. 'What am I supposed to tell Will?' The smile leaving Faith's face as she got up and started to find her clothes and put them on. She walked out of the cabin and into the bright light. 'It must be the afternoon already.' She thought as she shielded her eyes.
"Mornin luv!" Jack said walking up to her with a cheeky grin on his face putting his arms around her.
"Mornin Jack. Ummm. Where's Will? Have you talked to him yet?" Faith said feeling a little uncomfortable at the glances from the crew.
"No not yet luv but im sure he'll understand." Jack said planting a kiss on her forehead before excusing himself and walking towards the pirate who motioned for him to come over. Faith sighed. What was she going to do about Will? Everything was too getting too complicated. She looked up to where she head Will's voice. He and Jack were talking about something but when she started to walk towards them he looked at her and she saw a hurt look on his face. She got closer and Will stopped talking.
"I'll talk to you later Jack. I have to go do something." Will said walking away from them his eyes never leaving Faith's until he had walked past her.
"Did ye tell him?"
"Not yet luv it never came up. He wanted to take the ship to Port Royal. We're on our way there now." Jack said putting his arm around her waist.
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The ship stayed in harbor out of the site of the docks. They took a few small boats and headed towards dock. Faith, Jack, Will and Cotton were in one boat and it was a very quiet ride except the squawking from Cotton's parrot.
When they got there they managed to escape having to pay the dues for docking the boats there.
"Faith you must come and see Elizabeth with me. I think that you would like her." Will said, It had been the first thing he had said to her since he had saw her go into Jack's cabin that night.
"Alright." Faith said putting on a smile knowing that he must know something. But if she and Jack hadn't said anything how did he know? Jack walked towards another part of time as she and Will walked towards the governor's house. Faith started to get nervous as she saw all of the men in red coats and guns walking around the area.
"Don't worry. If you don't act nervous then you wont seem suspicious." Will whispered to her. She nodded and tried to take his advise but it was hard considering she had heard that Port Royal wasn't exactly the most pirate friendly town in the Caribbean. They reached the house without any problems and Will used the knocker. An old man answered the door and Will asked for Elizabeth.
"This way master William." The old man said as he showed him to where she was.
"Will!" Said a pretty woman when they entered the room. Elizabeth, al least that's who Faith thought it was, ran towards Will and threw her arms around him. Will returned the gesture then realized how awkward Faith looked.
"Elizabeth this is Faith. I told you about her before. We used to live in the same town before I came to find my father." Will said gesturing towards Faith.
"Why hello." Elizabeth said taking in Faith's appearance raising an eyebrow.
"Gone into the 'trading' business have we Faith?" Elizabeth said smiling a fake smile.
"Actually yes Elizabeth. How did you guess?" Faith said sarcastically. She decided that she didn't like Elizabeth very much. 'Probably one of those stuck up people who think their better than everyone else.' Faith thought.
"Will. Would you go get us some drinks honey?" Elizabeth said looking at Will.
"Anything darling." Will said leaving the room.
"So. You're the infamous Faith. A pirate? I would've thought that you would have turned out to become a whore from what I've heard." Elizabeth said as soon as Will left the room.
"Really? I always heard that governor's daughters where bitches but I wasn't sure till now that it was true." Faith said ready to fight if Elizabeth really wanted too. Elizabeth's face went red as she put her hands into fists. Faith noticed this.
"Careful there Elizabeth. You don't want to strain yerself." Faith said preparing herself incase a fist was thrown her way.
"I was captured by pirates and escaped. I would be careful with what you say to me." Elizabeth said a smile creeping upon her face.
"Really now. If yer so tough then why where ye captured in the first place?" Faith said balling her own fists. She really didn't like this person. Elizabeth didn't say anything but replied by throwing her fist into the side of Faith's face. Faith was taken back but so was Elizabeth and Faith saw this as an opening. Faith grabbed a nearby vase and threw it a Elizabeth catching her arm. "Bitch!" Elizabeth screamed as she started to throw her fists at Faith nearly missing her every time. Faith punched her in the nose and blood spewed everywhere. By this time Will had run into the room just in time to see Faith loose it. She was hitting Elizabeth everywhere with everything. Will ran over too her and grabbed Faith away from Elizabeth who was pathetically trying to defend herself.
"What happened here?" Will asked obviously confused. When he had left they had both been getting along fine.
"Nothing. Nothing at all Will. Just your little fiancé went crazy and started to hit me. I lost my temper that's all." Faith said wriggling her way out of Will's grasp and started to walk away.
"Don't walk away from me bitch!" Elizabeth screamed. Faith started to run. Will started to run after Faith but Elizabeth caught him by the arm.
"Leave her Will. You never needed her. She was just a crush. You have me now." Elizabeth said with another fake smile.
"No. I don't have you." Will said. He had seen enough to know that Elizabeth had started it. He left a confused and hurt Elizabeth and ran after Faith.
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"Oh well. I didn't need to like her anyway. I'm just surprised that Will is actually in love with that witch." Faith said to herself. It was getting dark but she knew where she would find Jack. 'He's going to laugh when he hears about Elizabeth throwing a fit.' Faith thought laughing to herself gaining strange looks from passer byres.
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Jack had been sitting in the bar minding his own business telling a few stories to a few drunk men while drinking his rum. Then this old whore he knew started to walk towards him. 'Bloody 'ell. Owd she get ere?' Jack thought as she walked closer.
