Prompt Post Round 2

Jun 01, 2011 12:11

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Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 14 2011, 02:30:16 UTC
Simply experimenting, Chell gave one of the wires a gentle tug before fondling the bunch with constantly shifting fingers. With his body resting in his lap the shaking he did was incredibly pleasant and she resisted the urge to spread her legs to get that sort of touch against her already worked clit. Her hand drifted from the from the wires and moved along an assortment of plugs and switches, her nails scratching over one particular port and he sparked.

She jolted, her hand yanking from his system and he groaned loudly. “Oh, bloody hell, do that again!”

Her eyes widened and she made a motion with her fingers, starting from a fist and then opening it rather quickly. “Y…Y…ew…” The sounds that she had managed to make had brought her to believe that she could possibly speak but she didn’t want to get her hopes up. Making the disconnected sounds proved to be incredibly difficult and hard against her throat. “Ssh…e-er?”

“Oh, yes, love. Pleaseplease…” There was a brief pause. “Wait did you just speak? You did, didn’t you! I heard it! Oh, that’s brilliant! Now we can talk and you can tell me things an-“ While he had been rambling, her fingers had made it back inside that rear panel and she scraped her nails over that same port and Wheatley’s voice went to static. The shaking from the core intensified and she shifted his body to the side, giving her a little more access to the opening. Her nails continued to scrape over empty plugs while she wrapped one of her fingers into the wiring and gave it a tug.

That brilliant blue light abruptly faded and Chell began to panic.
Again, her hand wrenched from his casing and she lifted him from her lap, examining the body and giving it a few good shakes. “Wh-“ her throat suddenly felt incredibly abused. “Wh-eet…” Her movements were frantic but for the life of her, she couldn’t find her voice. “L-e-eee!” It was a hoarse whisper now and she continued to shake him.

“Wheeee-t-leee.”

There was no response from the sweet core and Chell could swear that her heart was breaking. Cradling his body to her chest, she curled against him.

“OOooh! Man alive that was bloody brilliant! You made me have a short, love. Can you believe that - whoa, are you alright? You’re not leaking again are you?”

“Wheatley!” A raspy whisper, nothing more but he seemed incredibly pleased as she held onto his body in a firm embrace, kissing his sphere chassis.
The blue lighting expanded considerably. “You said… You said my name! So you could speak all along, no brain damage? Oh, yes on the brain damage? Oh... But still! Yay!” With her nod she felt that incredible warmth at her back. Her head was gently guided, turned to the side where she met hot lips and equally hot hands that cupped her cheeks.

“I am truly happy for you, love,” man-Wheatley whispered, his forehead resting against hers. He was smiling a goofy sort of smile, looking pleased and happy - it was contagious.

And when she looked down at the core in her lap, the way his shutters were partially closed and the way the blue light remained expanded, she imagined that he was smiling too.

xxxXxxxX

Thaaat is the eeeeeend.

Not gonna lie, at one point I lingered away from LJ and when I came back, all of my writing was gone. Someone needs to fix some things, dammit.

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 14 2011, 04:39:56 UTC
Not OP, but 1000 anon points to you for the wire porn. <33

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 respect_stella June 14 2011, 05:12:12 UTC
holy fuck, not even enabling anon because this is so awesome, I really don't care. Thank you, authoranon, because this is the hottest fic I've ever read. And it's so beautiful and beautifully written as well! All of my HNNNGHS! to you, you're fantastic. Wonderful work!

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 14 2011, 09:37:15 UTC
i hnng'd, i cried, i laughed, i came.

never stop writing wheatley/chell.

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 14 2011, 12:18:46 UTC
All of my kinks. ALL OF THEM. Anon, you are the best.

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 14 2011, 13:44:36 UTC
The Lazarus add-on is your best friend. I think it's on Firefox and Chrome now?

Also, I loved this fic. I'm not usually a big fan of Chell talking in fic, but you made it so natural and believable.

And of course the whole fic was pretty ridiculously hot. But you knew that already. :3

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 14 2011, 21:41:57 UTC
ohmygod you are a pure genius! this is sooo hot! and sweet!

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 16 2011, 11:08:35 UTC
Hnnnnn.
Zugh.

Uh. Ahem. Hi. Prompt-poster here. That... yes. That was exactly what I needed. So I'm going to read it again and then put it in a text file so's I can put it on my e-reader and keep it close to me always.

holy jesus that was hot

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 17 2011, 00:24:47 UTC
I'm glad!!

I am working on another prompt and then I was going to go back to my hologram stuff and do mega editing and all that.

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 17 2011, 23:22:14 UTC
This is the Other OP! And I loved, loved, LOVED THIS!! Wheatley was simultaneously breaking my heart ("If I were human...") and making it race! "Come for me, now!") This was the absolute best thing that could ever have come from that request for more virgin!Chell and experienced!Wheatley, so THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

*re-read a billion times*

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous June 19 2011, 01:47:19 UTC
WriterAnon here - and I am so very glad that you enjoyed it! :D

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 artisticdr34ms July 29 2011, 03:30:24 UTC
*saves to her iPod touch*

....I'll be in my bunk.

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Re: Hard Light 9/9 anonymous September 21 2011, 10:56:47 UTC
Sweet and hot and excellent! Thank you, OP!

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