[Punishment, Part 3 (5/5)]
anonymous
May 5 2011, 05:57:13 UTC
The rest of his body was in on it now, it seemed. His free hand had returned to its previous spot lamenting his lacking chest and was rubbing, pulling, pinching on the nipple there (why? he wasn’t sure, but he admitted it felt kind of good). The hips supporting that marvelous thing were moving now, too, jerking upwards to meet his busier hand as it slammed down faster and harder along the length of the marvelous organ. His eyes were squeezed shut, his mouth wide open, his tongue very nearly hanging out-in all, an expression that he in calmer times would probably have been ashamed of.
He knew he’d recognized this feeling. He knew it from the start. It wasn’t quite as intense as the euphoria had been-but this, this sensation, felt very similar to that which had so carried him away when she had solved-
He lost his train of thought instantly.
Beautiful, smart, kind, strong, soft, curvy-dirty-the sight of her breasts rebounding as she leapt to escape his deathtraps-her rump swaying heavily from side to side as she charged through yet another round of his stupid tests-she was perfect, perfect in every way, and he wanted, he wanted… he wanted something but he couldn’t tell what it was but he knew, he knew it had everything to do with her and touching her and her softness and her hands feeling all over his body and her lips pressed up to his-to his-
His fist tightened around the straining shape as his hips bucked wildly upwards into its grip. It seemed that all of the muscles in his body tensed up as one-a loud, breathy moan escaped his lips.
“Oh, Ch-Ch-Ghh-hnnnghh-gggaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh…” his body shuddered helplessly through the waves of sensation before they abruptly ceased.
He fell back onto the bed, exhausted.
In a few moments, he braved opening his eyes-it was still there. Not as straight and in-the-way, but still somewhat swollen. And his chest was wet-no, sticky. Very sticky. He seemed to have leaked at some point during the procedure-probably there at the end, he mused-hopefully it was nothing absolutely vital. He dipped a finger into the milky white substance splashed across his chest, playing with it a bit before wiping it away with the covers. Humans really were disgusting…
He watched his newly-cleaned chest rise and fall beneath his head and reflected upon his discovery with a newly-cleared mind.
He never knew that humans could feel-that itch, and what happens if you manage to scratch it. This was certainly a different situation than having a built-in euphoria sensation triggered by test-solving, but the similarities were impossible to ignore. It was a comparison-and an activity-that he planned to fully study in the days to come (though further research was not yet possibly, he noted, after tentatively rubbing the thing and finding it reluctant to spring back to life just yet).
As something soft and heavy tugged at the corners of his mind (he’d never been sleepy before-another item to check off the list), his mind drifted back to Chell. Was she still alive out there somewhere, or had She done away with her following his transformation? He was mildly disturbed by the second outcome, and so focused on the idea that she was still alive, still out there somewhere in the facility-yeah. Yeah, she had to be.
She was strong enough to kill Her once, and to outwit him at every turn-not a difficult task, he could now admit to himself-but she was resourceful. Strong. Courageous. There wasn’t a chance she hadn’t survived that whole ordeal.
As his eyelids drooped closed, he made a resolution.
He would find her, and she’d forgive him, and they would get out-really get out this time.
He refused to entertain any other outcome.
Besides... now he had something to show her.
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That's it for the solo - thank you all so much for your amazing comments! I hope you enjoyed reading it - I certainly enjoyed writing it!
There are SO MANY good things about this fill. First and foremost, your writing style is hilarious and wonderful. There is nothing greater about porn than when it makes you laugh as well as turn you on. And you made me laugh out loud several times :] Particularly when Wheatley first discovered his erection. My goodness, it was like I had to stop at every sentence and just laugh.
Second, I am very happy that the body you gave Wheatley was a reasonable one, and not perfect or unreasonably beautiful. Imperfections are what make people attractive, in my opinion, and the description was just so... so WHEATLEY. Wonderful job with that.
Thirdly, damn, this was sexy as hell. I prefer mechanical porn for this fandom, but I really, REALLY liked this fill, so that's saying a lot from me. You did an absolutely fantastic job, and I hope you do more, and if you do, OH BOY will I be excited.
Re: [Punishment, Part 3 (5/5)]
anonymous
May 5 2011, 12:33:59 UTC
Wow. You are too good at this. Read through it several times, mouth agape. You are single handedly justifying this entire meme, and bringing me back here every day. I hope to god you continue soon. Otherwise I can still reread this a few times while we wait.
You should post this at ff.net or something. This deserves lots of readers.
Authornon here..
anonymous
May 5 2011, 20:39:58 UTC
Wow! All your comments are so incredibly nice and supportive! I'm nearly drowning in the warm fuzzies over here. You've convinced me, I'll post this (and my others) to FFnet - if only to make it easier to read (that thing I was trying to do, to make it easy to keep track of the story posts? yeah didn't work). Though FFnet is currently forcing me to wait 2 days before posting.
I have some more smut in mind in this storyline, so there will be at least two more parts, and I'm working on another prompt now too, so you haven't seen the last of me by far. I'm just a little busy for the next several days, so it might be a while before I can post it. I'll try to make it worth it!
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anonymous
May 6 2011, 08:01:33 UTC
"YAY" she yelled at her computer screen. Please do keep posting here as well, though. Don't know about other folks, but I don't visit ff.net much. I'll be checking there in a few days for your other stories, though!