"Jack Sparrow? I thought that was you. Why'd ye leave? You didn't come back. Thought that I lost ye." The woman said as she sat on his lap.
"Captain if ye will." Jack said feeling very uncomfortable. He then felt a very icy stare on the back of his head and he turned around to see Faith there with a very hurt look on her face but it was only there for a second then it was replaced by an angry look. 'A very angry look.' Jack winced.
"Really now? I didn't know that. How interesting. So Jack. Where's she from? Tortuga?" Faith said walking over to them and pushed the confused looking whore off his lap and pulled Jack to his feet.
"Now luv it's not what it looks like." Jack started lifting his hands up in defense.
"Really? How is it supposed to look Jack? Ye were jus getting to know each other a little more?" Faith said her voice rising a little more with each word catching the attention of all the others in the room. Faith looked around and saw them staring.
"What are ye looking at? Do I amuse you?" Faith screamed at them making them turn away.
"Did I amuse you? Did you pity me?" Faith said in a lower voice.
"No luv! It's not like that." Jack tried to explain but Faith had let go of him and ran out of the tavern.
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Okay I'm going to be evil and leave it there for now cause im not going to be here for the next like two days so I'm not going to write but review review review!! I didn't get a lot of reviews for the last chapter but I want you guys to review on this one. I have many ideas for the next one but please give me suggestions. Anyway merry Christmas!!
~Tortuga~
And here're my own contributions to the cause:
Now on the to the Sue. Better late than never. Ok, in this case never might have been better... but we're not here for avoidance. We're here to stare atrocities down.
TITLE: Promises
CULPRIT: tortuga
SUMMARY: "CompetedFaith had known Jack ever since her town was attacked and turned to piracey herself. NOw after years of not seeing each other how will they react towards one another in adventure. I always thought that Jack should love someone from his past."
BEST LINE: You guys can choose. I really can't stand to re-read this to look for one.
THE VERDICT
It's a short drop and a sudden stop for you.
NAME: Faith
EYES: "deep brown eyes"
HAIR: "long black hair"
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: "rather pale skin"
OH SO SPESHUL POSSESSIONS: none
OBNOXIOUS AND/OR IMPLAUSIBLE ORIGIN: She's kidnapped (from England!) by the crew of the Black Pearl to be sold into slavery on Tortuga.
OBNOXIOUS AND/OR IMPLAUSIBLE CANON CONNECTIONS/AFFILIATIONS: Will's childhood friend. Jack's true love.
SOOPER SPESHUL ABILITIES: Giving me a headache.
THE "PLOT": Sue is sad because her buddy Will has just left England. Then she looks up and the Black Pearl is attacking her town and kidnapping all of the women and children to sell them on Tortuga. She is approached by Jack once on the ship and he tells her that he and his friend "Will" are going to help save her. He also says that he'll be captain of the ship soon. After I sat there confused for a while I figured out that "Will" is Bootstrap Bill which is more proof (added on to the fact that at the time Will left England Jack had lost the Pearl two years before and Bootstrap Bill was probably at the bottom of the ocean already) that the author didn't pay attention to the movie. Big surprise. Anyway the second chapter is apparently 20 years later and the author exposits that in the week it took them to get to Tortuga (!) she and Bootstrap Bill became good friends (because I guess he liked to go around befriending kids his son's age) and he told her about his son whom he named after him.
Anyway, after this non-sequiter we find out that Sue is working on some guy named Captain Morgan's ship. She's somehow just finding out that Jack is the captain of the Black Pearl again. Will has also become a pirate too, since he's Jack's first mate. When Jack and Will see Sue they both recognize her on sight, even though it would have been 20 years since either of them had seen her and Jack only knew her for a week... but whatever. So anyway both the Black Pearl and the ship Sue sails on go after the same treasure. Sue angsts about Will leaving her in England. Then Jack makes a deal with the captain of Sue's ship. Jack'll let him take 70% of the treasure if he gives him Sue (?!) and the remaining 30%. Sue is angry about this and Jack tells her that he did it so that they could catch up. Then she gets even angrier when she finds out that Will is engaged. Which makes sense no sense on two counts since 1) Why the hell aren't Will and Elizabeth married TWELVE YEARS after the movie and 2) They were childhood friends and in her early angst Sue is sad about the fact that she felt something more for him but come 20 years later she's acting like they were promised to each other or something since she's angry that he didn't even try to find her before getting engaged. Will's defense is that he didn't know where she was when he got engaged. Anyway, Sue angst some and we find out that she gave Jack the compass (!) which Jack refers to as broken (!) and that she also gave Bootstrap Bill something. Jack is acting like he's been stuck on her for years despite the fact that she was 14 when he last saw her and they only knew each other for a week. Will and Jack both apologize to Sue. Will for getting engaged and not telling her (!) and Jack for not telling her his plans (!). A storm comes up and Sue grabs the wheel and tries to steer them towards some island. Jack tries to stop her or something and they both end up overboard. Jack saves Sue and makes it to an island. Sue's then mad at Jack since, apparently, he should have listened to her. Then they pretty much play out the island scene from the movie only they kiss. Will sees them and gets jealous and I lose all will to recap this mess in detail.
The story continues in this manner getting worse and worse as it goes along. Will is bitter when Sue decides that she is in love with Jack, Sue abuses Elizabeth, and then a bonus Sue pops up for Will. Other highlights include: Sue slapping Will for no reason whatsoever and having a fake treasure map tatooed on her back by her previous captain. Somehow Sue and Jack get thrown in jail or something and some little girl who's the French Ambassador's daughter saves them. Or, more accurately, she just saves Sue and Jack is hanged. Then, seven years later Sue is dying from a disease or something and Jack is somehow miraculously not dead. Then, Sue dies. I think. I don't really know. All I know for sure is that this is one amazingly shitty story.
