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Rom Nov Quoting-I've not done this for ages but I just had to share this with y'all.
The following extracts are taken from the literary gem entitled Hired: The Italian's Convenient Mistress by Carol Marinelli:
"She wasn't sure if he was talking about her present or the jewel that, when he released the chain, slipped cool and heavy between her breasts. They both stared down, his hands still behind her hair, warm fingers on the back of her neck. Her nipples liked it too-popping out like two disloyal bookends each side of the ruby.
Disloyal because she didn't want him to know how much she wanted him."
Lol, disloyal bookends!
"The keyboard of his ribcage had her jaw clench. She wanted to reach out, to stroke the keys, wanted to play him like a piano. Wanted not to notice the luscious swell of his quads, wanted not to notice the heavenly flat planes of his abdomen, or the swirl of hair around his mahogany nipples."
"His length was inside her and his eyes adored her. Rocking together, just locked in unhurried pleasure. Relishing the slide of skin on skin and the delicious friction they created-hardly moving on the outside, but long, slow strokes stirred her deep within. It was a dance that couldn't go on for ever because the tip to transition had her crying out, had him calling out her name as he filled her with his gift.
He groaned as he spilled inside her, and she dragged him deeper in answer."
His gift being his spermy, spermy, seamen of course!
"He was pushing up her dress as he sucked at her neck, unleashing his fierce erection and then tearing at her knickers, rough fingers were parting her thighs. It was uncomfortable as he stabbed inside her, but somehow it was tender."
Sorry, what? Stabbed inside her uncomfortabley? It's not so not sexy and it's so not good writing! And it's not the only time he "stabbs" into her in the book, it sounds really quite creepy!
The following extracts are taken from the literary gem entitled Hired: The Italian's Convenient Mistress by Carol Marinelli:
"She wasn't sure if he was talking about her present or the jewel that, when he released the chain, slipped cool and heavy between her breasts. They both stared down, his hands still behind her hair, warm fingers on the back of her neck. Her nipples liked it too-popping out like two disloyal bookends each side of the ruby.
Disloyal because she didn't want him to know how much she wanted him."
Lol, disloyal bookends!
"The keyboard of his ribcage had her jaw clench. She wanted to reach out, to stroke the keys, wanted to play him like a piano. Wanted not to notice the luscious swell of his quads, wanted not to notice the heavenly flat planes of his abdomen, or the swirl of hair around his mahogany nipples."
"His length was inside her and his eyes adored her. Rocking together, just locked in unhurried pleasure. Relishing the slide of skin on skin and the delicious friction they created-hardly moving on the outside, but long, slow strokes stirred her deep within. It was a dance that couldn't go on for ever because the tip to transition had her crying out, had him calling out her name as he filled her with his gift.
He groaned as he spilled inside her, and she dragged him deeper in answer."
His gift being his spermy, spermy, seamen of course!
"He was pushing up her dress as he sucked at her neck, unleashing his fierce erection and then tearing at her knickers, rough fingers were parting her thighs. It was uncomfortable as he stabbed inside her, but somehow it was tender."
Sorry, what? Stabbed inside her uncomfortabley? It's not so not sexy and it's so not good writing! And it's not the only time he "stabbs" into her in the book, it sounds really quite creepy!