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anonymous
May 7 2011, 01:52:30 UTC
Ever since finishing the game, I knew that I wanted *something* porny with these characters, but for the life of me, I couldn't figure out that would ever be and still be in character. Thank god for this kink meme and THANK GOD FOR YOU, because that was the hottest, bestest and most hilariously in character thing I HAVE EVER READ.
Please, do continue your epic fic of wonderfulness!!
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anonymous
May 10 2011, 09:23:30 UTC
Made some doodles thinking of this fic. Thought of posting but I don't know... can anybody enjoy pictures of -somebody else's- vision of not-particularly-attractive human Wheatley jerking off? Fun to draw but am suddenly shy, and I wouldn't want to mess with other people's visualization of the story.
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anonymous
May 10 2011, 15:12:14 UTC
As the writer of all this business, I'd absolutely LOVE to see your sketches! Please do post them! If anyone doesn't like it, well, they can just deal with their own inability to imagine a version they DO like.. :)
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anonymous
May 10 2011, 17:18:21 UTC
I just want to say that this fic is everything I could have wanted and more. The unattractive Wheatley is a huge YES for me because that is kinda how I imagine him anyway. (Gangly, scrawny, big nose, gap teeth, balding etc) But it's so beautifully written I could wonder if you were once a robot yourself!
He knew he’d recognized this feeling. He knew it from the start. It wasn’t quite as intense as the euphoria had been-but this, this sensation, felt very similar to that which had so carried him away when she had solved-
He lost his train of thought instantly.
Beautiful, smart, kind, strong, soft, curvy-dirty-the sight of her breasts rebounding as she leapt to escape his deathtraps-her rump swaying heavily from side to side as she charged through yet another round of his stupid tests-she was perfect, perfect in every way, and he wanted, he wanted… he wanted something but he couldn’t tell what it was but he knew, he knew it had everything to do with her and touching her and her softness and her hands feeling all over his body and her lips pressed up to his-to his-
His fist tightened around the straining shape as his hips bucked wildly upwards into its grip. It seemed that all of the muscles in his body tensed up as one-a loud, breathy moan escaped his lips.
“Oh, Ch-Ch-Ghh-hnnnghh-gggaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh…” his body shuddered helplessly through the waves of sensation before they abruptly ceased.
He fell back onto the bed, exhausted.
In a few moments, he braved opening his eyes-it was still there. Not as straight and in-the-way, but still somewhat swollen. And his chest was wet-no, sticky. Very sticky. He seemed to have leaked at some point during the procedure-probably there at the end, he mused-hopefully it was nothing absolutely vital. He dipped a finger into the milky white substance splashed across his chest, playing with it a bit before wiping it away with the covers. Humans really were disgusting…
He watched his newly-cleaned chest rise and fall beneath his head and reflected upon his discovery with a newly-cleared mind.
He never knew that humans could feel-that itch, and what happens if you manage to scratch it. This was certainly a different situation than having a built-in euphoria sensation triggered by test-solving, but the similarities were impossible to ignore. It was a comparison-and an activity-that he planned to fully study in the days to come (though further research was not yet possibly, he noted, after tentatively rubbing the thing and finding it reluctant to spring back to life just yet).
As something soft and heavy tugged at the corners of his mind (he’d never been sleepy before-another item to check off the list), his mind drifted back to Chell. Was she still alive out there somewhere, or had She done away with her following his transformation? He was mildly disturbed by the second outcome, and so focused on the idea that she was still alive, still out there somewhere in the facility-yeah. Yeah, she had to be.
She was strong enough to kill Her once, and to outwit him at every turn-not a difficult task, he could now admit to himself-but she was resourceful. Strong. Courageous. There wasn’t a chance she hadn’t survived that whole ordeal.
As his eyelids drooped closed, he made a resolution.
He would find her, and she’d forgive him, and they would get out-really get out this time.
He refused to entertain any other outcome.
Besides... now he had something to show her.
--
That's it for the solo - thank you all so much for your amazing comments! I hope you enjoyed reading it - I certainly enjoyed writing it!
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Second, I am very happy that the body you gave Wheatley was a reasonable one, and not perfect or unreasonably beautiful. Imperfections are what make people attractive, in my opinion, and the description was just so... so WHEATLEY. Wonderful job with that.
Thirdly, damn, this was sexy as hell. I prefer mechanical porn for this fandom, but I really, REALLY liked this fill, so that's saying a lot from me. You did an absolutely fantastic job, and I hope you do more, and if you do, OH BOY will I be excited.
Kudos, anon. I doff my imaginary hat to you!
(captcha says, "Tonfor man." Uh. Wat.)
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You should post this at ff.net or something. This deserves lots of readers.
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I have some more smut in mind in this storyline, so there will be at least two more parts, and I'm working on another prompt now too, so you haven't seen the last of me by far. I'm just a little busy for the next several days, so it might be a while before I can post it. I'll try to make it worth it!
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Please, do continue your epic fic of wonderfulness!!
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...I could probably get off to reading your fic if it was just about Wheatley learning to be human.
Oh GOD that was awesome, just awesome....*flops boneless*
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C'maaaaaan you tease... :3
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Now to deal with the shame.
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I can't wait to read more.
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