NOTES: OMGWTFBBQ?! is all that comes to mind.
EXCERPT:
Sue's village is attacked by the Black Pearl. Her village is in England.
This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic so please don't flame too much. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` `````````````````````````````` A young girl sat behind a large tree that overlooked the sea. She was like any other girl you would find. She had long black hair, deep brown eyes, and rather pale skin. She sighed. Her best friend Will had left today. He had been her only friend and now she was all alone. Since his parent's deaths he had to leave England and leaving her only with a promise that they would meet again someday, she felt dejected.
"Its all for the best I guess." She said while holding back tears that stung her eyes.
She was the young age of 14 but she felt something more for him. She would cry herself to sleep that night. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ```````````````````````````````` She awoke with a start when she heard the sounds of cannons in the distance.
"That's coming from the village!" she screamed to no one.
She ran as fast as she could towards the sounds but as soon as she got there she couldn't see past all the people who were screaming and running away. She covered her ears from the sounds of metal hitting metal, gunshots and more cannons. Then she heard someone call her name.
"Faith! Run child! Run!" Said a fat woman who she recognized as the bakers wife.
"What's happening? Where is everyone going?" She screamed over the noise but the woman had already run away.
"Get out of the way wench!!" Yelled a rough voice. Then she was thrown against something hard and hit her head.
"Why'd you do that Pintel! The captain said to bring all the children and women with us! We have to bring her to the ship!" Yelled another man. This one was skinny and had shorter hair. She felt herself being lifted up and thrown onto the mans shoulders.
"Let go of me!! Who are you!!? What do you want!!?" Faith screamed while hitting and screaming and even biting the man who carried her.
"Bloody Hell!" Yelled the man as his fingers were bitten and hair pulled.
"I've just about had enough of you wench!" He screamed. Then she was hit over the head with something blunt but heavy and she blacked out. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ```````````````````````````` She groaned and rolled over as something hit her head. A few minutes later she heard soft footsteps coming toward her and her shoulder was shaken.
"You still alive girl?" Said a quiet yet rough voice. Her eyes fluttered open and she saw the most amazing warm brown eyes she had ever seen.
"Who are you? Where am I?"
"You on the pirate ship The Black Pearl heading towards Tortuga. You and all the other kids are going to be sold there."
"What!! They cant do that!! What's going to happen to me!!?" She screamed and then broke into tears. She had heard many horrible stories about pirates and this was the last place she wanted to be.
"It'll be alright lass. I'm here. Me and me friend will here are going to help you. Nothing bad is going to help you. What's your name?"
"Faith. You still haven't told me who you are." She whispered.
"I'm Jack Sparrow. Captain one day." ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ````````````````````````````
So there's the first chapter. I hope you liked it. It's not as good as I wanted it to be but like I said, this is my first try. Well please review and let me know it you like it. Suggestions are appreciated. Thanks a bunch!!
~Tortuga~
I'm so confused by this story.
I'm back!! I know the first chapter was crap so I fixed this one a bit before I put it up.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything that is POTC. I'm serious. I don't even own the DVD. (Hopefully soon though anyway if I don't even own the DVD how do you expect me to own them. I dunno just read the story because I'm confusing myself. ````````````` "Faith! Faith! Come on now lass don't be dreamin' now we got work to be doing!" Yelled Captain Morgan (I know its like a beer thing but get over it) Faith sighed as she was brought back to reality.
"Aye cap'n I'm on me way now." She yelled back as she climbed the web of ropes on her way to untangle the ropes that the cabin boy had messed up. It had been along time ago that she had met Jack and Will, who was more commonly known as Bootstrap Bill. She had become close friends with Will and he had told her about his son whom he named after himself who was about her age. It was Jack who was a mystery to her. But that was a long time ago. At least a good 20 years ago and they had separated as soon as they had gotten to Tortuga the same week that they had met. 'Speak of the devil' She thought. 'On my way there right now.'
"Penny for yer thoughts Faith." Said the little cabin boy who was working with her on the mess of ropes.
"None of yer business." She answered.
"Did ye hear about the Black Pearl? She's going to Tortuga." The boy trying to strike up a conversation with her. She cringed as he said the name. The same ship that had attacked her seaside village.
"Really now?" She said trying to sound uninterested but with no success.
"Yep. Barbossa's been killed and that Captain Sparrows taken over. Him and some Will Turner man." He said seeing her interest.
"CAPTAIN AND WILL WHO?!?!" She sputtered almost falling from the ropes. She thought that Will had died.
"Umm...Sparrow. Talks real funny and gestures a lot with his hands." He said quietly shocked at her reaction. She just stared at him for the longest time then smiled.
"He finally got his wish then." `````````` When they reached Tortuga it was very odd. There was hardly anyone out and even then they were running home. There weren't even any 'night walkers' out. Now even for Tortuga that was odd. 'Oh well' she thought 'I need a drink more than anything right now.' She started to walk to the closest bar that was still open. The Faithful Bride. When she got inside it was unlike what it was like outside. People were drinking and there were whores everywhere. She shrugged as she looked around.
