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[ceria_taliesin]

Title: The Story Keeper
Author: Ceria
Characters: Joshamee Gibbs, Jacob William Turner
Rating: PG
Summary: Little Turner needs a lesson and Gibbs gets to tell a story (#14 Gibbs and Jack backstory).
Disclaimer: Mickey and Co. own the universe and characters and I am not a mouse.
Author's notes: Thank you so much for your help and encouragement, watersword.

Comments

[veronica_rich]

I like your point of view, for Jacob (version of Jack?), and how Gibbs lets the boy help him around and ask questions. As much as I like smart!TurnerBoy, it's kind of nice to see him like a normal kid, taking things for granted he has access to that he doesn't realize he really does need.

[ceria_taliesin]

Thanks! I had a heck of a time with this one, I knew the story I wanted for Gibbs and Jack, but I couldn't figure out how to get it out until this little one just started yapping.

Jacob was... I'm not sure, more like it felt right. I wanted something reminiscent of Jack or James, but not either name.

[geekmama]

This was a lovely little story. Jacob is a charmer, and it's great to see things from his pov. Well done!

[ceria_taliesin]

Gibbs voice about killed me and I'm still not sure it's really right. Their son was fun to write though. Thanks!

[ceria_taliesin]

♥ He was fun to write.

[kseenaa]

That was a very cute little story. :-) Nice look in the background of Jack and Gibbs to. :-)

[ceria_taliesin]

Thank you. I was a little surprised by the boy, but I guess it meant Gibbs got to tell a story to new(ish) ears.

[ext_69049]

NED, GODDAMNIT.

[ceria_taliesin]

OH. Is that what you were saying? I thought you were saying Ted the whole time!

::snerk::

Well, it wasn't Nathan at least!