Title: Never Rating: PG Summary: Ginny takes it upon herself to expand Harry's horizons. Word Count: 1,455 Notes/Warnings: Harry/Ginny. Rather very fluffy. Yes indeed. :) Written for r_becca's Alphabet Challenge.
That is absolutely adorable! It's fluffy, yes, but not over the top. The way you write Harry as insecure and perfectly teenager-y keeps him from being too saccharine.
As your moderator, I must point out that you totally blew past the 200-700 word limit but I don't care.
I agree with r_becca, this was fluffy and delicious without being- gooey? lol I too like that Harry still has insecurities as an 18 year old, it makes him all the more endearing.
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That is absolutely adorable! It's fluffy, yes, but not over the top. The way you write Harry as insecure and perfectly teenager-y keeps him from being too saccharine.
As your moderator, I must point out that you totally blew past the 200-700 word limit but I don't care.
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*runs off, sends a "thanks for the review" note to Becca from a cave Hungaria, where she will never be found*
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Excellent, Keep up the good work!
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Not too sweet...not too fluffy. Just right. ::is content::
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