When she got something to drink she walked towards a large crowd in the corner of the room. 'This should be entertaining' she thought 'someone's probably eating something gross.' As she got nearer to the group and pushed her way the front she heard a familiar voice. A very LOUD voice but she couldn't remember who it belonged too. When she got to the front she saw him and gasped. It was Jack and Will. Or a very young looking Will. That's when Will saw her and gasped.
"FAITH?!?! What are you doing here?"
"What the bloody hell Will! Don't interrupt me when I'm telling a st..BLOODY HELL!! FAITH!! That you? Sit sit sit!!" Jack said moving over so she could sit alcohol with strong on his breath. Will still had his mouth open when she sat down. The curious crowd moved in closer trying to find out who she was.
"How've ye be.WHAT ARE YE SCRUVY DOGS STILL DOING HERE?! GO!!" Jack bellowed.
"Nay, continue with yer story. I have to be getting back me ship." Faith said as she stood up to leave.
"Which ship ye be sailin' on?" Said Jack a plan forming in his mind
"The Haywood. Under Cap'n Morgan." Faith said before leaving. ```````````` As Will started to walk back to the Pearl, and leave Jack to whatever it was that he said he needed to do, he thought about the bar. He hadn't seen her in such a long time. 'Its not hard to imagine her as a pirate. We always used to play pirates when we were children' But now she seemed different now. Not helpless. His thoughts turned to Elizabeth. 'How can I think of another woman when I have all I need with Elizabeth' ``````````` As Jack walked towards another bar he also thought about her. 'She changed so much' He thought. 'When I first met her she was slightly pathetic lying there and during the day she was pretty week. Now she's.beautiful.' He shook his head to try and get rid of the thought.
"She's just a lass" He said out-loud. He tried not to think of her as he walked into the bar. He spotted who he was looking for and slowly walked towards them.
"If it isn't ol' Cap'n Jack Sparrow." The drunk pirate said as he offered him some rum. Jack put up his hands.
"I wont have rum here. Its been watered down. Only good rum in this town is at the Faithful Bride. Anyway I didn't come here for yer company Morgan. I've eard of a treasure and come to ask if ye be lookin' fer some fun." Jack explained with many exaggerated expressions with his hands.
"A treasure eh? Have a seat Jack." `````````
"Faith lass were have you been? We leave in two hours!" Said the first mate.
"Why are we leaving?"
"While in a bar he 'eard a story of some kind of treasure and now e's going after it." The first mate said as he started to walk away. The whole deck was busy as she made her way to help way anchor. ````````````
There's the second chapter I hope you liked it! I am very open to suggestions. Well please review I thrive off of reviews. I already have ideas for the third chapter but I'm not going to put it up it nobody reviews.
~Tortuga~
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Honestly, I don't believe this author even watched the movie.
Hello again!! Id like to hello to all the people who read and DON'T review. Tsk tsk tsk. Any who I'd like to thank my first reviewer ever! PED-sarah who sent me a review and inspired me to keep writing. Thanks a lot you're my new favorite person in the world! Cept for Cap'n Jack that is. Sorry you'll have to fight for it.
Disclaimer: I don't own Potc or anything relating to potc. Except for a picture of Jack and Will, which I look at every night before bed. I am NOT obsessed.
Faith sat in the room she and the other female pirate, Iz, shared. She hadn't seen Will in such a long time. She had been angry and hurt when he had left and thought that she would hate him for the rest of her life for leaving her. But when she saw him again two nights ago everything she had felt for him before came rushing back.
"Tha's crazy. I cant blame em' for leavin. He didn't know what was going to happen." Faith though out loud to herself.
"Oh Bloody 'ell woman!! Will ye jus shut up!! Yeve been talking to yerself for an hour. Give it a rest already!" The other pirate said throwing an apple at her.
"I'm going to need that back." She said looking at the apple with great interest. Faith just looked at her, picked up the apple and bit into it.
"It'll shut me up." Faith said glaring at the other woman.
It was dusk and Jack was almost all alone on the deck as he steered the ship. He had made a bargain with Morgan and it would soon be complete.
"I wonder if it's still there?" He said quietly to himself.
Will was walking aimlessly around the ship's deck wondering where they were going seeing that Jack didn't tell anyone.
'This probably has something to do with Faith.' Will thought.
When both ships had arrived at Isle Diete they met at the large rock formation and started to count off paces. When they found the spot where the treasure was they started to dig and found an old tunnel that led to a small underground cave that was filled with treasure.
"Rudders and sails! Look at all this gold!" Iz yelled. They started to go through everything and started to divide everything up evenly. When that was done about two hours later Morgan's men started to take about half of Jack's men's share.
"Bloody Hell!! What do ye think yer going with me share of treasure?!" Gibbs yelled pulling out his pistol along with many other of Jack's crew.
"Put em' away you bloody idiots!" Jack yelled at his crew.
"Jack. I'm not if ye noticed that their takin our share of the treasure." Gibbs told the captain.
"O' course I knew that. What do ye take me fer? A blind man? It' was agreed on that Morgan be takin 70 % of the booty while we be taking 30% and the girl." Jack told Gibbs who was lookin very confused.
"WHICH GIRL YE BE TALKIN ABOUT JACK?!?" Faith yelled.
"Ye o' course. Welcome to the Black Pearl Faith." Jack said winking at her at the same time flashing a gold grin.
"YE AGREED WITH THIS?" Faith turned and yelled at Morgan.
"Aye and there'll be no need to be yellin at me it's a done deal." Morgan said then quickly added when Faith glared at him and stated to curse under her breath. "Ye can't blame I was drunk!" He said picking out some treasure for himself. Faith walked over to Jack and pulled him out of the cave not paying attention to all the laugher and dirty comments thrown at them.
"Why did ye make a deal with me cap'n fer me?"
"Jus cause I avn't seen ye in a while and thought that we might catch up." Jack said putting his arm around her shoulders.
"Don't touch me!" Faith yelled at him. But in truth the hadn't wanted him to move it. But she was supposed to be angry with him!
"Are you two okay out here?" Came Will's voice from behind her.
"Jack made a deal with Morgan and now I'm on is' ship." Faith said starting to calm down.
"I had a fight similar to this with Elizabeth before I left on the Pearl."
"Who's she?" Faith said.
"Oh Elizabeth? She's my fiancée. Anyway we had a fight that was kind of like this in a.."
"Yer fiancée'??" Faith yelled. With that she turned and ran off towards where her ship was docked to get her things.
"Well tha was a little bit distressing." Jack said turning to Will.
"Why is she angry at me? I didn't know where she was when Elizabeth and I got engaged." Will said looking confused.
"I can't believe them!! Jack making that deal with me cap'n and Will getting engaged before even trying to find me!!" Faith fumed
"Well I'll miss ye but I'll be glad to get me own room again." Iz said coming up behind her.
"Peace and quiet at last" Iz said grinning.
"Leave me alone Iz I've 'ad a long day." Faith said before grabbing her stuff and leaving the room and started to make her way towards the Black Pearl. Again. She didn't understand why she was so mad at Will. He didn't know where she was and it's not like it mattered. He loved Elizabeth and from her experience when he set his mind on something or someone he was stuck on it.
"Then why do I feel broken?"
Jack waited for Faith to come aboard and had already given her the room that Anna Maria had slept in. She had changed so much from the day he had first seen her. She had shorter hair about her shoulders and dark eyes. He remembered the day she had given him his compass. It had been the last day she was on the Black Pearl. She had given something to Bootstrap. He forgot what it was but he remembered that she had wanted to talk to him the whole day but he didn't want to hear what she had to say because he hated goodbyes. She had walked off the ship and turned to him and given it to him.
"It'll always lead back to where you belong." Faith had said. He found out that it was broken. He didn't know if she had known that and he still wasn't sure. He started to hum 'A Pirates life for me' when she came aboard.
"Welcome to the Black Pearl luv!" He said grinning again. She just glared at him. 'This is going to be very interesting.' He thought as he went to show her where she would be sleeping.
Well there is the third chapter. I hope you people keep reviewing cause I won't put the fourth chapter up if nobody reviews. I know this isn't the longest chapter but I promise that the next chapter will be longer. One more time: review review review!! I like to know what people think of my work. Good or Bad.
~Tortuga~
Correction, the author must have seen the movie. She ganks scenes from it.
Hello readers. First off id like to thank my reviewers: PED-sarah and JessieRose. I love you guys and thanks for all the support and telling me to keep on going with the story. I wrote and extra long chapter for you guys so you better like it or else I'll set my . whatever it is I think of at the time on ye! Or I'll just be disappointed at ye. Anyway, Enjoy!!
Disclaimer: I don't own POTC so please don't sue me. Unless I can buy them for like 20 bucks then they really could be mine and then I could be free from these disclaimers forever! What's that? I can't buy em? Damn. I just own Faith and that's not saying much seeing as she's brought me no money. Again I say damn.
Two hours after Faith was aboard and they set sail she went down below to play poker. 'At least I'm winning' She thought 'One good thing has happened today.'
"Faith the cap'ns askin fer ye. E's on deck." Gibbs called. Faith ignored the jeers and sexual comments coming from the crew. She gathered her winnings and made her way up towards the deck. As soon as she got up it didn't take too long for her to find out where the captain was. As she walked closer to Jack she saw that Will was there with him. 'That's jus' perfect.' She thought.
"What d'ya want?" Faith said as she crossed her arms over her chest.
"I wanted to apologize for not telling you about Elizabeth. I don't know why seeing as I had only seen you for about two hours total we didn't really have a chance to talk." Will said stepping forward.
"What kinda apology is tha'? You apologize then you make an excuse? What are ye tryin to do? Confuse me? 'Cause it's working." Faith said her anger returning from before.
"He was jus tryin to apologize ye. There's no need to be yellin lass." Faith looked at him hard opening her mouth to said something but was silenced when his finger was placed against her lips.
"I'll be havin no argument. I'm tha cap'n of this ship and ye be part of me crew." Jack said as he withdrew his finger much to Faith's disappointment.
"An. I also wanted to.ap.a...Apoligize fer not telling ye of me plans." Jack said quickly before turning around.
"What?" Faith said smiling knowing that he hated having to apologize.
"I said I was sorry are ye happy now?" Jack said getting angry with her.
"Thas' all I was needin' to hear. Anythin else cap'n before I leave?" Faith said her smile now turning into a grin. Not waiting for an answer she left to go win some more money. Will stood there staring in disbelief.
"You actually apologized for something?" Will said.
"Leave it be." Jack said
Three hours later they came upon a fierce storm. It was raining hard and there was water spilling over the sides trying to take people with it.
"Cap'n!" Faith yelled over the sound of the storm.
"We'll never make it out of this storm if ye don't take it into harbor!"
"Not yet luv! We'll make it!" Jack yelled back. Faith walked over to him trying not to slip on the slick wood. She grabbed the wheel and started to turn it towards on of the islands.
"What are ye out of yer mind lass?" Jack yelled as he tried to grab the wheel away from her.
"We'll never make it and I fer one don't feel like dying!" She screamed at him as she tried to regain control.
"I'll have ye marooned fer this!" Jack yelled one more time before he struggled with the wheel. Just as Gibbs was coming up to help Jack, Faith let go of the wheel and it sent the wheel spinning and the mast heading towards them. Faith screamed as it sent her and Jack over the rails.
Faith struggled to surface but the blow had knocked the air out of her and it didn't help that she screamed. She kicked one more time before feeling something wrap around her waist and her world went dark.
Faith woke and immediately turned to her side to cough up the water that she had swallowed.
"You okay now luv?" Jack said looking down at her with worry in his eyes.
"Stop calling me luv." She said before coughing up the last of the water. Jack helped her stand up and they walked along the beach to find anything that would tell them where they were while picking up the things that were on them at the time that they fell over board.
"This is all your fault ye know Jack. If ye would've jus' listened to me and made for the island we wouldn't be on this god-forsaken piece of land!" Faith said kicking some dirt.
"My fault! If ye had jus' listened to me I was making way for a trading town that wasn't t' far away. I am the cap'n ye know." Jack exclaimed as he stopped to glare at her. Faith also stopped as she saw three silhouettes in the distance.
"Jack."
"Wha' now! Ye want to blame yer life's mistakes on me now?" Jack yelled
"JACK!!" Faith yelled never taking her eyes of the three figures.
"WHA!"
"Look! I don't think wer' alone on this island." Faith said as she followed Jack towards the people. As the got closer they saw that they were three dead about the age of 17 tied to three poles facing the sea.
"Wha' happened?" Faith said quietly.
"I've met them before. Good boys they were." Jack said as he took off his hat for a moment. Faith moved closer to Jack.
"Who did this?"
"Rum runners must 'ave. They probably tried to steal some of their supplies and got caught." Jack said as he put his hat back on. Turning around and walking to the other side of the island saying something about having to find shelter. Faith stood there for a moment and then ran to catch up to Jack.
Will walked up to Gibbs after the storm looking around.
"Where did Jack and Faith go? I haven't been able to find them since before the storm." Will said still looking around him.
"Well they uhh.ummm.they kind of.Fell over board fighting for the wheel." Gibbs said turning his attention to the broken rail from when they fell over.
"They WHAT?!" Will yelled loudly enough that most of the crew stopped and looked their way.
"Get back ta work ya scallywags!" Gibbs yelled at the crew before turning his attention back to Will.
"Alls I saw was Jack and Faith fighting over the wheel. I ran to help Jack but before I got there they had already fallen off." Gibbs said shaking his head slowly.
"Always said that bringing a woman aboard was bad luck. Jack never listened t'me anyways." 'I hope she's aright' Will thought. 'If anything has happened to her I swear I will kill Jack.' Will surprised himself at that thought. He had never thought that he would kill anyone over her. She was a good friend of his sure but he had never even thought about killing anyone he knew over Elizabeth. Had he fallen in love with Faith? 'What am I thinking! I am in love with Elizabeth! And only Elizabeth. Wasn't he?'
"Head towards the island that we were close to the time that they fell off."
"But Will? What about the code?" asked Gibbs
"I said we're going to look for then. Now Gibbs!" Will yelled
"It'll get cold at night. We should find some shelter." Faith said looking for a place to sleep.
"How bout right here. It's too dark to look anywhere else." Jack said with a grin on his face.
"There's only room fer o' us one to lie down." Faith said as she went to leave but Jack pulled on her sleeve so she fell down.
"Bloody hell! What was that fer?" Faith yelled as she sat on a shell.
"We'll just 'ave to share luv. Now get some sleep we should try to find a way to get off the island tomorrow." Jack said closing his eyes to sleep. Faith sighed and decided just for tonight.
Faith woke to the sound of Jack's voice.
"Faith over here! I found some rum!" Jack said as he carried a box towards the fire that she had made before she fell asleep.
"Where'd ye find that Jack?" Faith said as she frowned.
"They were half buried over by that clump of trees." Jack replied as he grabbed a bottle out and took a swig.
"Ahh.Rum. Will never go bad on ye. Want some luv?" Jack said as he held a bottle out to her.
"Why not." She said as she grabbed the bottle from Jack taking a swig from it. She started to cough.
"How old is this stuff?"
"How should I know?" Jack said taking another drink form his bottle.
"Mhhmm."
An hour and a half later Jack and Faith were dancing and singing around a now very large fire. When they were done with the crates and bottles they had thrown them into the fire.
"And really bad eggs!" They sang together only stopping to take sips from their bottles. By the time that they had fallen onto the ground to dizzy to keep going Faith had already become very drunk.
"Did ye ever see me tattoo? I got it when Morgan stashed the booty from my very first transport ship. It was carrying gold and silver from some country or other." Faith said showing him a tattoo on the bottom part of her back. Not to Jack's surprise it was a map. 'Probably showing where some treasure or other is.' Jack thought
"Ye know Jack, I always thought that ye were charmin. Even though I yelled at ye a lot and didn't really talk to ye." Faith stopped to take a last drink for her bottle looking very sad when it became empty.
"Ye don't know the half of it luv." Jack said. Faith laughed and to Jack that was the opportune moment. His eyes locked with his as they leaned in closer to each other. Their lips met in a kiss. Jack hands cupped her face and she clutched his shirt bringing him closer to her.
"William! We've reached the island and there's a large fire and dancing of some sorts going about. Shall we go ashore?" Gibbs said
"No. Me and ole Cotton will go." Will said walking to deck towards the boats.
"Aye." Gibbs said with uncertainty in his voice.
When Cotton and Will reached the shore Will told Cotton to stay there until he came back with Jack and Faith. As he reached the large fire he say them. Together.
"Dancing eh Gibbs. Certainly some kind of dance going on." Will said quietly to himself making a mental note to make sure that Gibbs was more clear next time. He watched the two and realized that he was very jealous. 'Damn why did this have to happen?' Will though angrily. Just then Faith suddenly broke their kiss and ran towards the seashore and started to throw up so violently that her whole body shook. Jack immediately ran and held her hair back and said comforting words to her. After a few minutes she washed out her mouth and fell asleep in Jack's arms. Will decided he would wait a till he was sure she was sleeping before he would bring them to the boat.
Faith awoke to a swaying motion and had a splitting headache.
"Bloody Hell!" She said loudly as she rubbed her temples and sat up.
"Careful. You got pretty sick last night." Will said pushing her to lie back down.
"All I remember was the storm. What happened after that?" Faith said still confused.
"You'll have to talk to Jack about that." Will said standing up to leave.
"Jack I need to talk to you." Will said walking up to Jack.
"What is it Will ole boy?" Jack said happier than he usually was.
"What did you think you were doing on the island with Faith. You knew she was drunk or was that your plan all along?" Will said angrily.
"I can't control the weather chum. And what do ye mean my plan all along? Ye think that ever since I saw her in Tortuga that I planned for us to 'ave a fight, get deserted on an island and end up kissing and eventually get rescued by ye?" Jack said getting angry himself. "Not in the least."
"Well the why the bloody hell did you kiss her?"
"Why do you bloody care?" Jack said raising an eyebrow.
"Because she's a good friend of mine. I care about he goes and kisses her." Will said seeming shaken up by what Jack said.
"If ye say so mate." Jack said turning away from Will.
'Wha' he said did have some merit.' Jack thought. 'I did have a plan and still do with her but not like what he was saying. I'm Captain Jack Sparrow. I don't get attached or evenfall in luv. Or do I?' Jack thought as Faith came out onto deck.
I hope you liked it. I know it's a very long chapter compared to my last ones but I hope you guys liked it. I'm told that the first treasure that they found with Jack's deal with Morgan was too easy to find so I might rewrite that part. I think it was in the 3rd chapter. Anyway. I luv all you guys who read even if you don't review but I hope you do because I love getting them.
~Tortuga~
Elizabeth is bashed. Again.
Hello again. I know that some of you guys may not have liked the last chapter and im sorry if I ruined the whole possible Will/Faith thing that nobody really wanted but I will get Will a girl. Besides Elizabeth because I really hate her ya know? Anyway on with the thank you's. PED-sarah(my first and favorite reviewer because she can see when my story starts to downhill and gives me advise.), and one of my new favorites Candace who sent me possibly the nicest review I have ever received! I luv all you guys and will work on this chapter to the best of my ability. Sorry if the last chapter was also too long but I promised you guys that a little Jack/Faith stuff and that was the only way I could see anything happening between them.
Disclaimer: Okay I think that everybody by this time has got the idea that I do not own POTC! Im not proud of it but if I did why would I be typing instead of grabbing onto Orlando Bloom's arm but more likely Johnny Depp's arm and never ever letting go. But since he lives in like France (damn) and has a girlfriend (double damn). Oh well.
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Faith woke up in Jack's room in his bed. 'Bloody 'ell what am I doing in here?' Faith thought as she sat up. 'I didn't get drunk last night did I?' She sat there for a minute as the night's events came back to her. She and Jack had been in his room all night. They had stayed u p for a while talking about things like when they had first met. They had talked for a while and got to know each other. 'In more than one way' Faith thought with a grin on her face. Everything that had happened that night had been very overwhelming but she couldn't complain. 'What am I supposed to tell Will?' The smile leaving Faith's face as she got up and started to find her clothes and put them on. She walked out of the cabin and into the bright light. 'It must be the afternoon already.' She thought as she shielded her eyes.
"Mornin luv!" Jack said walking up to her with a cheeky grin on his face putting his arms around her.
"Mornin Jack. Ummm. Where's Will? Have you talked to him yet?" Faith said feeling a little uncomfortable at the glances from the crew.
"No not yet luv but im sure he'll understand." Jack said planting a kiss on her forehead before excusing himself and walking towards the pirate who motioned for him to come over. Faith sighed. What was she going to do about Will? Everything was too getting too complicated. She looked up to where she head Will's voice. He and Jack were talking about something but when she started to walk towards them he looked at her and she saw a hurt look on his face. She got closer and Will stopped talking.
"I'll talk to you later Jack. I have to go do something." Will said walking away from them his eyes never leaving Faith's until he had walked past her.
"Did ye tell him?"
"Not yet luv it never came up. He wanted to take the ship to Port Royal. We're on our way there now." Jack said putting his arm around her waist.
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The ship stayed in harbor out of the site of the docks. They took a few small boats and headed towards dock. Faith, Jack, Will and Cotton were in one boat and it was a very quiet ride except the squawking from Cotton's parrot.
When they got there they managed to escape having to pay the dues for docking the boats there.
"Faith you must come and see Elizabeth with me. I think that you would like her." Will said, It had been the first thing he had said to her since he had saw her go into Jack's cabin that night.
"Alright." Faith said putting on a smile knowing that he must know something. But if she and Jack hadn't said anything how did he know? Jack walked towards another part of time as she and Will walked towards the governor's house. Faith started to get nervous as she saw all of the men in red coats and guns walking around the area.
"Don't worry. If you don't act nervous then you wont seem suspicious." Will whispered to her. She nodded and tried to take his advise but it was hard considering she had heard that Port Royal wasn't exactly the most pirate friendly town in the Caribbean. They reached the house without any problems and Will used the knocker. An old man answered the door and Will asked for Elizabeth.
"This way master William." The old man said as he showed him to where she was.
"Will!" Said a pretty woman when they entered the room. Elizabeth, al least that's who Faith thought it was, ran towards Will and threw her arms around him. Will returned the gesture then realized how awkward Faith looked.
"Elizabeth this is Faith. I told you about her before. We used to live in the same town before I came to find my father." Will said gesturing towards Faith.
"Why hello." Elizabeth said taking in Faith's appearance raising an eyebrow.
"Gone into the 'trading' business have we Faith?" Elizabeth said smiling a fake smile.
"Actually yes Elizabeth. How did you guess?" Faith said sarcastically. She decided that she didn't like Elizabeth very much. 'Probably one of those stuck up people who think their better than everyone else.' Faith thought.
"Will. Would you go get us some drinks honey?" Elizabeth said looking at Will.
"Anything darling." Will said leaving the room.
"So. You're the infamous Faith. A pirate? I would've thought that you would have turned out to become a whore from what I've heard." Elizabeth said as soon as Will left the room.
"Really? I always heard that governor's daughters where bitches but I wasn't sure till now that it was true." Faith said ready to fight if Elizabeth really wanted too. Elizabeth's face went red as she put her hands into fists. Faith noticed this.
"Careful there Elizabeth. You don't want to strain yerself." Faith said preparing herself incase a fist was thrown her way.
"I was captured by pirates and escaped. I would be careful with what you say to me." Elizabeth said a smile creeping upon her face.
"Really now. If yer so tough then why where ye captured in the first place?" Faith said balling her own fists. She really didn't like this person. Elizabeth didn't say anything but replied by throwing her fist into the side of Faith's face. Faith was taken back but so was Elizabeth and Faith saw this as an opening. Faith grabbed a nearby vase and threw it a Elizabeth catching her arm. "Bitch!" Elizabeth screamed as she started to throw her fists at Faith nearly missing her every time. Faith punched her in the nose and blood spewed everywhere. By this time Will had run into the room just in time to see Faith loose it. She was hitting Elizabeth everywhere with everything. Will ran over too her and grabbed Faith away from Elizabeth who was pathetically trying to defend herself.
"What happened here?" Will asked obviously confused. When he had left they had both been getting along fine.
"Nothing. Nothing at all Will. Just your little fiancé went crazy and started to hit me. I lost my temper that's all." Faith said wriggling her way out of Will's grasp and started to walk away.
"Don't walk away from me bitch!" Elizabeth screamed. Faith started to run. Will started to run after Faith but Elizabeth caught him by the arm.
"Leave her Will. You never needed her. She was just a crush. You have me now." Elizabeth said with another fake smile.
"No. I don't have you." Will said. He had seen enough to know that Elizabeth had started it. He left a confused and hurt Elizabeth and ran after Faith.
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"Oh well. I didn't need to like her anyway. I'm just surprised that Will is actually in love with that witch." Faith said to herself. It was getting dark but she knew where she would find Jack. 'He's going to laugh when he hears about Elizabeth throwing a fit.' Faith thought laughing to herself gaining strange looks from passer byres.
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Jack had been sitting in the bar minding his own business telling a few stories to a few drunk men while drinking his rum. Then this old whore he knew started to walk towards him. 'Bloody 'ell. Owd she get ere?' Jack thought as she walked closer.
"Jack Sparrow? I thought that was you. Why'd ye leave? You didn't come back. Thought that I lost ye." The woman said as she sat on his lap.
"Captain if ye will." Jack said feeling very uncomfortable. He then felt a very icy stare on the back of his head and he turned around to see Faith there with a very hurt look on her face but it was only there for a second then it was replaced by an angry look. 'A very angry look.' Jack winced.
"Really now? I didn't know that. How interesting. So Jack. Where's she from? Tortuga?" Faith said walking over to them and pushed the confused looking whore off his lap and pulled Jack to his feet.
"Now luv it's not what it looks like." Jack started lifting his hands up in defense.
"Really? How is it supposed to look Jack? Ye were jus getting to know each other a little more?" Faith said her voice rising a little more with each word catching the attention of all the others in the room. Faith looked around and saw them staring.
"What are ye looking at? Do I amuse you?" Faith screamed at them making them turn away.
"Did I amuse you? Did you pity me?" Faith said in a lower voice.
"No luv! It's not like that." Jack tried to explain but Faith had let go of him and ran out of the tavern.
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Okay I'm going to be evil and leave it there for now cause im not going to be here for the next like two days so I'm not going to write but review review review!! I didn't get a lot of reviews for the last chapter but I want you guys to review on this one. I have many ideas for the next one but please give me suggestions. Anyway merry Christmas!!
~Tortuga~